JAAN AATEE RAHEE, JAAN JAATEE RAHEE....masoom

by Masoom Shahzada on June 25, 2012, 01:42:15 PM
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Yaad teree mujhe jab bhee aatee rahee.
Jaan aatee rahee , Jaan jaatee rahee.
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Hai duwa'ao ke chehre pe jaraajgee.
Pooree hone maiN nakhreN dikhaatee rahee.
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Thee jo khusheeyaN ajeejoo me khairaat kee.
Khawahisoo kee wo maalaa banaatee rahee.
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Adaa Sukr-ae-khudaa karne kee chaahat too thee.
Par Bhook bachchoo se chooree karaatee rahee.
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Minnat-ao-khushaamad me umreN gayee.
Dostee saath kaisa nibhaatee  rahee.
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Un paseeno kee boondooN kee keemat naheeN.
Peshaanee-ae-vaalid pe jo muskuraatee rahee.
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Hath se jab bhee kalam girne laga.
Galib kee gazleN hausla dilaatee rahee.
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Tumse manga naheeN kuch "masoom" bahnoo ne.
Fakhar se bas mohabbat lutaatee rahee.
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«Reply #1 on: June 25, 2012, 02:19:31 PM »
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 Mashaallah khoob kaha hai.
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«Reply #2 on: June 25, 2012, 02:20:56 PM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #3 on: June 25, 2012, 04:20:06 PM »
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Poora ka poora kalaam behad khoobsoorti se likha hai par mujhe maqta behad haseen laga..bahut bahut khoob..
aise hi likhte rahiye masoom bhai.. 
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kadradaanoN me ek tera bhaai bhee hai
jisko ghazale teree lubhaatee rahee
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«Reply #4 on: June 25, 2012, 04:37:28 PM »
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bahut khubsurt kalaam  msoom ji...........bahut hi lajawab likha hai dhero daad......bahut bahut mubarkbaad...

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«Reply #5 on: June 25, 2012, 06:00:20 PM »
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waah waaaaaaaahh waaahh
LAJWAB  khobsoorat

DHEROON LAKHOON DAAD BOHOT KHOOB DIL KO CHU GYAI
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«Reply #6 on: June 25, 2012, 11:35:51 PM »
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be-har aur wazan kee kami he!!
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