Izhaar-e-ishq uss ne mera qabool kar liya.............IFTAKHAR

by Iftakhar Ahmad on June 02, 2012, 09:41:57 AM
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Rukhsar pe uss ke,  haye!  Noor kitna hai
Magar ye bhi to dekho k, ghuroor kitna hai

Hai ma'amla kya jaane kya baat hai dil mein
Na jaane kyun wo mujhse  aaj, door itna hai

Dil pe chot bhi maare, hai aansu bhi wo ponchta
Mera mehboob bhi dekho, ba-shaoor kitna hai

Badi himmat se  maine  un  se pooch hi dala
Dil mein  pyar  mere  liye,  aye huzoor kitna

Izhar-e-ishq  uss  ne  mera  qabool kar  liya
Jabhi to chaya, sar pe  mere,  suroor itna hai

Izhaar per mere uss ne hans kar ye keh diya
Aye  'Iftakhar',  tu   kyun,   na-suboor itna hai


Rukhsar: face
Ba-shaoor: ba-adab, well disciplined
Suroor: khumar, halka halka nasha
Na-suboor: be-sabr


NOTE: Iss kalam mein radeef alag alag hain, e.g. 'Kitna hai, itna hai'. To main jaanta chahta hun ki isse ghazal ki catagory mein rakh sakte hain? Pl suggest.
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«Reply #1 on: June 02, 2012, 09:54:29 AM »
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Wah bahut hi khoobsurat ghaal Ahmed ji.great work. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: June 02, 2012, 10:16:30 AM »
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Shukriya Madhuwesh jee.
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«Reply #3 on: June 02, 2012, 10:44:43 AM »
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kalam kaho ya ghazzal kaho jo bhi kaho isko
mujhe kahina hai ki is men suroor kitna hai
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«Reply #4 on: June 02, 2012, 12:00:22 PM »
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IFTAKHAR JEE BAHUT HI BADHIYA GHAZAL.
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«Reply #5 on: June 02, 2012, 12:02:22 PM »
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waah bhai bahut he behatreen dheron daad
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Quote from: BANSI DHAMEJA on June 02, 2012, 10:44:43 AM
kalam kaho ya ghazzal kaho jo bhi kaho isko
mujhe kahina hai ki is men suroor kitna hai
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«Reply #7 on: June 02, 2012, 03:50:03 PM »
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lajawab peshkash.........tareef ke liye shabd kam

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Quote from: Anahita on June 02, 2012, 12:00:22 PM

IFTAKHAR JEE BAHUT HI BADHIYA GHAZAL.
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Bahut bahut shukriya Anahita jee.
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Quote from: sksaini4 on June 02, 2012, 12:02:22 PM
waah bhai bahut he behatreen dheron daad
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«Reply #10 on: June 03, 2012, 01:15:30 PM »
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Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on June 02, 2012, 09:41:57 AM
Rukhsar pe uss ke,  haye!  Noor kitna hai
Magar ye bhi to dekho k, ghuroor kitna hai

Hai ma'amla kya jaane kya baat hai dil mein
Na jaane kyun wo mujhse  aaj, door itna hai

Dil pe chot bhi maare, hai aansu bhi wo ponchta
Mera mehboob bhi dekho, ba-shaoor kitna hai

Badi himmat se  maine  un  se pooch hi dala
Dil mein  pyar  mere  liye,  aye huzoor kitna

Izhar-e-ishq  uss  ne  mera  qabool kar  liya
Jabhi to chaya, sar pe  mere,  suroor itna hai

Izhaar per mere uss ne hans kar ye keh diya
Aye  'Iftakhar',  tu   kyun,   na-suboor itna hai


Rukhsar: face
Ba-shaoor: ba-adab, well disciplined
Suroor: khumar, halka halka nasha
Na-suboor: be-sabr


NOTE: Iss kalam mein radeef alag alag hain, e.g. 'Kitna hai, itna hai'. To main jaanta chahta hun ki isse ghazal ki catagory mein rakh sakte hain? Pl suggest.

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Bahut bahut shukriya K_A jee.
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