JAL GAYA DIL CHARAAGH JALTE HI -Panna 3:Ghazals

waquif ansari

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«Reply #30 on: June 03, 2011, 09:35:25 AM »

Janab Khamosh Awaz Ji! Aadaab!

Yahan bahut kam log haiN jo fun and funkaar ki sahi maanoN meiN tajziya kar paate haiN aur shaayar aur shayari ki khul kar daad o tehseen se nawaazte haiN. Aapne apne dili jazbaat ka jis haseen pairaaye meiN izhaar e khayaal kiya hai who kam log hi kiya karte haiN. Aap jaise zi-sawoor shakhsiyatoN ke badaulat hi adab zinda aur taabindah hai. Aap ne mere baare meiN jo kuchh arz kiya hai, Allah kare main us pe khara utar jaaoN. Main to shaayari ka adna taalib-e-ilm hooN aur ta-umr taalib-e-ilm hi rahooNga wo is liye k asaatzah ne jo kuchh kah diya hai uska ashre-asheer bhi hum jaise tukbandi karne waale ke qalam se safha-e-qirtaas par aa jaaye to maiN samjhooNga k shaayari ki bahre-bekaraaN ka aik aadh qatra naseeb ho gaya. Apni koshish to poori hoti hai k behtar se behtari ki taraf qadam baRhta rahe. HaaN, aap jaise qadrdaanoN se na sirf hausla milta hai balki yuN samjheN k rahnumaaii haasil hoti hai. Bahut kam log haiN jo khul kar daad dete haiN. Ye meri khush-qismati hai k mujhe aap jaisa qadrdaan mila jo sher, shayari, sheriyat aur sher ki ramziyat ke saath saath fun ki baarikiyoN ko samajhta hai aur apne makhsoos andaaz meiN shaayar ko taareef o tauseefi kalmaat se nawaazta bhi hai. Aap khud ko anaaRi na kaheN. Aap ne jis aala-zarfi ka namoona pesh kiya hai aur jis tareeqe se apni aara se faizyaab kiya hai, uske liye naacheez aapka mashkoor o mamnoon hai. Aap se yahi darkhwast hai k isi tarah apne qeemti aar se bande ko nawaazte rahiyega. Aap khush raheN aabaad raheN aur mujhe bhi apni duwaaon meiN shareek rakkheN.

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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on May 30, 2011, 09:05:51 AM

yaad aane laga gunah tamaam.......

W.A JO YE ANDAAZ E BAYAAN HAI AAPKA YA PHIR KUCH HI LOG HAIN YAHAAN JO SIDHI TARAH SE AUR RAWAANI MEIN LIKH PAATE HAIN. YE AAPKI GHAZAL, NAZAM, AUR SHER LIKHNE KI QAABLIYAT KO DIKHATA HAI AUR ALLAH KISI KISI KO YE FUNN ATA KARTA HAI.MAIN BAHUT SE URDU KE SCHOLAR KO JAANTA HOON. MAGAR WO LIKH NAHIN PAATE

AAP KA YE KALAAM MUJH JAISA ANAADI KYA DAAD DEGAA. HAAN AGAR MAIN KUCH SEEKH SAKA AAPSE TO MERE LIYE FAKR KI BAAT HOGI.

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Re: JAL GAYA DIL CHARAAGH JALTE HI

«Reply #31 on: June 04, 2011, 01:40:13 PM »

waquif ansari sahab....itne logon ne itna kuch likh diya hai...ki ab kahne ko kuch baaqi bachna nahi.....bahoooooot umda likha aapne...aur hume bhi kuch seekhne ko mila....bahoot khoob


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«Reply #32 on: June 06, 2011, 07:51:09 AM »

waqif sahab aadab ,,

wah wah wah wah ,,, kya khoob ghazal kahi hai ,,, itni chooti bhr me aise mazameen ,, ye bus ap hi ki shaqsiyat ka hissa hai .. jis tarhan apne ghazal kahi hai usse ye baat zahir ho gaai ke app zahin nahi balke fateen hain ,, sahebe akhlaq nahi balke sahebe ikhlaas ho .. allah apko mazeed nawaze .. apki maujodgi bazm ki khushnasibi hai .. do sher ap hi ki zameen pe howe hain ...so apki nazr ...

Maal-o-zar ghar ki aas me bache
saare aaye hain baap marte hi ..

andhiyun ko khabar wo kar dega..
mere ghar me charag jalte hi ..

khadim

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Re: JAL GAYA DIL CHARAAGH JALTE HI

«Reply #33 on: June 06, 2011, 10:47:54 AM »

Beqaraar Ji! Adab!

Aapne ye kah kar aur beqaraar kar diya k “kahne ko kuchh baaqi bacha nahiN”. Aji Janab aapka ye kahna hi “gaagar meiN saagar” waali baat ho gayee. DoorandeshoN k jumle hi itne acerdaar hua karte haiN k uski ramziyat se baahar nikalna taqreeban namumkin sa hota hai aur is tarah ki nasri takhleeq bhi naayaab hua karti hai. Aapke is naayaab jumle ne to dil meiN halchal si paida kar di aur jiski lataafat se main abhi tak mehzooz ho raha hooN. Aapka tahedil se shukriya ada karta hooN ke aapne apni nawazisoN se nawaza. Seekhne sikhaane ka amal kuchh yuN hai k har koi aik doosre se kuchh na kuchh seekta rahta hai. Jise k main ne bhi aap se kuchh seekha. Main kya sikhaaonga k main to khud hi taalibe-ilm hooN. Aapka aikbaar phir se shukriya ada karta hooN is ummeed k saath k apni nawazisoN se isi tarah nawazte raheNge.

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Quote from: bekarar on June 04, 2011, 01:40:13 PM

waquif ansari sahab....itne logon ne itna kuch likh diya hai...ki ab kahne ko kuch baaqi bachna nahi.....bahoooooot umda likha aapne...aur hume bhi kuch seekhne ko mila....bahoot khoob


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Re: JAL GAYA DIL CHARAAGH JALTE HI

«Reply #34 on: June 13, 2011, 07:11:48 AM »

Qadeertoopchi Saheb, nawazish, inayat, muhabbat aapki. Aapke alfaaz paRhkar aisa laga k meri mehnat wasool ho gayee. Aapke jazbaat o ehsaasaat ki maiN qadr karta hooN aur aapne jo do sher kahe haiN wo aapki dili muhabbat ki tarjumaani karte haiN. Main phir se aapka shukriya ada karta hooN.

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Quote from: qadeer_junaid on June 06, 2011, 07:51:09 AM

Maal-o-zar ghar ki aas me bache
saare aaye hain baap marte hi ..

andhiyun ko khabar wo kar dega..
mere ghar me charag jalte hi ..

khadim

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Re: JAL GAYA DIL CHARAAGH JALTE HI

«Reply #35 on: June 13, 2011, 12:13:13 PM »

bahut sunder kriti
likhte rahiye,
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«Reply #36 on: June 21, 2011, 10:33:17 AM »

Aapka bahut bahut shukriya Janab Suresh Sangwan Saheb, taakheer se jawab dene k liye ma.azrat chaahta hooN.

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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on June 13, 2011, 12:13:13 PM

bahut sunder kriti
likhte rahiye,
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