Iss Shehar Main......!!!

by Talat on July 12, 2009, 08:34:11 PM
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«Reply #15 on: July 14, 2009, 06:02:38 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on July 12, 2009, 08:34:11 PM


Bahut Bahut Bahut Khoooob Dost!!!

Har Ek As'haar Lajawab,bahut Hi Gehre Aur Dil Ko Chune Wale..

Bahut Ache Dost!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #16 on: July 14, 2009, 07:14:27 AM »
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Wah beautiful lines Jasbir ji and Cara ji. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #17 on: July 14, 2009, 10:01:52 AM »
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Wow Celmira ji,marvelous,akhri doh line bahut maza aayee.
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very nice and beautiful creation.

Thanks so much Madhu dear
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«Reply #18 on: July 14, 2009, 01:10:20 PM »
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Quote from: thegrimreaper on July 12, 2009, 09:20:13 PM
Applause commendable work  Applause

Thanks so much Usual Smile
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«Reply #19 on: July 14, 2009, 01:25:08 PM »
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Wah beautiful lines Jasbir ji and Cara ji. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

thanks madhu ji

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«Reply #20 on: July 14, 2009, 05:07:11 PM »
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Mashallah Bohat Achcha Kalaam LIkha Hai Talat Sis,.
And Nice One Humtum JI, And Kaash Bhai,.
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«Reply #21 on: July 14, 2009, 06:46:20 PM »
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Quote from: cara on July 13, 2009, 06:54:58 AM
KYA BAAT HAI   CELMIRA JI.......KYA KHOOB LIKHA HAI.

AAJ KAL SOONI PAR GAYI HAI MEHFILEN, IS SHEHAR MAIN,
KI MEHIFILON MAIN,KAHAN CHALTI HAI PREM KAHANIYAAN IS SHEHAR MAIN.

MAUSAM BHI FIKE NAZAR AANE LAGE HAI,KAHAN AATI HAI AB PREM KI BAHAAR,
KI PYAAR KARNA BHOOL GAYE HAI, IS SHEHAR MAIN.

WAFA KYA HOTI HAI,SAB BHOOL GAYE HAI YAHAN,
HAR SHAKAS,BEWAFAA NIKAL TA HAI,IS SHEHAR MAIN.

ANDHKAR HI ANDHKAR HAI,PREM-GALYION MAIN,
ROSHAN DILLON KA NAAM HI NAHIN HAI, IS SHEHAR MAIN.

TANHAYION MAIN RAHETE HAI,AB HAR DIL YAHAN,
NA JAANE PHIR KAB MEHFILEN SAJEGI, IS SHEHAR MAIN.






Bahut Khoob Caraji..

Bahut Acha Likha Hai Aapne.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Aur bahut bahut Khoob Kaashji Aur Humtum Ji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #22 on: July 14, 2009, 07:03:43 PM »
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Talat Dost ,Ek Koshsih kar rahahoon Ke Kuch Likh Sakoon..Umeed Karta Hoon,Aapko Aur Sabko Yeh Koshish Pasand Aaye..


Aadmi Aadmi Ka Hi Dushman Hai Iss Shehar Mein,
Kuch Ajeeb Sa Manzar Hai Iss Shehar Mein...

Yeh Jhoot Hi Hai Gar Koi Kahen,Ke "Yahan Main Sab Ko Jaanta Hoon!!!"
Har Apna Bhi Ajnabi Sa Hai Iss Shehar Mein....

Insaan Ki Khoobiyon ki Yahan Koi Pehchaan Nahi,
Par Paiso Ki Badi Kadar Hai Iss Shehar Mein....

Meri Soch Uski Soch se Bahut Alag Hai,
Uski Soch Bhi Meri Soch se, Sabki Apni-Apni Soch Hai Iss Shehar Mein....

Main Jo Hoon,Bas Wahin Hoon,Main Waqt Ke Mutaabik Apne Rang Badalta Nahi,
Jo Log Aaj Idhar The,Kal Udhar Hai,Iss Shehar Mein....

Yeh Baat Sach Hai ke Har Insaan Darta hai Apni Hi Tanhaai Se!!!
Par "Khwaish" Mehfilo Mein Bhi Bhari Kyon Tanhaiyan Hai Iss Shehar Mein???
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«Reply #23 on: July 14, 2009, 07:11:40 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on July 14, 2009, 07:03:43 PM
Talat Dost ,Ek Koshsih ki Hai Kuch likhne Ki
,Umeed Karta Hoon,Aapko Aur Sabko Pasand Aaye..


Aadmi Aadmi Ka Hi Dushman Hai Iss Shehar Mein,
Kuch Ajeeb Sa Manzar Hai Iss Shehar Mein...

Yeh Jhoot Hi Hai Gar Koi Kahen,Ke "Yahan Main Sab Ko Jaanta Hoon!!!"
Har Apna Bhi Ajnabi Sa Hai Iss Shehar Mein....

