Jaan beytaab hai, ab to meyrey habeeb, aaou!!

by abdbundeli on July 08, 2010, 10:33:48 AM
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Muntazir beyqaraar huun: jihey naseeb aaou!
Kaash, tum eik baar fir meyrey qareeb aaou!!

Khafaa huye ho, jaantaa hun: kyaa karoon bolo?
Sakht beemaar hun: ab to meyrey tabeeb aaou!!

Koyi qaasid nahin hai, jis sey mein khabar bheyjuun!
Khushgulu bahr liye, meyrey andaleeb aaou!!

Audhh baithhey ho ye kaisee ajeeb naaraazee?
Un sawaaloun kaa hun har haal mein mujeeb! Aaou!!

Har eik lamhah qayaamat hai hijra kaa, mahboob!
Jaan beytaab hai, ab to meyrey habeeb, aaou!!

Zulm dhhaayegaa abhee aur mousam-e-baaraan:
Baad-e-mashriq mein ghuleygee may-e-zabeeb, aaou!

Larhkharhaataa huaa 'abd' bhalaa kahaan jaaye?
Sang-o-khaaroun mein ho na jaaye fir kabeeb? Aaou!

                         - abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: July 09, 2010, 12:40:16 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on July 08, 2010, 10:33:48 AM
Muntazir beyqaraar huun: jihey naseeb aaou!
Kaash, tum eik baar fir meyrey qareeb aaou!!

Khafaa huye ho, jaantaa hun: kyaa karoon bolo?
Sakht beemaar hun: ab to meyrey tabeeb aaou!!

Koyi qaasid nahin hai, jis sey mein khabar bheyjuun!
Khushgulu bahr liye, meyrey andaleeb aaou!!

Audhh baithhey ho ye kaisee ajeeb naaraazee?
Un sawaaloun kaa hun har haal mein mujeeb! Aaou!!

Har eik lamhah qayaamat hai hijra kaa, mahboob!
Jaan beytaab hai, ab to meyrey habeeb, aaou!!

Zulm dhhaayegaa abhee aur mousam-e-baaraan:
Baad-e-mashriq mein ghuleygee may-e-zabeeb, aaou!

Larhkharhaataa huaa 'abd' bhalaa kahaan jaaye?
Sang-o-khaaroun mein ho na jaaye fir kabeeb? Aaou!

                         - abd bundeli


aapki ghazal ke sabhi ashaar bahut umdaa lage mujhe...bayaani aur adaayegi bhi gazab ki rahi aapki....ek umdaa creation rahi....dil se daad hazir hai....yunhi behtar koshish ke saath humesha aate rahen...yeh hi duaa hai...khush rahen...

apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath....
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«Reply #2 on: July 10, 2010, 06:13:59 AM »
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Quote from: Anshumali on July 09, 2010, 12:40:16 PM
aapki ghazal ke sabhi ashaar bahut umdaa lage mujhe...bayaani aur adaayegi bhi gazab ki rahi aapki....ek umdaa creation rahi....dil se daad hazir hai....yunhi behtar koshish ke saath humesha aate rahen...yeh hi duaa hai...khush rahen...

apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath....

Shukraguzaar huun Anshumali ji! Aap ney meyree gazal mein itnee 'ruchi' lee: mujhey khushee huyee! Khush rahiye!

                            - abd bundeli
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ishk ek ibadat
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«Reply #3 on: July 10, 2010, 08:12:03 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on July 08, 2010, 10:33:48 AM
Muntazir beyqaraar huun: jihey naseeb aaou!
Kaash, tum eik baar fir meyrey qareeb aaou!!

Khafaa huye ho, jaantaa hun: kyaa karoon bolo?
Sakht beemaar hun: ab to meyrey tabeeb aaou!!

Koyi qaasid nahin hai, jis sey mein khabar bheyjuun!
Khushgulu bahr liye, meyrey andaleeb aaou!!

Audhh baithhey ho ye kaisee ajeeb naaraazee?
Un sawaaloun kaa hun har haal mein mujeeb! Aaou!!

Har eik lamhah qayaamat hai hijra kaa, mahboob!
Jaan beytaab hai, ab to meyrey habeeb, aaou!!

Zulm dhhaayegaa abhee aur mousam-e-baaraan:
Baad-e-mashriq mein ghuleygee may-e-zabeeb, aaou!

Larhkharhaataa huaa 'abd' bhalaa kahaan jaaye?
Sang-o-khaaroun mein ho na jaaye fir kabeeb? Aaou!

                         - abd bundeli


bahut khoob saare ashar lajawaab hai dil se daad
likhte rahen
duaon ke saath

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«Reply #4 on: July 10, 2010, 02:03:49 PM »
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Quote from: ishk ek ibadat on July 10, 2010, 08:12:03 AM
bahut khoob saare ashar lajawaab hai dil se daad
likhte rahen
duaon ke saath


Bahut-bahut shukriyah, 'ishk ek ibadat'ji! Khush rahiye!

         - abd bundeli
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