Iss Shehar Main......!!!

by Talat on July 12, 2009, 08:34:11 PM
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«Reply #120 on: August 03, 2009, 12:23:52 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on August 01, 2009, 10:59:47 AM
Celmira ji,Prateek ji,Hum Tum ji,Pop ji.Khwaish ji,bahut khoob.
aap sabne bahut hi acha likha,mindblowing,excellent. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thanks a lot Madhu
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«Reply #121 on: August 03, 2009, 12:28:41 PM »
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Quote from: thegrimreaper on August 01, 2009, 01:34:03 PM
unda sahayari celmira ji

Quote from: thegrimreaper on August 02, 2009, 05:00:17 PM

wah wah Celmira ji
paankitiyon ki JugalBandhi to koi aap se seekhe
aise piroya maano ek ek labz mala ka moti ho

Thanks so much Reaper Ji for following this thread and for your lovely appreciation...Thanks so much  icon_flower
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«Reply #122 on: August 03, 2009, 12:30:45 PM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on August 02, 2009, 05:05:06 PM

Celmira Ji---Aap ne kamaal kar diya hai in panno mein aur taareef ke alfaaz bhee laghu nazar aane lage hai shabdkosh mein.
Tahedil se badhai.


Thank You so much Prateek Ji, you are yourself a great poet and an appreciation from you means a lot to me....Thanks a lot for your presence in this thread  notworthy notworthy
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«Reply #123 on: August 03, 2009, 12:32:02 PM »
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Quote from: thegrimreaper on August 02, 2009, 05:08:43 PM

wah wah Hum Tum ji yeh pankitiyon dil chu jaati hain

Issi pe Arz kiya hai

"chahe hazaaron gum ho Iss shehear mein"
"chahe bewafaaon ka saath ho Iss shehar mein"

"par mili kuch Khushiyaan Iss shehar mein"
"Kuch yaadien hain piroyi Iss shehar mein"

"Jiye bas Jiye to hum Iss shehar mein"
"Mar bhi jayenge to chahenge bane hamari Kabr sirf Issi sheher mein...."



 Applause Applause Applause

Bohot khoob Reaper Ji...aur bohot khoobsurat ehsaas..... icon_thumleft
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«Reply #124 on: August 03, 2009, 12:33:24 PM »
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Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on August 03, 2009, 11:56:32 AM
Waah.. Waah.. Waah.. Celmira ji zabardast..... Applause Applause Applause
Bohot umda or kamaal ke ash'ar hain aap ke.

Bohot bohot shukriya Sayyid iss hausla afzaai ka..... Bas yunhi himmat badhate rahen....Tah-e-dil se shukriya...
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«Reply #125 on: August 03, 2009, 02:21:28 PM »
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Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on August 03, 2009, 12:11:02 PM
Waah. khwaish bhai waah... bohot achhe.. yunhi dhoom machate rahiye iss shehar main..  Applause Applause Applause

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Randeri Saheb Aapka.. icon_salut
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«Reply #126 on: August 03, 2009, 02:24:32 PM »
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Quote from: poppoetry on August 01, 2009, 10:04:45 AM
Celmira ji,Khwaish ji,Humtum ji,Prateek ji...aap sabne kai aisi baatein likhi hai jin par shayad bahut kam socha jaata hai....khuch gehri baatein...bahut khub...salute to all of u... icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut

bahut accha lga yha aap sabko padhkar....aur bahut khuch samajhne ko aur janne ko mila...bahut khuch sikhne ko bhi mila yha...chand alfaaz likhne ki koshish ki hai..


Kai manjilen aur manjil tak pahuchne k raaste hai iss shehar mein
Chaho to sab khuch hai,varna khuch bhi nahi hai iss shehar mein

Sach-juth,galat-sahi ko kis taraju me taule koi
Gum aur khushi dono hi mile hai,har kisi ko iss shehar mein

Ek hi baat ko har koi apni apni tarah se kehta hai
Har kisi ka apna ek alag hi najariya hai iss shehar mein
Aur kya kahe doston.....
Din din hi hai aur raat bhi raat hai iss shehar mein....


Bahut Bahut Khoob Pooja.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

And Thanks A Million For Appreciating.. icon_flower
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«Reply #127 on: August 03, 2009, 02:27:33 PM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on August 02, 2009, 05:05:06 PM
Shukriya Madhuwesh ji, Celmira ji, Khwaish Ji, Poppetry ji, Aapne meri tukbandi ka Hausla Badhaaya.

