Iss Shehar Main......!!!

by Talat on July 12, 2009, 08:34:11 PM
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«Reply #45 on: July 15, 2009, 01:13:04 PM »
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Quote from: HumTum on July 15, 2009, 09:12:58 AM
Talat Ji...


Jane kyun khicha aaya iss shehar mein
Aa kar bas dard paya iss shehar mein

Tujh se ishq karne ka yeh sila mila   
Har kissi ne rulaya iss shehar mein!!


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Aa Ke Phir Jaane Ki Na Karo Baat Iss Shehar Main,
Maana Ki Hain Muhskil Bohot Haalaat Iss Shehar Main

Nayi Subah Aayegi, Is Ghum-e-Hijraan Ke Baad,
Armaanon Ki Niklegi Baraat Iss Shehar Main
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«Reply #46 on: July 15, 2009, 01:27:30 PM »
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Badi sunder rachna hai aapki....
Dil ko chhu lene wali lines hain..
"ROSHNI KE RAASTO KE GUL HUYE SAB CHIRAG
 Gul bhi berang hai,hai khizaaon se bahar"
Daad kabul keejjeeye... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Ye kaisa daur hai is shehar mai
Diwali mai diye nahi jale
Holi mai rang nahi khile
Barish mai barshi tou bus akhiyen barsi

Quote from: Celmira on July 12, 2009, 08:34:11 PM
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«Reply #47 on: July 15, 2009, 01:29:50 PM »
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Dil ne puakara hai tera naam iss shehar mein
Magar aaya na tera koi Salaam iss shehar mein

Woh tere ahd, ahd they yaa tha shalava koi
Hum aa kar ho gaye bad'gumaaN iss shehar mein !!


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«Reply #48 on: July 15, 2009, 03:32:21 PM »
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Classical style of ghazal, Celmira Ji
Aisi ghazal likhne ke liye badi efficiency chahiye
Very well done
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«Reply #49 on: July 15, 2009, 03:41:10 PM »
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tu achhi hai sunder or jawan hai tujh pe udashi achhi nahi lagti
teri mirg jaisi naina, hirni jaise chaal tujh pay sarfat achhi nahi lagti
tu jaan hai hazaron ki tu raani hai baharon ki, tri gumnami acchhi nahi lagti
naa ho udash apni jindgi se, tujh se hai payar sabhee ka too kishi aik ki ho achhi lagti
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«Reply #50 on: July 15, 2009, 04:41:27 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on July 14, 2009, 08:57:53 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bohot bohot khoob Dost.... bohot gehri baatain likh di aapne ..... Bohot pasand aayi aapki ye koshish....lajawab hai  Dost....Inshallah aapki is post ka lamba jawab zaroor dungi Khwaish.....abhi ke liye sirfk ye sher likh rahi hoon......


Ek Ajeeb Sa Manzar Nazar Aata Hai, Iss Shehar Main,
Qaatil Ke Bhes Main Masiha Dikhta Hai, Iss Shehar Main

Kis Ko Kahen Hum Apna, Kis Ko Maane Hum Dilnawaz,
Chehre Pe Chehra Har Shakhs Rakhta Hai Iss Shehar Main

Bahut Bahut Khoob Dost!!!  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Aur Teh Dil Se Shukriya Aapka Jo Aapne Itni Izzat Bakshi Hai...Aapko yeh Koshish pasand Aayi,Yeh Jaankar Bahut Khushi Hui Hai..Shukriya Dost icon_flower
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«Reply #51 on: July 15, 2009, 04:44:15 PM »
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Wah... good going...Talat, Sarvesh Rastogi ji,  Humtum.., Naamaloom ji   
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«Reply #52 on: July 15, 2009, 04:56:01 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on July 15, 2009, 01:09:24 PM

Khwaish Dost, ek baar phir se daad qubool karen...Bohot bohot khoob  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Kal ek alag mood tha..aaj kuch aur mood main likhne ki koshish ki hai.....


Maana Ki Nazar Aata Hai Dushman, Aadmi Iss Shehar Main,
Kuch Insaaniyan Hai Ab Bhi Baaqi Iss Shehar Main

Wo Deewarain Phir Gir Jaayengi, Jo Darmiyaan Hain,
Ban Jaayenge Apne Jo Hain Ajnabi Iss Shehar Main

Har Soch Alag Ho To Bhi Kya Ghum Hai Ae Dost,
Bas Anjaam Har Soch Ka Ho Bhalai Iss Shehar Main

Mil Jaayen Dil, Ho Door Hasad Ek Doosre Ki Janib Se,
Dua Tah-e-Dil Se Humne Hai Maangi, Iss Shehar Main


Bahut Bahut Bahut Khoooob Talat!!! Bahut Hi Jazbaati Aur Dil Ki Gehrai mein Utar Jaane wali Baatein Ki Hai Aapne..
Bahut Ache Dost.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Aadmi Aadmi Hi Rahe To Behtar Hai iss Shehar Mein
Varna Kuch Bhi Nahi Hai Haasil iss Shehar Mein...

Zakhm-E-Ruswai Ki Baatein Bahut Ho Chuki!!!
Kabhi To Koi Ajnabi Ko Bhi,Apne Gale Lagaye Iss Shehar Mein....

