Jaane kitna dard hai dil mein, Jo ashkon ko mund raha hain

by livingbytheday on August 11, 2013, 11:18:18 PM
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Jaane kitna dard hai dil mein, Jo ashkon ko mund raha hain
Chupke se rone ke liye, Ghar mein kona dhundh raha hai

Woh apni tanhayee se, awaje wafa ki dene laga hai
Apna dil behlane ko phir se khillonaa dhundh raha hai

Kaatein kaatein neend mein bikhre, lahu luhaan har raat rahi
Yun hi nahi wo deewaana, phoolon ka bichouna dhundh raha hai

Udd gaye uskey  pran pakheru, Haath pakadkar rota beta
Budhi daadi ke haathon ka shayad sona dhundh raha hai

Footpath ka baccha ‘deepak’, sach ki maar na seh paayega
Kaali, andhi gufaon mein, sapna salona dhundh raha hai
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«Reply #1 on: August 11, 2013, 11:27:51 PM »
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bahot bahot  khoob...  .....
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Waah waah waah bahut khoob likha hai yaar..Dhero daad with Rau..happy9
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welcome welcome back deepak bhai..aapko waps yahan dekhkar bahut khushi....aur wo bhi ek khubsurat qalaam ke sath kya baat hai

behad umda behtareen qalaam kaha aapne dherodaad o mubarakbaad bhai


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«Reply #4 on: August 12, 2013, 02:10:28 AM »
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Quote from: livingbytheday on August 11, 2013, 11:18:18 PM


Jaane kitna dard hai dil mein, Jo ashkon ko mund raha hain
Chupke se rone ke liye, Ghar mein kona dhundh raha hai

Woh apni tanhayee se, awaje wafa ki dene laga hai
Apna dil behlane ko phir se khillonaa dhundh raha hai

Kaatein kaatein neend mein bikhre, lahu luhaan har raat rahi
Yun hi nahi wo deewaana, phoolon ka bichouna dhundh raha hai

Udd gaye uskey  pran pakheru, Haath pakadkar rota beta
Budhi daadi ke haathon ka shayad sona dhundh raha hai

Footpath ka baccha ‘deepak’, sach ki maar na seh paayega
Kaali, andhi gufaon mein, sapna salona dhundh raha hai




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«Reply #5 on: August 12, 2013, 02:39:55 AM »
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wah wah bahut khoob...
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«Reply #6 on: August 12, 2013, 03:28:01 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob likha hai ji...
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«Reply #11 on: August 12, 2013, 06:28:51 PM »
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Quote from: shraddha the poetess on August 11, 2013, 11:27:51 PM
bahot bahot  khoob...  .....

bahut bahut shukriyaa
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Waah waah waah bahut khoob likha hai yaar..Dhero daad with Rau..happy9

bahut bahut shukriyaa iss izzat-afzai ke liye, thank you
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Quote from: soudagar on August 12, 2013, 12:01:32 AM
welcome welcome back deepak bhai..aapko waps yahan dekhkar bahut khushi....aur wo bhi ek khubsurat qalaam ke sath kya baat hai

behad umda behtareen qalaam kaha aapne dherodaad o mubarakbaad bhai


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thank you sir, aapke kind words ke liye, god bless
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