Jab Jalana hi tha Aag-e- tanahi me........Pramod

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Jab Jalana hi tha Aag-e- tanahi me
to Mohabbat ka ye sawan barasya kyun tha
Husn to hota hi hai Barsne  ke liye
Sochta hun
Is  Barsaat me main nahaya kyun tha

                       Bhoole nahi bhoolta hun cehra uska
                       Aye Khuda tune wo cehra banaya kyun tha
                       Shajar se jhad ke  Jameen pe aa gira
                       Sochta hun
                       ye Shajar banaya kyun tha

Reh Gayi hain to bas ab yaadein uski
Jane use dil mein basaya kyun tha
Ujad ke jo ho gaya hai  khandahar(ruined)
sochta hun
ye khwabo ka Aashiya banaya kyun tha

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«Reply #1 on: May 05, 2012, 06:41:38 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: May 05, 2012, 07:10:19 AM »
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bahott bahot khub
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«Reply #3 on: May 05, 2012, 08:16:05 AM »
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Pramod Jee Aadaab!


Bahut khoob janab achche ahsaas O khayaal bayaaN kiye hai...
Bayaani meiN aur bhi purzor hote toH gazab ki kalaam ban jati...

Humari daad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye.. aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: May 05, 2012, 01:35:14 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: May 05, 2012, 01:38:34 PM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #6 on: May 06, 2012, 10:29:37 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob....pramodjii...beautiful.

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bahut bahut khoob....pramodjii...beautiful.

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«Reply #8 on: May 07, 2012, 01:46:12 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause   Bahuuuuuuuutttt hi khoob likha hai aapne Pramod ji....!!!
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«Reply #9 on: May 15, 2012, 05:00:48 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on May 05, 2012, 06:41:38 AM
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause   Bahuuuuuuuutttt hi khoob likha hai aapne Pramod ji....!!!
Hridayji. Aap ki hausla afjai ka andaaj hi nirala hai bahoot bahoot shukriya
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Pramod Jee Aadaab!


Bahut khoob janab achche ahsaas O khayaal bayaaN kiye hai...
Bayaani meiN aur bhi purzor hote toH gazab ki kalaam ban jati...

Humari daad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye.. aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile
Shukriya PArwaz sahab... Thankx alot
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bahut bahut khoob....pramodjii...beautiful.

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bahut khoob
Thank you very much saini sir
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