Jaan To Lete Merii Khata Hai Ya NahiN...

by Bishwajeet 'Musaahib' on December 01, 2013, 01:51:54 PM
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हो रही इबादत ये अता है या नहीं ...
रो के देखें रब को पता है या नहीं .....

उनकी शिकायत है हमेशा से यही ...
प्यार सबके सामने जता है या नहीं .....

महीनों बाद मिल रहे हैं फिर उनसे  ...
पास  तकरार को नुक्ता है या नहीं ...

जो ज़माने को बताते फिरते हैं आप  ....
वो बात खुद को भी पता है या नहीं ...

फैसला पहले ही क्युँ ले लिया तुमने ...
जान तो लेते मेरी  खता है या नहीं ...

अब न जलेगा परवाना बेजा  यूँ ही ..
प्यार पहले ही दे बता है या नहीं ...

"मुसाहिब" आज फिर रूठे हो यूँ ही ..
वजह आज कोई पुख्ता है या नहीं ...

Ho Rahii Ibadat Ye Ataa Hai Ya NahiN...
Ro Ke dekheiN Rab Ko Pataa Hai Ya NahiN...

Unkii Shikayat Hai Hamesha Se Yahi...
Pyaar Sabke Saamne Jataa Hai Ya NahiN...

MahinoN Baad Mil Rahe HaiN Fir Unse...
Paas Takraar Ko Koii Nuktaa Hai Ya NahiN...

Jo Zamane Ko batate Firte HaiN Aap...
Wo Baat Khud Ko Bhii Pata Hai Ya NahiN...

Faislaa Pahle Hi KyuN Le Liya Tumne...
Jaan To Lete Merii Khata Hai Ya NahiN...

Ab Na Jalega Parwanaa Beja YuN Hi...
Pyaar Pahle Hi De Bata Hai Ya NahiN...

"Musaahib" Aaj Fir Ruthe Ho YuN Hi...
Wazah Aaj Koii Pukhtaa Hai Ya NahiN...
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«Reply #1 on: December 01, 2013, 03:16:09 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: December 01, 2013, 03:49:06 PM »
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Quote from: Bishwajeet 'Musaahib' on December 01, 2013, 01:51:54 PM
हो रही इबादत ये अता है या नहीं ...
रो के देखें रब को पता है या नहीं .....

उनकी शिकायत है हमेशा से यही ...
प्यार सबके सामने जता है या नहीं .....

महीनों बाद मिल रहे हैं फिर उनसे  ...
पास  तकरार को नुक्ता है या नहीं ...

जो ज़माने को बताते फिरते हैं आप  ....
वो बात खुद को भी पता है या नहीं ...

फैसला पहले ही क्युँ ले लिया तुमने ...
जान तो लेते मेरी  खता है या नहीं ...

अब न जलेगा परवाना बेजा  यूँ ही ..
प्यार पहले ही दे बता है या नहीं ...

"मुसाहिब" आज फिर रूठे हो यूँ ही ..
वजह आज कोई पुख्ता है या नहीं ...

Ho Rahii Ibadat Ye Ataa Hai Ya NahiN...
Ro Ke dekheiN Rab Ko Pataa Hai Ya NahiN...

Unkii Shikayat Hai Hamesha Se Yahi...
Pyaar Sabke Saamne Jataa Hai Ya NahiN...

MahinoN Baad Mil Rahe HaiN Fir Unse...
Paas Takraar Ko Koii Nuktaa Hai Ya NahiN...

Jo Zamane Ko batate Firte HaiN Aap...
Wo Baat Khud Ko Bhii Pata Hai Ya NahiN...

Faislaa Pahle Hi KyuN Le Liya Tumne...
Jaan To Lete Merii Khata Hai Ya NahiN...

Ab Na Jalega Parwanaa Beja YuN Hi...
Pyaar Pahle Hi De Bata Hai Ya NahiN...

"Musaahib" Aaj Fir Ruthe Ho YuN Hi...
Wazah Aaj Koii Pukhtaa Hai Ya NahiN...

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«Reply #3 on: December 01, 2013, 05:47:49 PM »
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MahinoN Baad Mil Rahe HaiN Fir Unse...
Paas Takraar Ko Koii Nuktaa Hai Ya NahiN...

