jaane hokar ke juda log kidhar jaate hain

by livingbytheday on July 01, 2012, 05:52:47 PM
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shaant se udte hue badal kidhar jaatein hain
paed se tute hue patte  kidhar jaate hain
kitni shiddatt se bhi dhundo toh nahi milte
jaane hokar ke juda log kidhar jaate hain

kahi toh hota hoga inka bhi theekana warna
shaam dhalte hi ujale kidhar jaate hain

subah hotey hi haqeeqat mein badaltey honge
palko se utar kar warna khwaab kidhar jaate hain

hur safar ki takdeer mein nahi hota hai pura hona
jinhe manzil nahi milti woh raste kidhar jaate hain

jalne se pehle kya tune bhi kabhi socha deepak
tere ujale se jalkar, andhere yeh kidhar jaate hai
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«Reply #1 on: July 02, 2012, 03:26:29 AM »
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bahut khoob deepak ji hardik badhaai
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«Reply #2 on: July 02, 2012, 04:09:17 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on July 02, 2012, 03:26:29 AM
bahut khoob deepak ji hardik badhaai

thank you sir
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«Reply #3 on: July 03, 2012, 01:20:37 AM »
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Deepak ji bohut khoob lajwab outstanding superb. Aur dono ashar ke liye khususan mubarakbad,,,


kahi toh hota hoga inka bhi theekana warna
shaam dhalte hi ujale kidhar jaate hain

subah hotey hi haqeeqat mein badaltey honge
palko se utar kar warna khwaab kidhar jaate hain


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 Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Usual Smile ossume creation.......bahut bahut mubarak baad aur dhero daad hajir hai deepak ji..... bahut gazab likhte hai aap...

aisi hi likhte rahiye aate rahiye.........
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«Reply #5 on: July 03, 2012, 09:30:12 AM »
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Quote from: Aarish on July 03, 2012, 01:20:37 AM
Deepak ji bohut khoob lajwab outstanding superb. Aur dono ashar ke liye khususan mubarakbad,,,


kahi toh hota hoga inka bhi theekana warna
shaam dhalte hi ujale kidhar jaate hain

subah hotey hi haqeeqat mein badaltey honge
palko se utar kar warna khwaab kidhar jaate hain


 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


bahut bahut shukriyaa for kind words, aap logo ke encouragements se aur accha likhne ki koshish jagati hain, thank you
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«Reply #6 on: July 03, 2012, 09:33:35 AM »
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Quote from: soudagar on July 03, 2012, 02:00:53 AM
Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Usual Smile ossume creation.......bahut bahut mubarak baad aur dhero daad hajir hai deepak ji..... bahut gazab likhte hai aap...

aisi hi likhte rahiye aate rahiye.........


bahut bahut shukriyaa, aapke in shabdo ke liye
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«Reply #7 on: July 03, 2012, 12:10:39 PM »
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«Reply #8 on: July 03, 2012, 12:16:07 PM »
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boht khub deepak ji
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«Reply #9 on: July 03, 2012, 01:28:30 PM »
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bohat waqt baad koi bohat achi ghazal padhi hai...isko kehte hain ghazal...dil khush ho gya..keep writing Usual Smile.
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thank you sir
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«Reply #11 on: July 03, 2012, 04:50:58 PM »
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Quote from: saahill on July 03, 2012, 12:16:07 PM
boht khub deepak ji

saahilji thank you
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Quote from: nidhi_yadein on July 03, 2012, 01:28:30 PM
bohat waqt baad koi bohat achi ghazal padhi hai...isko kehte hain ghazal...dil khush ho gya..keep writing Usual Smile.

shukriyaa for the encouragement, thank you
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«Reply #13 on: July 03, 2012, 05:25:19 PM »
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wonderful ghazal  Applause Applause
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Quote from: suman59 on July 03, 2012, 05:25:19 PM
wonderful ghazal  Applause Applause

thank you sir
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