Jalatey hain naye shamme umeedo.N ke jalane do

by livingbytheday on May 05, 2012, 06:40:03 AM
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Jalatey hain naye shamme umeedo.N ke jalane do
Khadi kar do koi deewar, hawao.N ko na aane do
Bahut mushqil se aaya hain, mere nazdeek mera ishq
Zara sa waqt ruk jao, is lamhe ko na jaane do

Unse ruksat pe sehme-sehme tey, kuch keh nahi paaye
Magar yaadon ke ashqon ko, mujhe dil se bahane do

Nahi anzaam ka hain darr, magar yeh arzoo bhi hain
Mujhe gur mout aani hain, unke bahon mein do

Bahut mumkin hain, meri baat sunkar na ruke lekinn
Mujhe taqdeer ka ek akhiri sikka chalane do

Koi toh dekhe lega ki, yeh unke naam ka gum hain
Laraj aaye hain jo ansoo, mujhe chehra chupane do

Dafan karte gaye ub tak ki jitney gum miley lekin
Yeh unke naam ka gum hain, isey jewar banane do

Mujhe manzoor hain yeh intezaar umra ka “Deepak”
Magar wo loutenge ek din, yeh wada kar ke jane do
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«Reply #1 on: May 05, 2012, 07:24:52 AM »
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NIce lines:)  but. thoda sa modify karke post karo to or bhi chamak aa jayegi....
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«Reply #2 on: May 05, 2012, 07:46:15 AM »
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achi koShish hai apki
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«Reply #3 on: May 05, 2012, 08:11:13 AM »
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Aadaab Janab!


Achche ahsaas O khayaal hai aur achchi koshish ...
Humari daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...


Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: May 05, 2012, 01:37:50 PM »
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Bhut umda, bhut achchi kalam
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«Reply #5 on: May 05, 2012, 01:40:11 PM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #6 on: May 06, 2012, 11:48:55 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob....ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
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«Reply #7 on: May 07, 2012, 01:48:44 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  dard se bhari hui aapki ye rachna humein bahut pasand aayi... bahut achcha likha hai aapne deepak ji....!!!
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«Reply #8 on: May 08, 2012, 11:46:48 AM »
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achi koShish hai apki

shukriyaaa
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«Reply #9 on: May 08, 2012, 11:47:21 AM »
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Aadaab Janab!


Achche ahsaas O khayaal hai aur achchi koshish ...
Humari daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...


Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile


shukriyaaa
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«Reply #10 on: May 08, 2012, 11:47:59 AM »
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Bhut umda, bhut achchi kalam

shukriyaa janab
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«Reply #11 on: May 08, 2012, 11:48:31 AM »
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bahut khoob

thank you sir
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«Reply #12 on: May 09, 2012, 10:20:45 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob....ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause

shukriyaa dollyji
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