jaata hoon(gul)

by gulzargul on September 01, 2008, 04:38:47 AM

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gulzargul

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esy apny makaa'n sy jaata hoon
jesy iss jahaa'n sy jaata hoon

tum ko paana meri zindigi hy
bin tumhary jaa'n sy jaata hoon

koi tau roky ga perdes jaany sy
ghar sy iss gumaa'n sy jaata hoon

nahien roka kisi ny keh diya alwida
haath hilaaty smaa'n sy jaata hoon

dil dooba toot gay pul aankhon ke
kesy apny aashiyaa'n sy jaata hoon

ab rishton ko piyar nahi pessa chahye
dil ke armaa'n sy jaata hoon


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Re: jaata hoon(gul)

«Reply #1 on: September 01, 2008, 04:57:07 AM »

bhai gulzar...bahoot hi khoob likha hai..aapne dil ko choo gai aapki shayri....taareef ke liye shabd nahi mere pass


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Re: jaata hoon(gul)

«Reply #2 on: September 01, 2008, 05:08:37 AM »

gulzar ji last 2 lines are amazing
keep it up


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Re: jaata hoon(gul)

«Reply #3 on: September 01, 2008, 05:20:18 AM »

thanks bekarar ji

gul


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Re: jaata hoon(gul)

«Reply #4 on: September 01, 2008, 05:21:26 AM »

thank u kaushik ji

gul


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Kanta

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Re: jaata hoon(gul)

«Reply #5 on: September 04, 2008, 05:57:51 PM »

acha likha he gulzar mahashay man ku pasand aya


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Re: jaata hoon(gul)

«Reply #6 on: September 05, 2008, 01:29:37 PM »

thanx a lot miss kanta ji ye mahashay ka kiya matlab hy?

gul


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Re: jaata hoon(gul)

«Reply #7 on: September 05, 2008, 03:43:41 PM »

adar kerte hen na jese samman dete hen kisi ku, means respectable honorable.


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Re: jaata hoon(gul)

«Reply #8 on: September 05, 2008, 09:26:11 PM »

Quote from: gulzargul on September 01, 2008, 04:38:47 AM

Bohot hi Khoob Gul.... Applause


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Re: jaata hoon(gul)

«Reply #9 on: September 07, 2008, 01:04:04 PM »

thanx kanta ji aap ny honor diya mujh ko mager herat hy koi kanta kisi gul ko honor kary

gul


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Re: jaata hoon(gul)

«Reply #10 on: September 07, 2008, 03:26:46 PM »

hey mein Kanta hu, kaan Ta nahi or Kanta means lovely girl beloved girl ok. gulzar mahashay wese Kaan Ta pul ki raksha kerta he koe pul tore to use chub jata he. Kaan Ta to pul se prem kerta he.