JABRAN HI HAAMI........................saru............155

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ज़बरन  ही  हामी  भराई  गई  थी
शादी   के  मंडप  बिठाई  गई  थी

अजीब सी हालत थी दिल की मगर
मुस्का  कर  फोटो खिचाई गई थी

ज़बान- ओ -आँखे  रखी बंद हमेशा
बातें   ही  ऐसी  सिखाई  गई  थी

गैरों  का  जीवन उजालों  से भरने
मानिंद  शमां  के  जलाई  गई थी

चाही  जो  मैने  हवाएँ  खुली  सी
रस्मों  की  बस दी  दुहाई गई थी

अश्को की  धारा  बहा ले चली थी
मेरी  तो  माँ  की  कमाई गई थी

हुनर को 'सरु' के सराहा कभी ना
बातें  ही  बातें   बनाई  गई  थी





Jabran  hi  haami bharaai  gai thi
Shaadi  ke  mandap bithaai  gai thi

Ajeeb si  haalat thi  dil ki magar
Muska kar photo khinchaai  gai thi

JubaaN-o-aankheiN rakhi band hamesha
Baarein  hi  aisi  sikhaai  gai thi

GairoN  ka  jeevan ujaaloN se bharne
Maanind  shaman  ke  jalaai  gai thi

Chahi  jo  maine  hawayeN  khuli si
RasmoN  ki  bas  Dee duhaai gai thi

AshquoN ki dhara bahaa le chali thi
Meri to  maaN  ki  kamaai  gai  thi

Hunar ko ‘saru’ ke saraaha kabhi na
BaateiN  hi  baateiN banaai gai thi
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«Reply #1 on: February 16, 2015, 10:22:39 AM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on February 16, 2015, 10:19:07 AM


ज़बरन  ही  हामी  भराई  गई  थी
शादी   के  मंडप  बिठाई  गई  थी

अजीब सी हालत थी दिल की मगर
मुस्का  कर  फोटो खिचाई गई थी

ज़बान- ओ -आँखे  रखी बंद हमेशा
बातें   ही  ऐसी  सिखाई  गई  थी

गैरों  का  जीवन उजालों  से भरने
मानिंद  शमां  के  जलाई  गई थी

चाही  जो  मैने  हवाएँ  खुली  सी
रस्मों  की  बस दी  दुहाई गई थी

अश्को की  धारा  बहा ले चली थी
मेरी  तो  माँ  की  कमाई गई थी

हुनर को 'सरु' के सराहा कभी ना
बातें  ही  बातें   बनाई  गई  थी



Bahut Khoob. Kya baat hai.Dil ko chhoo liya.
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 हौसला अफज़ाही के लिये  तहे दिल से बहुत 2 शुक्रिया ...........dksaxenaji
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Bahut Khoob. Kya baat hai.Dil ko chhoo liya.
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«Reply #3 on: February 16, 2015, 12:39:59 PM »
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WAAAAAAAAAAAH BAHUT KHOOB.....DIL SE DIL TAK....MUBARAK

HO...RAQEEB LUCKNOWI
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«Reply #4 on: February 16, 2015, 01:02:06 PM »
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Bahut umda saru ji. dheron daad.
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«Reply #5 on: February 16, 2015, 02:54:11 PM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on February 16, 2015, 10:19:07 AM


ज़बरन  ही  हामी  भराई  गई  थी
शादी   के  मंडप  बिठाई  गई  थी

अजीब सी हालत थी दिल की मगर
मुस्का  कर  फोटो खिचाई गई थी

ज़बान- ओ -आँखे  रखी बंद हमेशा
बातें   ही  ऐसी  सिखाई  गई  थी

गैरों  का  जीवन उजालों  से भरने
मानिंद  शमां  के  जलाई  गई थी

चाही  जो  मैने  हवाएँ  खुली  सी
रस्मों  की  बस दी  दुहाई गई थी

अश्को की  धारा  बहा ले चली थी
मेरी  तो  माँ  की  कमाई गई थी

हुनर को 'सरु' के सराहा कभी ना
बातें  ही  बातें   बनाई  गई  थी





Jabran  hi  haami bharaai  gai thi
Shaadi  ke  mandap bithaai  gai thi

Ajeeb si  haalat thi  dil ki magar
Muska kar photo khinchaai  gai thi

JubaaN-o-aankheiN rakhi band hamesha
Baarein  hi  aisi  sikhaai  gai thi

GairoN  ka  jeevan ujaaloN se bharne
Maanind  shaman  ke  jalaai  gai thi

Chahi  jo  maine  hawayeN  khuli si
RasmoN  ki  bas  Dee duhaai gai thi

AshquoN ki dhara bahaa le chali thi
Meri to  maaN  ki  kamaai  gai  thi

Hunar ko ‘saru’ ke saraaha kabhi na
BaateiN  hi  baateiN banaai gai thi






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«Reply #6 on: February 16, 2015, 04:09:14 PM »
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 हौसला अफज़ाही के लिये  तहे दिल से बहुत 2 शुक्रिया ..........satish ji.
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WAAAAAAAAAAAH BAHUT KHOOB.....DIL SE DIL TAK....MUBARAK

HO...RAQEEB LUCKNOWI
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bahut khooooooooooooob maza aagaya
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 हौसला अफज़ाही के लिये  तहे दिल से बहुत 2 शुक्रिया .........parinde ji..
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 हौसला अफज़ाही के लिये  तहे दिल से बहुत 2 शुक्रिया ..........Bahaayat ji.
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«Reply #10 on: February 16, 2015, 07:18:34 PM »
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waah waah waah waah Suresh ji, kyaa kehne, bahut khoob likhaa hai aapne....!!!
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bahut khoob... hamesha ki tarah
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 हौसला अफज़ाही के लिये  तहे दिल से बहुत 2 शुक्रिया .........surindarn ji..
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 हौसला अफज़ाही के लिये  तहे दिल से बहुत 2 शुक्रिया ..........Hriday ji.
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waah waah waah waah Suresh ji, kyaa kehne, bahut khoob likhaa hai aapne....!!!
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