Iss Shehar Main......!!!

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«Reply #90 on: July 31, 2009, 03:40:33 AM »
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Ghazlon ke in panno pur tukbandi ki zurrat kar raha hu 'is shaher mein'....Shaher ke logon se maafi ka haqdaar hu.




Haath bhee wo  berukhi se milaate hein ub
Garmjoshi se gale lage they jo is shaher  mein


Baithein kahan aur kis-se haalat pur charche kare
Mere gaanv ke peepal nahi hai is shaher mein


Tum poochtey ho hur baat pur yeh ‘tarq’ kyon
Is’ tarkeeb’ ko seekha hai humne is shaher mein


Jaane kitne dilon ko toda, aur jazbaaton se khele hai hum
Anaadi se khilaadi bun chuke hai is shaher mein


Hur baat pur baukhlaana aur chillana ub laazmi hai
Tarrannum ki baatein ub rehne bhee do is shaher mein!


Daudta hur shaqs milega budhawaasi aur behaali mein yahan
Jubki jaanta hai uski manzil nahi hai is shaher mein!


Jisko dekho hai khafa is baat pur ya us baat pur
Sochta hi reh gaya main,kis-se ruthoon is shaher mein


Kin-kin tohmaton ki safai dete rahoge umra bhur
Jo gunaah sochey nahi unkey bhee ilzaam sur pur is shaher mein!


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«Reply #91 on: July 31, 2009, 03:54:46 AM »
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Wah wah Prateek ji,mindblowing gazal ,really nice and beautiful creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #92 on: July 31, 2009, 06:12:53 AM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on July 29, 2009, 03:01:51 AM
Khawish bhai,

Vaakai aapka andaaz ,aapki lekhni ,aapki soch sabhi ke paas honi chahiye is shaher mein....jub likha hai aapne tub poori imaandaari barti hai...aapke sher padhta kum hu-mehsoos jyada karta hu.aapki likhi hur baat aatma ko kachoti hain..hume swayam ko apne girebaan mein dekhna ka sandesh sujhaati hai!Aap vaakai ek imaandaar kalamkaar hai,aapko in rachnao ke liye dhero shubhkaamnaaye.


 Applause Applause Applause Applause

Prateek Ji, Bahut Bahut Shukriya Aapka,Jo Aapne Itna Kuch ke Diya..

Aap Yakeenan Mere Sabse Pasandida Shayaro Mein Ek Ho,Aur Jab Aapse Kuch Suunta Hoon to Yakeen Maniye,Bahut Khush Ho Jaata Hoon,Aapne Humesha Saa Mera Hausla Badhaya Hai,Ke main Kuch Aur Behtar Likh Sakoon...

Teh Dil Se Shukriya Aapka Jo Aapne Itni Baarikiyon Se Mere Har Kalaam Ko padha Hai.. icon_salut

Thankyou Sooooooooooo Much.. notworthy notworthy notworthy
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«Reply #93 on: July 31, 2009, 06:14:40 AM »
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Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on July 30, 2009, 08:20:38 PM
Khwaish ji Celmira ji zabardast likha hai aap hazaraat ne.

HumTum ji, bohot kam waqt aata hun, or zyada padh nahi pata... zabardast likhte hain aap, aakhri ghazal to bohot hi kamaal hai, allah kare zor-e-sukhan or zayada...

Teh Dil Se Aapka Shukriya Randeri Saheb!!  icon_salut
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«Reply #94 on: July 31, 2009, 06:16:34 AM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on July 31, 2009, 03:28:28 AM

Thokaren Kha Kar Bhi Jiye Jaayenge Iss Shehar Main,
Toote Tinko Se Aashiyaan Banayenge Iss Shehar Main

Nafraton Ke Teer Chalte Hain Agar To Chalne Do,
Muskurate Hue Har Zakhm Khaayenge Iss Shehar Main

Dil To Ho Gaya Reza, Toota Har Armaan Hai,
Daastaan Dard Ki Na Sunaayenge Iss Shehar Main

Ghum Ke Saaye Bhi Dekhen Kab Talak Roke Khushi,
Ek Timtimati Aas Par Jiye Jaayenge Iss Shehar Main !!



Aap ki kalam vaakai aap ka saath poore Zooron-shoron se de rahi hai. Applause Applause

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«Reply #95 on: July 31, 2009, 06:19:00 AM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on July 31, 2009, 03:40:33 AM
Ghazlon ke in panno pur tukbandi ki zurrat kar raha hu 'is shaher mein'....Shaher ke logon se maafi ka haqdaar hu.




