Jaane kitna dard hai dil mein, Jo ashkon ko mund raha hain

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«Reply #15 on: August 12, 2013, 08:04:18 PM »
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bahut bahut bahut hi achchi peshkash. sabhi ashaar dil ke qareeb rahe. hazaron dili daad is khoob kalaam par..

Jaane kitna dard hai dil mein, Jo ashkon ko mund raha hain
Chupke se rone ke liye, Ghar mein kona dhundh raha hai

Woh apni tanhayee se, awaje wafa ki dene laga hai
Apna dil behlane ko phir se khillonaa dhundh raha hai

Kaatein kaatein neend mein bikhre, lahu luhaan har raat rahi
Yun hi nahi wo deewaana, phoolon ka bichouna dhundh raha hai

Behad khooooooooob.. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #16 on: August 12, 2013, 11:39:05 PM »
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bahot khoooob waaah hi waah  Applause Clapping Smiley Applause
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Quote from: nishi gahlaut on August 12, 2013, 02:39:55 AM
wah wah bahut khoob...

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bahut bahut bahut hi achchi peshkash. sabhi ashaar dil ke qareeb rahe. hazaron dili daad is khoob kalaam par..

Jaane kitna dard hai dil mein, Jo ashkon ko mund raha hain
Chupke se rone ke liye, Ghar mein kona dhundh raha hai

Woh apni tanhayee se, awaje wafa ki dene laga hai
Apna dil behlane ko phir se khillonaa dhundh raha hai

Kaatein kaatein neend mein bikhre, lahu luhaan har raat rahi
Yun hi nahi wo deewaana, phoolon ka bichouna dhundh raha hai

Behad khooooooooob.. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

thank you
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Quote from: Iqtedar on August 12, 2013, 11:39:05 PM
bahot khoooob waaah hi waah  Applause Clapping Smiley Applause

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Zabardast....super like sir
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