Khwaish Bhai---Aapne itna khoob saath diya hai aur itni behtareen rachnaaye rakhi hai ki dil gadgad hai.




bahut Bahut Shukriya Prateekji..Aap Jaise Shayar Saath Ho to Hum Bhi Kuch na Kuch likh Hi Lete hai..Hausle-Afzaai Ke Liye Teh Dil se Shukriya Prateekji.. icon_salut
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«Reply #128 on: August 03, 2009, 02:33:29 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on August 03, 2009, 12:32:02 PM
Applause Applause Applause

Bohot khoob Reaper Ji...aur bohot khoobsurat ehsaas..... icon_thumleft

shukriya Celmira Ji,isliye aapke liye

"Dhund rahe the ek ummed ki kiran Iss shehar mein
Ek 'talat' thi ashkon ki aabro mein, sun li gayi dua Iss shehar mein"
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«Reply #129 on: August 03, 2009, 02:47:10 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on July 31, 2009, 02:36:07 PM
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Bohot bohot Khoob Dost...Sach hai na jaane kab saansain tham jaayen, ye safar tham jaaye..........

Koi Shikwa Kisi Se Na Raha Iss Shehar Main,
Karen Ab Aur Kya Hum Gila Iss Shehar Main

Khamoshiyon Ki Zubaan Woh Samajhte Nahin,
Hum Ne Bhi Kisi Se Kuch Na Kaha Iss Shehar Main

Mujrim Bana Diya Hai Mujhe Mere Hi Alfaaz Ne,
Aur Kuch Mera Bhi Tha Sir Jhuka Iss Shehar Main

Humne Hi Chorh Di Wo Mehfilain, Thak Haar Ke,
Behtar Hai Main Rahun Ab Tanha Iss Shehar Main

Dekho Talat Hain Aur Bhi, Ek Bas Tum Hi Nahin,
Har Dil Main Ek Tees Hai, Ek Dard Chupa Iss Shehar Main

Bahut Bahut Khoob Dost!!! Ab To Naye Alfaaz Dhoondne Padenge Iss Shehar mein!! tongue3

Once Again Beautiful one By you.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Shikwa Karna Bhi Chaaho To kisse Karoge
Iss Shehar mein
Apno Ki Rafakat Mein bhi Basi Tanhai Hai,
Iss Sheher mein..

Jaan-Bujhkar Kisi Ki Khamoshi Ko,
Gar Koi Kamzori Samjhe!!
Uss Shaks Se Ab Aur Kya umeed Rakh Paaoge,
Iss Shehar mein...

Ab to yeh Haal Hai ke Alfaazo Mein Hi Keh Di,
Humne Apni Dastaan-E-Zindagi!!
Bas Ab Kuch Bikhri Hui Yaadon Ko Sametna Hai
Iss Shehar mein....

Jab uss Mehfil Se Ruswa Hokar
Uthe The, Jo Tere Yeh Kadam,
Bahut Aankhon Royi Thi,
Iss Shehar Mein....

Bekahabar Hoon Main Bhi Ab Apne Hi Dard Se!!!
"Khwaish" Kaun Ab Apni Kahbar Rakhe Iss Shehar mein...
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«Reply #130 on: August 03, 2009, 02:50:19 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on August 03, 2009, 02:47:10 PM
Bahut Bahut Khoob Dost!!! Ab To Naye Alfaaz Dhondne Padenge Iss Shehar mein!! tongue3

Once Again Beautiful one By you.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Shikwa Karna Bhi Chaaho To kisse Karoge
Iss Shehar mein
Apno Ki Rafakat Mein bhi Basi Tanhai Hai,
Iss Sheher mein..

Jaan-Bujhkar Kisi Ki Khamoshi Ko,
Gar Koi Kamzori Samjhe!!
Uss Shaks Se Ab Aur Kya umeed Rakh Paaoge,
Iss Shehar mein...

Ab to yeh Haal Hai ke Alfaazo Mein Hi Keh Di,
Humne Apni Dastaan-E-Zindagi!!
Bas Ab Kuch Bikhri Hui Yaadon Ko Sametna Hai
Iss Shehar mein....

Jab uss Mehfil Se Ruswa Hokar
Uthe The, Jo Tere Yeh Kadam,
Bahut Aankhon Royi Thi,
Iss Shehar Mein....

