jab dhalega din tabhi aayegi shaam

by Syed Mohd Mahzar on March 27, 2013, 01:27:48 AM
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Sab barabar jisme wo mazhab islaam
badshah hakim ho ya adna ghulaam

ley to leyta mil raha tha saste daam
per khilaune per likha tha koi naam

ho gaya beti ka rishta tay magar
kayse ker payega muflis intezaam

beqarari besabab bekaar hay
jab dhalega din tabhi aayegi shaam

jitne hi tum zulm duniya me karo
zindagi leti hai sabse intaqaam

esmatein raho'n  me hi lutne lagi'n
kiya zarurat husn ka ab ho nelaam

              .............S.M.Mahzar
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«Reply #1 on: March 27, 2013, 02:04:46 AM »
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Quote from: Syed Mohd Mahzar on March 27, 2013, 01:27:48 AM
Sab barabar jisme wo mazhab islaam
badshah hakim ho ya adna ghulaam

ley to leyta mil raha tha saste daam
per khilaune per likha tha koi naam

ho gaya beti ka rishta tay magar
kayse ker payega muflis intezaam

beqarari besabab bekaar hay
jab dhalega din tabhi aayegi shaam

jitne hi tum zulm duniya me karo
zindagi leti hai sabse intaqaam

esmatein raho'n  me hi lutne lagi'n
kiya zarurat husn ka ab ho nelaam

              .............S.M.Mahzar


wah wah wah bahut khoob.........!
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«Reply #2 on: March 27, 2013, 02:31:31 AM »
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waahhhh janaab bahot khuubbb
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«Reply #4 on: March 27, 2013, 06:26:36 AM »
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NICE..!!
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Mazhar saheb, Assalam-o-alaikum. Janaab kya khoob ghazal kahi hai aapne, ghazab ka matla kaha hai, matle ne to dil loot liya, shaandaar aur laajawaab, baaqi sabhi ash'aar bhi behad achhe haiN. Bahut bahut mubarakbaad aur ek Rau qubool kijiye meri taraf se. YOIndia pe aate rahiye aur hameiN nawaazte rahiye apni ghazloN se.
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Quote from: Sheba on March 27, 2013, 02:04:46 AM

wah wah wah bahut khoob.........!
Sheba ji,
      ghazal pasand aane aur comment karne ka bahut bahut shukriya..........................
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Quote from: aahnaa on March 27, 2013, 02:31:31 AM
waahhhh janaab bahot khuubbb

aahnaa saheb,
            ghazal ki tareef me comment karne ka bahut bahut shukriyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on March 27, 2013, 04:17:36 AM
Bahut Khoob
Mr.Advo.RavinderaRavi,
             many many thanks for your valuable comment in praise of my "Ghazal".............
              with Regards
               S.M.Mahzar
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Quote from: Miru;;;; on March 27, 2013, 06:26:36 AM
NICE..!!
Miru;;;ji,
             bahut bahut shukriya...............
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Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on March 27, 2013, 07:30:26 AM
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Mazhar saheb, Assalam-o-alaikum. Janaab kya khoob ghazal kahi hai aapne, ghazab ka matla kaha hai, matle ne to dil loot liya, shaandaar aur laajawaab, baaqi sabhi ash'aar bhi behad achhe haiN. Bahut bahut mubarakbaad aur ek Rau qubool kijiye meri taraf se. YOIndia pe aate rahiye aur hameiN nawaazte rahiye apni ghazloN se.
Mohtaram Iftakhar Ahmad saheb,
             Aapka bahad mashkoor hoon ki aapko meri ghazal pasand aayi aur eyk Rau se nawaza.yeh wazahat bhi zaroori hai ki main koi mustanad shayer nahi hoon,sirf shauq hai,isi liye aapko meri ghazlo'n me kabhi MAKHTA nahi milega. bahut bahut shukriya...........
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«Reply #11 on: March 27, 2013, 01:33:12 PM »
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Behad umda kalaam rahi. sabhi ashaar khoob rahe. dheron daad
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             Aapki Tareef Aur Comment Ka Bahut Bahut Shukriya..............
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Behad umda kalaam rahi. sabhi ashaar khoob rahe. dheron daad
aqsh saheb,
           bahut bahut shukriya..............
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