Rahe Khuluus,Mohabbat Dilon Mein Zinda To Veeraniyon Mein Bhi Mehfile Hai,
Gham To Bahut Door Ki Baat hai!!!Kisi Ki Khushi mein Hi sahi,
Par Koi To Muskuraye Iss Shehar Mein....

"Khwaish" Kehta Hai Ke Zindagi To Sirf Chaar Din Ki Hai!!!!
Naa jaane!! Kaun, kab, Kahan Bichad jaaye iss Shehar Mein
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«Reply #53 on: July 15, 2009, 04:57:52 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on July 15, 2009, 04:56:01 PM
Bahut Bahut Bahut Khoooob Talat!!! Bahut Hi Jazbaati Aur Dil Ki Gehrai mein Utar Jaane wali Baatein Ki Hai Aapne..
Bahut Ache Dost.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Aadmi Aadmi Hi Rahe To Behtar Hai iss Shehar Mein
Varna Kuch Bhi Nahi Hai Haasil iss Shehar Mein...

Zakhm-E-Ruswai Ki Baatein Bahut Ho Chuki!!!
Kabhi To Koi Ajnabi Ko Bhi,Apne Gale Lagaye Iss Shehar Mein....

Rahe Khuluus,Mohabbat Dilon Mein Zinda To Veeraniyon Mein Bhi Mehfile Hai,
Gham To Bahut Door Ki Baat hai!!!Kisi Ki Khushi mein Hi sahi,
Par Koi To Muskuraye Iss Shehar Mein....

"Khwaish" Kehta Hai Ke Zindagi To Sirf Chaar Din Ki Hai!!!!
Naa jaane!! Kaun, kab, Kahan Bichad jaaye iss Shehar Mein

Wah wah bhaiya.... bahut accha likha hai...  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #54 on: July 16, 2009, 06:39:14 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on July 12, 2009, 08:34:11 PM



bahut khoob
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«Reply #55 on: July 16, 2009, 06:40:54 PM »
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Waah ji Waah......kya baat hai. ...sabne itna khub likha hai aur itni raunak lagayi hui hai yha ki kya kahe.....Celmira ji aapse kya kahu.... icon_salut
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

jinhone bhi yha par likha hai....bahut khub likha hai...
sabke liye...... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #56 on: July 17, 2009, 12:31:57 PM »
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Quote from: smardia on July 15, 2009, 01:27:30 PM
Badi sunder rachna hai aapki....
Dil ko chhu lene wali lines hain..
"ROSHNI KE RAASTO KE GUL HUYE SAB CHIRAG
 Gul bhi berang hai,hai khizaaon se bahar"
Daad kabul keejjeeye... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Ye kaisa daur hai is shehar mai
Diwali mai diye nahi jale
Holi mai rang nahi khile
Barish mai barshi tou bus akhiyen barsi


Bohot bohot shukriya Smardia Ji aapne is ghazal ko pasand kiya....thanks so much Usual Smile

Nice one from you too  Applause Applause

Kuch Ajab Si Khamoshiyan Chaayi Hain Iss Shehar Main,
Na Rang Utra Bahaar Ka, Na Titliyaan Aayi Hain Iss Shehar Main

Poocha Jo Maine Hawaaon Se, Akhir Ye Maajra Hai Kya
Kuch Bhooli Hui Si Daastaanain Sunayi Hain, Iss Shehar Main
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«Reply #57 on: July 17, 2009, 12:35:24 PM »
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Quote from: HumTum on July 15, 2009, 01:29:50 PM


Dil ne puakara hai tera naam iss shehar mein
Magar aaya na tera koi Salaam iss shehar mein

Woh tere ahd, ahd they yaa tha shalava koi
Hum aa kar ho gaye bad'gumaaN iss shehar mein !!


HumTum



Bohot Khoob Hum Tum

Bujh Chuki Hai Dil Ki Har Awaaz Iss Shehar Main,
Na Koi Naghma Hai Na Saaz Iss Shehar Main

Kis Ko Kahen Hum Apna, Ki Har Chehra Hai Begaana Sa,
Na Humnawa Hai Koi Na Humraaz Iss Shehar Main
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«Reply #58 on: July 17, 2009, 12:52:22 PM »
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Yun To Raha Carwaan Bhi, Raasta Bhi, Saathi Bhi Mere,.
Mujhe Hi Nizbat Kuch Zyada Reh Gayi, Is Shehar Se Tere,.

Main Hi Ek Tanha Tha, Jiska Ghar Jalkar Bhi Roshni Na De Saka,.
Mujhse Judi Har Cheez KO Jakard Chuke Meri Kismat Ke Andhere,.

Azeem,.
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«Reply #59 on: July 17, 2009, 02:14:27 PM »
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Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on July 15, 2009, 03:32:21 PM
Classical style of ghazal, Celmira Ji
Aisi ghazal likhne ke liye badi efficiency chahiye
Very well done

Thanks so much Sarvesh Ji  notworthy notworthy notworthy

It's an honour to get such a comment from a great & senior poet like you. Thanks so much.
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