Insaan Ki Khoobiyon ki Yahan Koi Pehchaan Nahi,
Par Paiso Ki Badi Kadar Hai Iss Shehar Mein....

Meri Soch Uski Soch se Bahut Alag Hai,
Uski Soch Bhi Meri Soch se, Sabki Apni-Apni Soch Hai Iss Shehar Mein....

Main Jo Hoon,Bas Wahin Hoon,Main Waqt Ke Mutaabik Apne Rang Badalta Nahi,
Jo Log Aaj Idhar The,Kal Udhar Hai,Iss Shehar Mein....

Yeh Baat Sach Hai ke Har Insaan Darta hai Apni Hi Tanhaai Se!!!
Par "Khwaish" Mehfilo Mein Bhi Bhari Tanhaiyan Hai Iss Shehar Mein....


Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahoot suchi baat kahin Khwaish ji!!Good creation!!

kahne ko bahoot apne, per koi nahi apna
yah jaan liya humne, ajj tere shehar main

sochein hai apni, zindagi bhi hai apni
kalam bhi chale khud se, ab to tere shehar main

kahe bhi to kise apna, ajeeb tamasha hai
de de agar khud hath, jhatak dete hai rishta, tere shehar main

kahne ko bahoot apne, per koi nahi apna
yah jaan liya humne, ajj tere shehar main
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«Reply #24 on: July 14, 2009, 08:22:32 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on July 12, 2009, 09:51:05 PM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Good work celmira!!

Thanks Pooja Ji
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«Reply #25 on: July 14, 2009, 08:22:58 PM »
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Quote from: Deepati on July 13, 2009, 01:09:49 AM
Ek aur behtreen Ghazal, Celmira Ji! Bahut Bahut khoob! Applause Applause

Thanks so much Deepati dear
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«Reply #26 on: July 14, 2009, 08:26:10 PM »
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Quote from: jasbirsingh on July 13, 2009, 01:17:57 AM
WAH TALAT JI WAH, WAH WAH WAH .....

SHEHROH SEY DOOR ABB REHNEY LAGI HAI FIDAYEH
APNA BANA KEY, TOADTEY HAI DIL, ISS SHEHAR MEH

MEETHI AWAAZ TOH SUNTEY HAI HUM, JASBIR
PAR KATEY HI MILEY HAI HAMEY, ISS SHEHAR MEH


JASBIR SINGH

Thanks so much Jasbir Ji...bohot sach kaha aapne Jasbir Ji..

Dil Main Kuch Rakhte Hain, Kuch Aur Dikhaate Hain
Iss Shehar Ke Log Jeene Ka Naya Dhang Batate Hain
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«Reply #27 on: July 14, 2009, 08:26:46 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on July 13, 2009, 02:19:57 AM
Wooow... Lovely Ghazal Dear Celmira  Applause

Thanks a lot Roja dear
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«Reply #28 on: July 14, 2009, 08:29:25 PM »
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Quote from: cara on July 13, 2009, 06:54:58 AM
KYA BAAT HAI   CELMIRA JI.......KYA KHOOB LIKHA HAI.

AAJ KAL SOONI PAR GAYI HAI MEHFILEN, IS SHEHAR MAIN,
KI MEHIFILON MAIN,KAHAN CHALTI HAI PREM KAHANIYAAN IS SHEHAR MAIN.

MAUSAM BHI FIKE NAZAR AANE LAGE HAI,KAHAN AATI HAI AB PREM KI BAHAAR,
KI PYAAR KARNA BHOOL GAYE HAI, IS SHEHAR MAIN.

WAFA KYA HOTI HAI,SAB BHOOL GAYE HAI YAHAN,
HAR SHAKAS,BEWAFAA NIKAL TA HAI,IS SHEHAR MAIN.

ANDHKAR HI ANDHKAR HAI,PREM-GALYION MAIN,
ROSHAN DILLON KA NAAM HI NAHIN HAI, IS SHEHAR MAIN.

TANHAYION MAIN RAHETE HAI,AB HAR DIL YAHAN,
NA JAANE PHIR KAB MEHFILEN SAJEGI, IS SHEHAR MAIN.


Thank You Cara....aur bohot bohot khoob  Applause


Khud Dete Hain Chot, Log Khud Hi Marham Lagate Hain,
Masihaayi Ka Naya Hunar Dikhaate Hain Iss Shehar Main
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«Reply #29 on: July 14, 2009, 08:30:08 PM »
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Quote from: Mann on July 13, 2009, 07:58:08 AM
Bahut Hi KHubsoorat Gazal Likhi hai aapne Talat Ji.. Lajawab Peshkash Hai aapki.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooob... !! Applause Applause


Jasbir Bhai & Cara Ji aapne bhi Behad Lajawab Alfaaz Likhe hain Doston.. :clap


**~** Mann **~**

Thanks a lot Vicky, aap ko ye ghazal pasand aayi
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