JALNE WAALO.N SE PYAAR KARTE HAI.N...Hasan

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Zindagi  se  jo  pyaar karte hai.n ,
Ishq  bhi  eik  baar  karte  hai.n

Unn se lakho.n  fareb khaaye hai.n ,
Phir bhi  hum  aitbaar karte hai.n

Sohbat-e-gul  tumhei.n  mubarak  ho ,
Hum to kaa.nto.n  se pyaar karte hai,n

Hum ne  paaya  hai  zarf-e-parwaana ,
Jalne waalo.n  se pyaar karte hai.n

Hai  patah  tum  kabhi  na  aao  ge ,
Phir bhi hum  intezaar  karte  hai.n

Wo jo dubke hai.n  aasteeno.n  mei.n ,
Mauqa  milte  hi  waar  karte  hai.n

Humbhi rakhte hai.n jeib mei.n tasbeeh,
Raat-din  zikr-e-yaar   karte  hai.n
 
Unn se fursat milee to hum bhi 'Hasan',
Aur kuchh  kaar-o-baar  karte  hai.n
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«Reply #1 on: June 25, 2011, 10:19:11 AM »
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Waah ...waah Hasan Sahab
khoobsoorat ghazal kahee hai
dili daad qubool farmaayen..

Ek aur reqeust ke heading men
isee tarah aapka naam rahega to
aapko padhne ke lise jyada mehnat
naheen karnee padegi.

Mera ek unique research work Nazm on
Tata's Nano Car abhee bhee YO par hai
waqt mile to nazar-e-inaayat farmaayen.

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«Reply #2 on: June 25, 2011, 10:26:40 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on June 25, 2011, 05:40:46 AM
Zindagi  se  jo  pyaar karte hai.n ,
Ishq  bhi  eik  baar  karte  hai.n

Unn se lakho.n  fareb khaaye hai.n ,
Phir bhi  hum  aitbaar karte hai.n

Sohbat-e-gul  tumhei.n  mubarak  ho ,
Hum to kaa.nto.n  se pyaar karte hai,n

Hum ne  paaya  hai  zarf-e-parwaana ,
Jalne waalo.n  se pyaar karte hai.n

Hai  patah  tum  kabhi  na  aao  ge ,
Phir bhi hum  intezaar  karte  hai.n

Wo jo dubke hai.n  aasteeno.n  mei.n ,
Mauqa  milte  hi  waar  karte  hai.n

Humbhi rakhte hai.n jeib mei.n tasbeeh,
Raat-din  zikr-e-yaar   karte  hai.n
 
Unn se fursat milee to hum bhi 'Hasan',
Aur kuchh  kaar-o-baar  karte  hai.n







waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause



              din ke ujaale mein to sabhi dekhe hain unhein,
              hum to raat ke andhere mein unka dedaar karte hain
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«Reply #3 on: June 25, 2011, 11:36:21 AM »
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bahut khoob

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: June 25, 2011, 03:55:03 PM »
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Adil bechain saheb,Nawaish ke liye bahut bahut Shukriya.Hasan
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«Reply #5 on: June 25, 2011, 04:27:58 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: June 25, 2011, 05:47:01 PM »
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Sheba ji ,Hausla afzai ke liye bahut mashkoor hoon.Khush rahiye.Hasan
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«Reply #7 on: June 26, 2011, 03:24:53 AM »
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Wo jo dubke hai.n  aasteeno.n  mei.n ,
Mauqa  milte  hi  waar  karte  hai.n

Good One ... Siddiqui Sahab !

Very Impressive Creation ... !
Dil Se Daad Hazir Hai .. Qubuul FarmaayeN ...  Applause Applause Applause

Yunhi Likhte RaheN ... Khush RaheN ... !