Haath bhee wo  berukhi se milaate hein ub
Garmjoshi se gale lage they jo is shaher  mein


Baithein kahan aur kis-se haalat pur charche kare
Mere gaanv ke peepal nahi hai is shaher mein


Tum poochtey ho hur baat pur yeh ‘tarq’ kyon
Is’ tarkeeb’ ko seekha hai humne is shaher mein


Jaane kitne dilon ko toda, aur jazbaaton se khele hai hum
Anaadi se khilaadi bun chuke hai is shaher mein


Hur baat pur baukhlaana aur chillana ub laazmi hai
Tarrannum ki baatein ub rehne bhee do is shaher mein!


Daudta hur shaqs milega budhawaasi aur behaali mein yahan
Jubki jaanta hai uski manzil nahi hai is shaher mein!


Jisko dekho hai khafa is baat pur ya us baat pur
Sochta hi reh gaya main,kis-se ruthoon is shaher mein


Kin-kin tohmaton ki safai dete rahoge umra bhur
Jo gunaah sochey nahi unkey bhee ilzaam sur pur is shaher mein!


   Prateek


Ab Hum Aur Kya Keh Sakte hai!!! Kuch As'haar To Dil Ko Chubte Gaye..Har Lafz Mein Sachai Nazar Aayi,Apane Aaj ke Halaat Bayaan Kiiye Hai Prateekji...Ek Zabardast Peshkash...

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«Reply #96 on: July 31, 2009, 06:36:26 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on July 30, 2009, 11:45:25 AM

Bohot bohot achcha likha hai Khwaish.....Bohot hi khoob Dost..Aapki qalam se to humesha sach nikla hai aur humesha dil main utra hai..... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Rehnumaan The, Humsafar The, Humsaaya The Iss Shehar Main,
Jaane Wo Log Kahan Bichde, Kahan Kho Gaye Iss Shehar Main

Patharon Ke Seene Main Bhi Shayad Koi Ehsaas Hai,
Insaan Ke Dil Humne Suna Pathar Hue Iss Shehar Main

Andhiyon Ki Zad Main Aur Kab Talak Jalta Chiraagh,
Haalat Se Ladne Waale Bhi Thak Gaye Iss Shehar Main

Koi Gar Humraah Na Ho, Bohot Mushkil Hai Wo Safar,
Hum Hain Lekin Dekhiye, Tanha Chale Iss Shehar Main !!



Bahut Bahut Bahut Khooob Dost!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat As'haar Likhe Hai Aapne..!!!Isse Behtar Koi Jawaab na Ho sakta Tha..Bahut Ache.. Thumbs UP

Roothe Hue Ko Kaun Manaye Iss Shehar Mein,
Aakhir Kis-Kis Ko Hum Samjhaye Iss Shehar Mein!!!

Kabhi Kisi Se, Koi Sawaal karna Meri Fitrat Mein Naa Tha,
Par Meri Khamoshi par Bhi Logon Ne Kuch Sawaal Uthaye Iss Shehar Mein!!!

Gar Mujhse Kuch Khata Hui Bhi Thi To Zaroori Nahi Ke Hum Uss Khata Par Gufugoo Kare,
Baat-Baat Par Kaun Apna Sar Jhukaye Iss Shehar Mein!!!

Maana Humne,Ke Ab hum Nahi hai Shaamil Tere Chaahne Walo Mein,
Par Apni Khaamiyon Se Kaun Lad Paaye Iss Shehar Mein!!!!

Sach To Yeh Hai Ke Saansein Jab Tak Chal Rahi Hai Hum bhi Chal Rahe Hai "Khwaish"
Naa Jaane Kis Raah Par Apna Safar Tham Saa Jaaye Iss Shehar Mein!!!!
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«Reply #97 on: July 31, 2009, 11:02:14 AM »
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Quote from: HumTum on July 30, 2009, 03:10:09 PM
Parteek Ji - Shukriya.

Talat Ji .. bahut acche...




Lo phir aayi hai bahar iss shehar mein
Par mere liye hai khar iss shehar mein

Woh be-naqaab ho kar nikale hai ghar se
Kaun hai marne ko tiyaar iss shehar mein

Har shaks yahaN apne mein hi hai masruuf
Na muhhobat na takraar iss shehar mein

Goya, ke aastinoN mein saanp pale ho
Dete hai fareb sab yaar iss shehar mein

Jis ne bhi kar li waffadaari se dosti
Uska jeena hai dushwaar iss shehar mein

Yahan ke tour "lucknow" jassey nai hai
Aap kyun aaye sarkaar iss shehar mein

Yeh Ranjhe ka shehar hai aao ishq karen
Chhodo, ladna hai bekaar iss shehar mein !!


