jaane na ....sheba

by Sheba on January 19, 2011, 01:04:20 PM
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                         na jaane mehfil-e-husn mein aaj mehtaab kyon hai,
                           na jaane mehfil -e-shamaa mein aaj aftaab kyon hai,

                           tujh se milne ko abb nahin khawahish meri,
                           na jaane nain phir aaj betaab kyon hai,

                           dikhaai nahin deti ulfat teri baaton mein,
                           na jaane chehra phir aaj shadaab kyon hai,

                           berukhi ne teri  dekho toad diya khawab mera,
                           na jaane hausla phir aaj surkhaab kyon hai,

                           dil-e- sheba ne basaye rakha hai pyaar tera,
                           na jaane andaaz mein phir  hijaab kyon hai...!

                          
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«Reply #1 on: January 19, 2011, 01:08:03 PM »
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achha hai---
lekin aapki jo style hai usse hatke hai.
bahut khub
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«Reply #2 on: January 19, 2011, 01:11:41 PM »
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sheba ji........kuch kahna chahta hu....

aaj apko pahli baar pada.....well yakin maniye itna impress kabhi nahi hua jitni apki poetry se hua hu.........ek choti si request he......jab bhi post kare tab mumkin ho to ek pm me link de diya kare muje.........kyuki bahot sari post hoti he yo pe so dekh nahi pate aur dhyan bhi nahi ata......aur me apki koi post  me miss nahi karna chahta......agar kuch bura laga ho to maaf kijiyega....but i dnt want miss even one........

bahot hi khubsurat likha he apne ye kalaam bhi....its superb..
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«Reply #3 on: January 19, 2011, 02:25:17 PM »
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                          na jaane mehfil-e-husn mein aaj mehtaab kyon hai,
                           na jaane mehfil -e-shamaa mein aaj aftaab kyon hai,

                           tujh se milne ko abb nahin khawahish meri,
                           na jaane nain phir aaj betaab kyon hai,

                           dikhti nahin ulfat baatun mein teri mujh ko,
                           na jaane chehra phir aaj shadaab kyon hai,

                           berukhi ne teri  dekho toad diya khawab mera,
                           na jaane hausla phir aaj surkhaab kyon hai,

                           dil to ye chahata hai tujhe bahut sheba,
                           na jaane andaaz mein phir aaj hijaab kyon hai...!

                          

Bahut khoob rahi aapki ghazal .... Sheba Ji !

dil se daad hazir hai ... !  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

aise hi likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... !

duaaon ke saath ... !
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Intezar
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«Reply #4 on: January 19, 2011, 07:31:57 PM »
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bahut badhiya likha hai aapne sheba ji...

mehekte phoolo se kya puchhte hain unki adaa 'Intezar'
kaanto se puchhiye ki kis tarah inhe mehfooz rakha hai... !

Intezar !
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«Reply #5 on: January 20, 2011, 05:45:21 AM »
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achha hai---
lekin aapki jo style hai usse hatke hai.
bahut khub
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thanx
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thank you nirala ji
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«Reply #6 on: January 20, 2011, 05:45:58 AM »
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sheba ji........kuch kahna chahta hu....

aaj apko pahli baar pada.....well yakin maniye itna impress kabhi nahi hua jitni apki poetry se hua hu.........ek choti si request he......jab bhi post kare tab mumkin ho to ek pm me link de diya kare muje.........kyuki bahot sari post hoti he yo pe so dekh nahi pate aur dhyan bhi nahi ata......aur me apki koi post  me miss nahi karna chahta......agar kuch bura laga ho to maaf kijiyega....but i dnt want miss even one........

bahot hi khubsurat likha he apne ye kalaam bhi....its superb..

shukria janab
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«Reply #7 on: January 21, 2011, 06:09:42 PM »
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Bahut Khub Sheba Ji U Hi likhte Rahiye Aur Khush Rahiye

Rishi
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«Reply #8 on: January 22, 2011, 10:06:28 AM »
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Bahut khoob rahi aapki ghazal .... Sheba Ji !

dil se daad hazir hai ... !  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

aise hi likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... !

duaaon ke saath ... !


thank you anshu ji
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«Reply #9 on: January 24, 2011, 09:12:43 AM »
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bahut badhiya likha hai aapne sheba ji...

mehekte phoolo se kya puchhte hain unki adaa 'Intezar'
kaanto se puchhiye ki kis tarah inhe mehfooz rakha hai... !

Intezar !

kya khoob kaha intezar sahab , shukria
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«Reply #10 on: January 31, 2011, 10:30:24 AM »
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Bahut Khub Sheba Ji U Hi likhte Rahiye Aur Khush Rahiye

Rishi

thanks rishi ji
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«Reply #11 on: January 31, 2011, 11:30:20 AM »
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Mast poem hai sheba ji.....

Yu tou bahut tere lehraate gesuyon ki tariff hai
Naa jaane phir bhee baalon mai Kheejaab kyu hai.....


                           na jaane mehfil-e-husn mein aaj mehtaab kyon hai,
                           na jaane mehfil -e-shamaa mein aaj aftaab kyon hai,

                           tujh se milne ko abb nahin khawahish meri,
                           na jaane nain phir aaj betaab kyon hai,

                           dikhti nahin ulfat baatun mein teri mujh ko,
                           na jaane chehra phir aaj shadaab kyon hai,

                           berukhi ne teri  dekho toad diya khawab mera,
                           na jaane hausla phir aaj surkhaab kyon hai,

                           dil to ye chahata hai tujhe bahut sheba,
                           na jaane andaaz mein phir  hijaab kyon hai...!

                           
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«Reply #12 on: February 01, 2011, 12:20:32 PM »
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Mast poem hai sheba ji.....

Yu tou bahut tere lehraate gesuyon ki tariff hai
Naa jaane phir bhee baalon mai Kheejaab kyu hai.....



hahahahahaha koyal ji bahut khoob
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«Reply #14 on: May 22, 2011, 01:51:37 PM »
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                        na jaane mehfil-e-husn mein aaj mehtaab kyon hai,
                           na jaane mehfil -e-shamaa mein aaj aftaab kyon hai,

                           tujh se milne ko abb nahin khawahish meri,
                           na jaane nain phir aaj betaab kyon hai,

                           dikhaai nahin deti ulfat teri baaton mein,
                           na jaane chehra phir aaj shadaab kyon hai,

                           berukhi ne teri  dekho toad diya khawab mera,
                           na jaane hausla phir aaj surkhaab kyon hai,

                           dil-e- sheba ne basaye rakha hai pyaar tera,
                           na jaane andaaz mein phir  hijaab kyon hai...!

                          
Bahut bahut Aur bahut Khoob Shebaji..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Kuch Main Apne Dil Ki bhi likhta Chaloon..Gustaaki Muaaf Kijiyega


Dil Ki Gustakiyon Ki Saza,
Humnein Kuch iss Kadar Paayi Hai

Heera Samajhkar jis Pathar Ko Tarasha Humne
 Uss Pathar Se Hi Chot Humne Khaayi Hai

 Usse Shikayat Bhi karte To Kya Karte Hum!!!!
Woh Paas Naa Ho to Bhi Saath Apne Ehsaas-e-Tanhai Hai

"Khwaish" Ko Naa Pucho  Uske Rone Ka Sabab!!
 Uski Aankh To yaaron!!! Bas Yuhi Bhar Aayi Hai...


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