Bekahabar Hoon Main Ab Apne Hi Dard Se!!!
"Khwaish" Kaun Ab Apni Kahbar Rakhe Iss Shehar mein...

wonderful lines especially the way of ending khwahish ji

Applause Applause

aapke liye

Aaye hain yahan, khwahishon se sajje Iss sheher mein
Bas "khwahish" ki khwahish hi poori ho Iss shehar mein
Yehi Khwahish hai humaari, Iss khwahison ke shehar mein
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«Reply #131 on: August 05, 2009, 12:16:56 PM »
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Quote from: thegrimreaper on August 03, 2009, 02:33:29 PM
shukriya Celmira Ji,isliye aapke liye

"Dhund rahe the ek ummed ki kiran Iss shehar mein
Ek 'talat' thi ashkon ki aabro mein, sun li gayi dua Iss shehar mein"

Thanks a lot Reaper Ji for this couplet for me  Usual Smile

"Talat" Ke Fasane Kahin Kho Gaye Iss Shehar Main,
Yaadon Ke Khandhar Hi Bas Reh Gaye Iss Shehar Main
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«Reply #132 on: August 05, 2009, 01:38:45 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on August 03, 2009, 02:47:10 PM
Bahut Bahut Khoob Dost!!! Ab To Naye Alfaaz Dhoondne Padenge Iss Shehar mein!! tongue3

Once Again Beautiful one By you.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Shikwa Karna Bhi Chaaho To kisse Karoge
Iss Shehar mein
Apno Ki Rafakat Mein bhi Basi Tanhai Hai,
Iss Sheher mein..

Jaan-Bujhkar Kisi Ki Khamoshi Ko,
Gar Koi Kamzori Samjhe!!
Uss Shaks Se Ab Aur Kya umeed Rakh Paaoge,
Iss Shehar mein...

Ab to yeh Haal Hai ke Alfaazo Mein Hi Keh Di,
Humne Apni Dastaan-E-Zindagi!!
Bas Ab Kuch Bikhri Hui Yaadon Ko Sametna Hai
Iss Shehar mein....

Jab uss Mehfil Se Ruswa Hokar
Uthe The, Jo Tere Yeh Kadam,
Bahut Aankhon Royi Thi,
Iss Shehar Mein....

Bekahabar Hoon Main Bhi Ab Apne Hi Dard Se!!!
"Khwaish" Kaun Ab Apni Kahbar Rakhe Iss Shehar mein...



Bohot Bohot Khoob Khwaish Dost....Sach kaha ki ab to naye lafz dhoondne padenge iss shehar main....par pata nahin iss thread main kya baat hai ki yahan qalam rukne ko nahin aa raha tongue3



Apne Saaye Se Bhi Hui Wehshat Iss Shehar Main,
Maangta Ab Dil Nahin Rafaaqat Iss Shehar Main

Hum Raaste Se Hat Gaye, Gar Ye Unhe Manzoor Tha,
Shayad Ab Ho Mayassa Unko Raahat Iss Shehar Main

Ae Wahshat-e-Dil Hum To Aaye The Yahan Sab Bhool Kar,
Lekin Wohi Tamasha Hai, Wohi Siyasat Iss Shehar Main

Toote Hue Hain Lekin Ab Jaayen To Jaayen Kahan,
Dil Ke Qareeb Hai, Ho Laakh Raqaabat Iss Shehar Main !!
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«Reply #133 on: August 05, 2009, 05:05:19 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on August 05, 2009, 12:16:56 PM
Thanks a lot Reaper Ji for this couplet for me  Usual Smile

"Talat" Ke Fasane Kahin Kho Gaye Iss Shehar Main,
Yaadon Ke Khandhar Hi Bas Reh Gaye Iss Shehar Main



kya khoob likha hai Celmira ji
kehna padega kuch panktiyaan kabhi kabhi zehan pe ek chaap chod jaati hain

aur , " Iss shehar mein" ka nazrana un mein se ek hai Applause
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«Reply #134 on: August 07, 2009, 11:48:04 AM »
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Quote from: thegrimreaper on August 05, 2009, 05:05:19 PM
kya khoob likha hai Celmira ji
kehna padega kuch panktiyaan kabhi kabhi zehan pe ek chaap chod jaati hain

aur , " Iss shehar mein" ka nazrana un mein se ek hai Applause

Thanks so much Reaper Ji  icon_flower
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