JALTAA RAHA HOGA........... MUSAAHIB

by Bishwajeet 'Musaahib' on February 05, 2014, 04:53:14 PM
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कभी जब रात में वो चाँद तनहा सा रहा होगा...
लगे खुद पे पुराने दाग वो धुलता रहा होगा...

बड़ी बेचैन होकर वो लहर आवाज़ देती है...
पड़ा मज़बूर वो साहिल वहीँ सुनता रहा होगा...

भले ही वो बगावत से डरा दिन में छुपा होगा...
मगर बन रात में जुगनू कहीं मिलता रहा होगा...

चरागों को कभी खुद के लिए जलते नहीं देखा...
निभाने रस्म कोई आपका जलता रहा होगा...

अलग ये बात है की वो नहीं आया नज़र तुमको...
कटी है डोर फिर भी देर तक उड़ता रहा होगा...

निशाने पे किसी के तुम कभी यूँ ही नहीं रहते...
"मुसाहिब" आपका उनसे भी कुछ रिश्ता रहा होगा...


Kabhi  jab raat me wo chand  tanhaa sa raha hoga ...
Lage khud pe puraane  daag wo dhultaa raha hoga ...

Badii bechain hokar wo lehar aawaaz deti hai...
Padaa mazboor wo saahil  wahin suntaa raha hoga...

Bhale hi wo bagawat se daraa din me chuupa hoga...
Magar ban raat me  jugnu kahin miltaa raha hoga...

Chiragon ko kabhi khud ke liye jalte nahin dekha...
Nibhane rasm koii  aap ka  jaltaa raha hoga...

Alag ye baat hai ki wo nahin aaya nazar tumko...
Katii hai  dor fir bhi der tak udtaa raha hoga...

Nishane pe kisi ke tum kabhi yun hi nahin rahte...  
"Musaahib" aapkaa  unse  bhi kuch rishtaa raha hoga...
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वाह....वाह....बहुत ही खूब....ढेरों दाद और दिली मुबारकबाद कुबुल कीजिये.....

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bahut bahut khoob..........

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Bahut badhiya
Bahr ki manzil paar ho gayee hai.
ab yahan se khayaalon ko sametne par dhyaan dena hoga.
koshish karen ki kuch innovative likhen..
repeatition bhi avoid karen..maqta
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«Reply #7 on: February 06, 2014, 02:27:02 AM »
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Kabhi  jab raat me wo chand  tanhaa sa raha hoga ...
Lage khud pe puraane  daag wo dhultaa raha hoga ...

Badii bechain hokar wo lehar aawaaz deti hai...
Padaa mazboor wo saahil  wahin suntaa raha hoga...

Bhale hi wo bagawat se daraa din me chuupa hoga...
Magar ban raat me  jugnu kahin miltaa raha hoga...

Chiragon ko kabhi khud ke liye jalte nahin dekha...
Nibhane rasm koii  aap ka  jaltaa raha hoga...

Alag ye baat hai ki wo nahin aaya nazar tumko...
Katii hai  dor fir bhi der tak udtaa raha hoga...

Nishane pe kisi ke tum kabhi yun hi nahin rahte... 
"Musaahib" aapkaa  unse  bhi kuch rishtaa raha hoga...



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mind blowing alfaaz sir ji
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«Reply #8 on: February 06, 2014, 02:34:13 AM »
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निशाने पे किसी के तुम कभी यूँ ही नहीं रहते...
"मुसाहिब" आपका उनसे भी कुछ रिश्ता रहा होगा...
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«Reply #9 on: February 06, 2014, 02:56:48 AM »
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Quote from: Bishwajeet 'Musaahib' on February 05, 2014, 04:53:14 PM
कभी जब रात में वो चाँद तनहा सा रहा होगा...
लगे खुद पे पुराने दाग वो धुलता रहा होगा...

बड़ी बेचैन होकर वो लहर आवाज़ देती है...
पड़ा मज़बूर वो साहिल वहीँ सुनता रहा होगा...

भले ही वो बगावत से डरा दिन में छुपा होगा...
मगर बन रात में जुगनू कहीं मिलता रहा होगा...

चरागों को कभी खुद के लिए जलते नहीं देखा...
निभाने रस्म कोई आपका जलता रहा होगा...

अलग ये बात है की वो नहीं आया नज़र तुमको...
कटी है डोर फिर भी देर तक उड़ता रहा होगा...

निशाने पे किसी के तुम कभी यूँ ही नहीं रहते...
"मुसाहिब" आपका उनसे भी कुछ रिश्ता रहा होगा...


Kabhi  jab raat me wo chand  tanhaa sa raha hoga ...
Lage khud pe puraane  daag wo dhultaa raha hoga ...
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Badii bechain hokar wo lehar aawaaz deti hai...
Padaa majboor wo saahil  wahin suntaa raha hoga...
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Bhale hi wo bagawat se daraa din me chuupa hoga...
Magar ban raat me  jugnu kahin miltaa raha hoga...
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Chiragon ko kabhi khud ke liye jalte nahin dekha...
Nibhane rasm koii  aap ka  jaltaa raha hoga...
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Alag ye baat hai ki wo nahin aaya nazar tumko...
Katii hai  dor fir bhi der tak udtaa raha hoga...
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Nishane pe kisi ke tum kabhi yun hi nahin rahte...  
"Musaahib" aapkaa  unse  bhi kuch rishtaa raha hoga...
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«Reply #10 on: February 06, 2014, 03:04:48 AM »
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waah waah Musaahib jee bahut khoob, khaas taur pe ye sher bahut pasand aaya:

चरागों को कभी खुद के लिए जलते नहीं देखा...
निभाने रस्म कोई आपका जलता रहा होगा...

DheroN daad aur ek Rau meri taraf se.
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So nice.
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