Iss Shehar Main......!!!

by Talat on July 12, 2009, 08:34:11 PM
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«Reply #1 on: July 12, 2009, 08:40:00 PM »
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Good job Ms. Celmira
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«Reply #2 on: July 12, 2009, 08:43:51 PM »
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Wow Celmira ji,marvelous,akhri doh line bahut maza aayee.
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very nice and beautiful creation.
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«Reply #3 on: July 12, 2009, 09:20:13 PM »
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 Applause commendable work  Applause
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«Reply #4 on: July 12, 2009, 09:51:05 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Good work celmira!!
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«Reply #5 on: July 13, 2009, 01:09:49 AM »
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Ek aur behtreen Ghazal, Celmira Ji! Bahut Bahut khoob! Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: July 13, 2009, 01:17:57 AM »
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WAH TALAT JI WAH, WAH WAH WAH .....

SHEHROH SEY DOOR ABB REHNEY LAGI HAI FIDAYEH
APNA BANA KEY, TOADTEY HAI DIL, ISS SHEHAR MEH

MEETHI AWAAZ TOH SUNTEY HAI HUM, JASBIR
PAR KATEY HI MILEY HAI HAMEY, ISS SHEHAR MEH


JASBIR SINGH
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«Reply #7 on: July 13, 2009, 02:19:57 AM »
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Wooow... Lovely Ghazal Dear Celmira  Applause
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«Reply #8 on: July 13, 2009, 06:54:58 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on July 12, 2009, 08:34:11 PM

KYA BAAT HAI   CELMIRA JI.......KYA KHOOB LIKHA HAI.

AAJ KAL SOONI PAR GAYI HAI MEHFILEN, IS SHEHAR MAIN,
KI MEHIFILON MAIN,KAHAN CHALTI HAI PREM KAHANIYAAN IS SHEHAR MAIN.

MAUSAM BHI FIKE NAZAR AANE LAGE HAI,KAHAN AATI HAI AB PREM KI BAHAAR,
KI PYAAR KARNA BHOOL GAYE HAI, IS SHEHAR MAIN.

WAFA KYA HOTI HAI,SAB BHOOL GAYE HAI YAHAN,
HAR SHAKAS,BEWAFAA NIKAL TA HAI,IS SHEHAR MAIN.

ANDHKAR HI ANDHKAR HAI,PREM-GALYION MAIN,
ROSHAN DILLON KA NAAM HI NAHIN HAI, IS SHEHAR MAIN.

TANHAYION MAIN RAHETE HAI,AB HAR DIL YAHAN,
NA JAANE PHIR KAB MEHFILEN SAJEGI, IS SHEHAR MAIN.
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«Reply #9 on: July 13, 2009, 07:58:08 AM »
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Bahut Hi KHubsoorat Gazal Likhi hai aapne Talat Ji.. Lajawab Peshkash Hai aapki.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooob... !! Applause Applause


Jasbir Bhai & Cara Ji aapne bhi Behad Lajawab Alfaaz Likhe hain Doston.. :clap


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #10 on: July 13, 2009, 08:19:15 AM »
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waah Talat Ji ... bahut acche.... Kucch Arz hai.


Kehne ko to hai sab yahaan iss shehar mein
Magar tujh jasia koi kahaan iss shehar mein

Kha tha kissi ne ke yha farishte rehte hai
Mein 'taa umr dhundta rhaa iss shehar mein

Mujhe aaj bhi apne wojuud ki hai talaash
kya yeh hai waffaa ka sila iss shehar mein?

VeeraniyoN, khamoshiyoN, udasiyoN, andhiyoN ka
Shayad chalta rhega silsila iss shehar mein !!



HumTum
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«Reply #11 on: July 13, 2009, 02:10:18 PM »
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gr8 sharing
hun tum hello
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«Reply #12 on: July 13, 2009, 05:47:45 PM »
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subhan allah talat bahen kya qoob ghazal likhi hai apne dil ko chuke guzri ye kalam apki wah bhai hazaro karodo dad qubool kariyega ..kya hi qoob dard bayan kiya hai apne hum biti lagti hai bhai wah !!allah apko khush rakhe !!

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«Reply #13 on: July 13, 2009, 05:50:59 PM »
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Quote from: HumTum on July 13, 2009, 08:19:15 AM
waah Talat Ji ... bahut acche.... Kucch Arz hai.


Kehne ko to hai sab yahaan iss shehar mein
Magar tujh jasia koi kahaan iss shehar mein

Kha tha kissi ne ke yha farishte rehte hai
Mein 'taa umr dhundta rhaa iss shehar mein

Mujhe aaj bhi apne wojuud ki hai talaash
kya yeh hai waffaa ka sila iss shehar mein?

VeeraniyoN, khamoshiyoN, udasiyoN, andhiyoN ka
Shayad chalta rhega silsila iss shehar mein !!



HumTum



bahoth qoob humtum sahab hamesha se hi umda likhte ho app .. allah apko khush rakhe !!

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«Reply #14 on: July 13, 2009, 06:29:49 PM »
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Quote from: MHussain on July 12, 2009, 08:40:00 PM
Good job Ms. Celmira

Thanks a lot Hussain Sahab
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