HumTum

Bohot umdah Hum Tum  Applause Applause Applause


Hasrat Hai Hum Dekhen Mausam-e-BaharaaN Iss Shehar Main,
Kuch Ghunche Bhi Hon Kaanton Ke DarmiyaaN Iss Shehar Main

Taareek Si Raahon Main Kaisi Ye Roshni Aayi Nazar,
Ho Raha Hai Husn Koi Shayad AyaaN Iss Shehar Main

Har Shakhs Honton Ko Siye Ji Raha Hai Lekin,
Khamoshiyon Ne Bhi Kahi Ek DaastaaN Iss Shehar Main

Kis Pe Kijiye Yaqeen Har Chehra Pe Ek Chehra Hai,
Ho Gayi Hain Rukhsat WafadaariyaaN Iss Shehar Main

Kuch To Baat Hai Lekin Koi To Hai Sisila,
Sar Aankhon Pe Hain Saari KhamiyaaN Iss Shehar Main !!
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«Reply #98 on: July 31, 2009, 11:04:11 AM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on July 31, 2009, 03:28:28 AM

Aap ki kalam vaakai aap ka saath poore Zooron-shoron se de rahi hai. Applause Applause

Bohot bohot shukriya aapka Prateek Ji  icon_salut icon_salut
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«Reply #99 on: July 31, 2009, 11:20:32 AM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on July 31, 2009, 03:40:33 AM
Ghazlon ke in panno pur tukbandi ki zurrat kar raha hu 'is shaher mein'....Shaher ke logon se maafi ka haqdaar hu.

Haath bhee wo  berukhi se milaate hein ub
Garmjoshi se gale lage they jo is shaher  mein

Baithein kahan aur kis-se haalat pur charche kare
Mere gaanv ke peepal nahi hai is shaher mein

Tum poochtey ho hur baat pur yeh ‘tarq’ kyon
Is’ tarkeeb’ ko seekha hai humne is shaher mein

Jaane kitne dilon ko toda, aur jazbaaton se khele hai hum
Anaadi se khilaadi bun chuke hai is shaher mein

Hur baat pur baukhlaana aur chillana ub laazmi hai
Tarrannum ki baatein ub rehne bhee do is shaher mein!

Daudta hur shaqs milega budhawaasi aur behaali mein yahan
Jubki jaanta hai uski manzil nahi hai is shaher mein!

Jisko dekho hai khafa is baat pur ya us baat pur
Sochta hi reh gaya main,kis-se ruthoon is shaher mein

Kin-kin tohmaton ki safai dete rahoge umra bhur
Jo gunaah sochey nahi unkey bhee ilzaam sur pur is shaher mein!


   Prateek


 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Bohot Khoob Prateek Ji, aapki ghazal ne to maahol ko aur garma diya, kuch aur nikhaar diya...Dil ko sochne pe majboor karne waale asha'ar hain.....Bohot bohot khoob Prateek Ji.

Haath Chhoot Gaye Hain Iss Shehar Main,
Saath Chhoot Gaye Hain Iss Shehar Main

Kis Se Kahen Kya Kahen, Ek Doosre Se,
Bezaar Se Ho Chale Hain Iss Shehar Main

Unchi Ho Chali Anaa Ki Deewaarain,
Dost Bhi Ajnabi Hue Hain Iss Shehar Main

Tohamaton Ne Jhulsa Diya Mera Wujood,
Ilzaam Kuch Aise Lage Hain Iss Shehar Main

Kaun Ab Kis Ko Manayega Bhala,
Sab Hi Khafa Baithe Hain Iss Shehar Main !
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«Reply #100 on: July 31, 2009, 11:25:33 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on July 31, 2009, 06:16:34 AM
Bahut Bahut Bahut Khooob Talat dost.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bohot bohot shukriya Dost  Giggle tongue3
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«Reply #101 on: July 31, 2009, 12:18:17 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on July 31, 2009, 11:25:33 AM
Bohot bohot shukriya Dost  Giggle tongue3

Bade-Bade Shehron Mein Choti-choti Galtiyan Hoti Rehti hai Talatji.. icon_geek hello2
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«Reply #102 on: July 31, 2009, 02:22:59 PM »
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Bahut Khoob DostooN... chalo carvaan aage bahdayein .. kucch sune kucch sunayien....
Haan Issi Shehar mein .. aur KahaN




Arz kiya hai ....