"Musaahib" Aaj Fir Ruthe Ho YuN Hi...
Wazah Aaj Koii Pukhtaa Hai Ya NahiN...

waah waaah lajwaab musahib ji
bohut hi zabardast kalaam

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«Reply #4 on: December 01, 2013, 06:07:34 PM »
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bohat achee ghazal biswajeet jee,...........bohat c daad,....
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«Reply #5 on: December 01, 2013, 10:34:13 PM »
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Musaahib ji, kya kehne, bahut laajawab !!
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«Reply #6 on: December 02, 2013, 01:53:54 AM »
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हो रही इबादत ये अता है या नहीं ...
रो के देखें रब को पता है या नहीं .....

उनकी शिकायत है हमेशा से यही ...
प्यार सबके सामने जता है या नहीं ....

"मुसाहिब" आज फिर रूठे हो यूँ ही ..
वजह आज कोई पुख्ता है या नहीं ...

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waah waah bishwajeet jee kya kehne..
Shaandaar jaandaar alfaaz hain..
Dhero dhero daad..happy9
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«Reply #7 on: December 02, 2013, 02:23:40 AM »
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Bishwajeet Sahib,
Bahut Hi Umdah Alfaaz Hain, 'Jaan To Lete'.... Arz Hai...

Bhagwaan To Kab Ka So Gaya Hai, Magar...
Jo Rootha Hai Aaj Usse Mana.na Hi Hoga...
Warnaa Roothne Ka Fayadaa Hi Kyaa Hoga!

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«Reply #8 on: December 02, 2013, 10:55:34 AM »
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ek rau ke saath dàaaaaaaaaaaaaaad mussahib ji bahut khoob  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: December 02, 2013, 01:22:37 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Achchi pehskash bishwajeet ji... aur rabb ko sab pata hai ji aap rokar dekho ya hanskar dekho... har baar ki tarah kamaal ka likha hai... dheron dheron daaaaaaaaaad...
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«Reply #10 on: December 02, 2013, 01:34:19 PM »
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Khuda To Ek Chinti Ki Pukaar Bhi Sun Leta Hai
Insan To Phir Bhi Ashraful Makhlook Hai Kya Unki Nahi Sun  Pata Hoga ? Jaisa Aap Khuda Ko Kamzor Samajhkar Uski Tauheen Kar Rahen Hain .Aisa Kuch Nahi Wo To Har Cheez Ko Jaanta Hai Aur Har Cheez Par Qadir Hai
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«Reply #11 on: December 02, 2013, 01:47:59 PM »
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Quote from: Niha Khan on December 02, 2013, 01:34:19 PM
Khuda To Ek Chithi Ki Pukaar Bhi Sun Leta Hai
Insan To Phir Bhi Ashraful Makhlook Hai Kya Unki Nahi Sun  Pata Hoga ? Jaisa Aap Khuda Ko Kamzor Samajhkar Uski Tauheen Kar Rahen Hain .Aisa Kuch Nahi Wo To Har Cheez Ko Jaanta Hai Aur Har Cheez Par Qadir Hai
Niha Khan Ji,
Sabse pahle to aapko itna batana chahta huN ki kisi bhi tarah se Ye khuda ki tauheen nahi hai, Khuda ho ya Bhagwan unhe sab pata hota hai or is ghazal me mai sirf apni baat kar raha huN ki meri takleef khuda tak pahuch pa rahi hai ya nahi,,,
Is ghazal ko aap apne tarike se na soche bas waha pahuche jahan Shayar pahuchana chaahta ho...
Fir bhi agar aapko aisa laga ki mujhse koi galti hui hai to so sorry...
kuch bhi likhne ka kabhi ye maksad nahi hona chahiye ki koi hurt ho...
Be happy ...
aate rahiye Ghazlein Padhte Rahiye or jo bhi khaamiya.N ho wo batate rahiye...
Apna kimti samay dene ka or hausalaafzaii bahut bahut shukriyaa.. 
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Aap Saf Dil Aur Samajhdaar Insan Lagte Hai Bishwajeet Jee
Yahi To Tauheen Hai Jee Ki Aisa Sochna Ki Us Tak Baat Puhanchti Hai Ya Nahi. Beshaq Us Tak Har Baat Puhanchti Hai Bas Wo Faisla Aamalon Pe Karta Hai Khair Mauf Kijiye Humara Maqsad Aapka Dil Dukhana Nahi Tha Sorry Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: December 02, 2013, 05:10:09 PM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #14 on: December 02, 2013, 05:10:55 PM »
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जो ज़माने को बताते फिरते हैं आप  ....
वो बात खुद को भी पता है या नहीं ...
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