"jaadu nagri wala koi"

by aaina on March 25, 2009, 11:16:17 AM
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jaadu nagri wala koi paas bula kar daikho to
kaise unmay mein duboonga aankh mila kar daikho to

khaab suhane kitne sundar aur kitne awaara hain
yaad ki kirne apne pehloo sath sula kar daikho to

kitni thandak kitni narmi iske upar chaaii hui hai
raat diwaani aos ki chaadar tan se laga kar daikho to

aasaan ho jayenge saare pal jo tum par bhari hain
apne dil ke saare qisse huko suna kar daikho to

saare dard jo paihum tumko apni simt bulate hain
phool bana dunga mai unko, mujhme sama kar daikho to

aslam zikr mera jo aaye aankh tumhari kiyn bhr aaye
itni qurbat hai jab unse haath badha kar daikho to
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«Reply #1 on: March 25, 2009, 11:18:38 AM »
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jaadu nagri wala koi paas bula kar daikho to
kaise unmay mein duboonga aankh mila kar daikho to

khaab suhane kitne sundar aur kitne awaara hain
yaad ki kirne apne pehloo sath sula kar daikho to

kitni thandak kitni narmi iske upar chaaii hui hai
raat diwaani aos ki chaadar tan se laga kar daikho to

aasaan ho jayenge saare pal jo tum par bhari hain
apne dil ke saare qisse huko suna kar daikho to

saare dard jo paihum tumko apni simt bulate hain
phool bana dunga mai unko, mujhme sama kar daikho to

aslam zikr mera jo aaye aankh tumhari kiyn bhr aaye
itni qurbat hai jab unse haath badha kar daikho to

Bahoot khoob Aslam ji Applause Applause Applause
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #2 on: March 25, 2009, 11:28:26 AM »
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Nice one Aaina Ji
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«Reply #3 on: March 25, 2009, 11:38:35 AM »
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jaadu nagri wala koi paas bula kar daikho to
kaise unmay mein duboonga aankh mila kar daikho to

khaab suhane kitne sundar aur kitne awaara hain
yaad ki kirne apne pehloo sath sula kar daikho to

kitni thandak kitni narmi iske upar chaaii hui hai
raat diwaani aos ki chaadar tan se laga kar daikho to

aasaan ho jayenge saare pal jo tum par bhari hain
apne dil ke saare qisse huko suna kar daikho to

saare dard jo paihum tumko apni simt bulate hain
phool bana dunga mai unko, mujhme sama kar daikho to

aslam zikr mera jo aaye aankh tumhari kiyn bhr aaye
itni qurbat hai jab unse haath badha kar daikho to


Beautiful ghazal... bohot achcha likha hai Aslam Ji   Applause Applause Applause
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aaina
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«Reply #4 on: March 25, 2009, 12:34:44 PM »
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Nice one Aaina Ji

shukriya harish ji...................
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aaina
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«Reply #5 on: March 25, 2009, 12:38:08 PM »
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Beautiful ghazal... bohot achcha likha hai Aslam Ji   Applause Applause Applause

thnxxxxxx so much celmira ji.................
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«Reply #6 on: March 25, 2009, 01:06:47 PM »
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Bahut hi umda likha hai Aslam ji aapne. Bahut hi sundar. Aap isi tarha likhte jaayen aur hum padhte jaayen aisa lagta hai aaj.
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«Reply #7 on: March 25, 2009, 02:02:26 PM »
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Wah wah aslam dear... bahut accha likha hai aapne. daad kabul kijiye
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«Reply #8 on: March 26, 2009, 07:00:07 AM »
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Bahut hi umda likha hai Aslam ji aapne. Bahut hi sundar. Aap isi tarha likhte jaayen aur hum padhte jaayen aisa lagta hai aaj.

shukriya asma ji..............is hosla afzaaii ke liyn bhut bhut skhukriya
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«Reply #9 on: March 26, 2009, 07:01:21 AM »
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Wah wah aslam dear... bahut accha likha hai aapne. daad kabul kijiye

thnxxxxxxx so much roja........................
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«Reply #10 on: April 05, 2009, 09:48:38 AM »
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Bahut khoob aslam ji... Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: April 06, 2009, 09:14:25 PM »
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shukriya
Bahut khoob aslam ji... Usual Smile
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bhut bhut shukriya angel ji...................
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«Reply #12 on: April 09, 2009, 02:48:22 PM »
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Bohat Achche Aaina Ji,.
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«Reply #13 on: April 11, 2009, 10:20:06 AM »
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Bohat Achche Aaina Ji,.

bhut bhut shukriya azeem sahab...............
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«Reply #14 on: April 14, 2009, 02:03:47 PM »
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Bohat Achche Phirse Aaina Ji, Pardhkar Bohat Achcha Laga, Aapki Is Ghazal KO,.

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