Ajab Hua Hamare Sath Hadsaa Iss Shehar Mein
Woh Nazar Aa Gaye Be-Pardaa Iss Shehar Mein

Hum To Kudh Be_zaar Huye Baithey Hai YahaN
Kya DeiN kissi ko Mashwara Iss Shehar Mein

Koi Hum_Kadam Nahin Koi Hum_zubaaN nahin
Bande Bhi Ho Gaye Hai Khuda Iss Shehar Mein

Sang Har Hath Mein Aur Har Ankh Mein AnsooN
Ravaa RanjishoN Ka Sil_sila Iss Shehar mein

Har Shaks Teg Liye Khadaa hai RahooN Mein
Kasie Chali Hai Ab Ke Hawaa Iss Shehar Mein

Gar Yhi Uski Razaa Hai To Phir "HumTum"
Jo Bhi Hua Acchaa Huaa Iss Shehar Mein !!


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«Reply #103 on: July 31, 2009, 02:36:07 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on July 31, 2009, 06:36:26 AM
Bahut Bahut Bahut Khooob Dost!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat As'haar Likhe Hai Aapne..!!!Isse Behtar Koi Jawaab na Ho sakta Tha..Bahut Ache.. Thumbs UP

Roothe Hue Ko Kaun Manaye Iss Shehar Mein,
Aakhir Kis-Kis Ko Hum Samjhaye Iss Shehar Mein!!!

Kabhi Kisi Se, Koi Sawaal karna Meri Fitrat Mein Naa Tha,
Par Meri Khamoshi par Bhi Logon Ne Kuch Sawaal Uthaye Iss Shehar Mein!!!

Gar Mujhse Kuch Khata Hui Bhi Thi To Zaroori Nahi Ke Hum Uss Khata Par Gufugoo Kare,
Baat-Baat Par Kaun Apna Sar Jhukaye Iss Shehar Mein!!!

Maana Humne,Ke Ab hum Nahi hai Shaamil Tere Chaahne Walo Mein,
Par Apni Khaamiyon Se Kaun Lad Paaye Iss Shehar Mein!!!!

Sach To Yeh Hai Ke Saansein Jab Tak Chal Rahi Hai Hum bhi Chal Rahe Hai "Khwaish"
Naa Jaane Kis Raah Par Apna Safar Tham Saa Jaaye Iss Shehar Mein!!!!
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Bohot bohot Khoob Dost...Sach hai na jaane kab saansain tham jaayen, ye safar tham jaaye..........

Koi Shikwa Kisi Se Na Raha Iss Shehar Main,
Karen Ab Aur Kya Hum Gila Iss Shehar Main

Khamoshiyon Ki Zubaan Woh Samajhte Nahin,
Hum Ne Bhi Kisi Se Kuch Na Kaha Iss Shehar Main

Mujrim Bana Diya Hai Mujhe Mere Hi Alfaaz Ne,
Aur Kuch Mera Bhi Tha Sir Jhuka Iss Shehar Main

Humne Hi Chorh Di Wo Mehfilain, Thak Haar Ke,
Behtar Hai Main Rahun Ab Tanha Iss Shehar Main

Dekho Talat Hain Aur Bhi, Ek Bas Tum Hi Nahin,
Har Dil Main Ek Tees Hai, Ek Dard Chupa Iss Shehar Main
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«Reply #104 on: August 01, 2009, 10:04:45 AM »
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Celmira ji,Khwaish ji,Humtum ji,Prateek ji...aap sabne kai aisi baatein likhi hai jin par shayad bahut kam socha jaata hai....khuch gehri baatein...bahut khub...salute to all of u... icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut

bahut accha lga yha aap sabko padhkar....aur bahut khuch samajhne ko aur janne ko mila...bahut khuch sikhne ko bhi mila yha...chand alfaaz likhne ki koshish ki hai..


Kai manjilen aur manjil tak pahuchne k raaste hai iss shehar mein
Chaho to sab khuch hai,varna khuch bhi nahi hai iss shehar mein

Sach-juth,galat-sahi ko kis taraju me taule koi
Gum aur khushi dono hi mile hai,har kisi ko iss shehar mein

Ek hi baat ko har koi apni apni tarah se kehta hai
Har kisi ka apna ek alag hi najariya hai iss shehar mein
Aur kya kahe doston.....
Din din hi hai aur raat bhi raat hai iss shehar mein....
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