DuaaoN Ke Saath ... !
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«Reply #8 on: June 26, 2011, 05:12:14 AM »
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Sanjeev kash ji,Shukriya.Naacheez ki hausla afzai Karte rahiyega.Khush rahiye.Hasan
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«Reply #9 on: June 26, 2011, 05:22:25 AM »
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Anshumali ji,Daad ke liye aur aapke khoobsurat alfaaz ke liye mashkoor hoo.n. Yeh Ghazal 4th she'r (jiska 2nd misra title mein diya hai)ki badaulat hui hai.Uss per bhi apni raai se nawaaziye ga to karam hoga.Hasan
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«Reply #10 on: June 26, 2011, 05:32:44 AM »
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Satish shukla Saheb,Aap ke mohabbat bhare alfaaz ke liye bahut bahut Shukriya.Jawab mei.n taakheer sharmindagi ki wajah se ho gai kyuunki mai.n waqai Tata wali nazm padhne se chook gaya .Aap ki nazm se mutalliq jawab mei.n bhi arz kiya  hai.Aap ke tabsire se hausla milta hai .Silsila Qaaim rakhiye ga.Hasan
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«Reply #11 on: June 26, 2011, 11:11:18 AM »
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bht khoob siddiqui ji...
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«Reply #12 on: June 26, 2011, 12:16:08 PM »
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Manzil e ishq ji,hausla afzaai ke liye bahut mamnoon hoo.n.duaon mei.n yaad rakhiye.khush rahiye.FHSiddiqui
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«Reply #13 on: June 27, 2011, 06:58:11 AM »
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Janab Hasan Saheb! AOA !

bahut hi nikhat o noor se bhari hui ghazal hai ye aapki. Ishq, mohabbat, husn o ulfan ki khoobsurat tarjumani hai aapki is ghazal meiN. Is haseen o jameel ghazal ko paRhne ke baad jo tasawwur dil o dimaagh par chhaa gaya use kuchh yuN bayaN karna chaahta hooN:

Dekh kar chehra-e-HASAN kaamil
Tujh pe hum jaaN nicaar karte haiN

Aik munfaridm me.aari ghazal k liye hazaroN daad qubul kijiye.

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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on June 25, 2011, 05:40:46 AM
Zindagi  se  jo  pyaar karte hai.n ,
Ishq  bhi  eik  baar  karte  hai.n

Unn se lakho.n  fareb khaaye hai.n ,
Phir bhi  hum  aitbaar karte hai.n

Sohbat-e-gul  tumhei.n  mubarak  ho ,
Hum to kaa.nto.n  se pyaar karte hai,n

Hum ne  paaya  hai  zarf-e-parwaana ,
Jalne waalo.n  se pyaar karte hai.n

Hai  patah  tum  kabhi  na  aao  ge ,
Phir bhi hum  intezaar  karte  hai.n

Wo jo dubke hai.n  aasteeno.n  mei.n ,
Mauqa  milte  hi  waar  karte  hai.n

Humbhi rakhte hai.n jeib mei.n tasbeeh,
Raat-din  zikr-e-yaar   karte  hai.n
 
Unn se fursat milee to hum bhi 'Hasan',
Aur kuchh  kaar-o-baar  karte  hai.n
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«Reply #14 on: June 27, 2011, 07:41:43 AM »
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Waquif Ansari Saheb,AOA.Aap ka kaise shukriya ada Karoo.n.Aap ke khoobsurat lab-o-lahje mein daad paakar hausla to milta hi hai,roo baroo guftugu ka maazaa aa jaata hai.Itne pyare pyare alfaaz aur filbadeeh ashaar pata nahii.n kahaa,n se le aate hai.n ,Lekin in se shaairi ki zameen phir se istaaar hone lagti hai.Magar Waquif bhai Shikayat yeh hai ki,
  Ab  bhi woh she'r hai nazar andaaz,
  Jis ko jaan-e-Ghazal samajhta hoo.n
                               Khuloos ke liye Shukriya.
                                                        Hasan
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