Jazbaa-e-aashiqee /जज़्बा -ए-आशिक़ी.............................SAINI

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«Reply #15 on: July 10, 2012, 09:50:48 AM »
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Jazbaa-e-aashiqee   ab   itne   ufaan  par  hai.
Charchaa-e-ishq  meraa  sab  kee zabaan par hai.

Izhaar  maine  saaree baatoN  kaa kar diyaa hai.
Bas  baat  ab  to  tere  deen-o-imaan  par  hai.

Taanee   huiN   kamaane   saadhe  hue  nishaane.
Bekhauf   par   parindaa apnee  udaan  par  hai.
 
Dam  hai  to sher par aa neeche se waar kar too.
Bas  jaan  to  salaamat  teree  machaan par hai.

Aadee  hue  haiN  ab  to  sab  marne  maarne ke.
Saamaan  maut  kaa  ab  har  ik  dukaan par hai.

Bhartaa naheeN hai teraa kyaa pet apne ghar meN.
Jo   ab  nigaah  teree  saare  jahaan  par  hai.

E  barq  too  inaayat  girne  se  pahle  karnaa.
LaakhoN  kaa  qarzaa baaqee mere makaan par hai.

Ilzaam  mujhpe  aayad  hai  teree  aashiqee kaa.
Aadil   kaa  faislaa  ab  tere  byaan  par  hai.

Mahfil  meN  log ab kyooN kam se lage haiN aane.
‘Saini’ sukhanwaree  kee ab too dhalaan par hai.
 
Dr.Surendra Saini   

जज़्बा -ए-आशिक़ी  अब  इतने  उफान  पर है |

चर्चा -ए-इश्क़  मेरा  सब  की  ज़बान पर है ||
 

इज़्हार  मैंने  सारी   बातों  का कर  दिया  है |

बस  बात  अब तो तेरे दीन-ओ-इमान पर है ||
 

तानी  हुईं   कमाने   साधे    हुए  निशाने |

बेख़ौफ़  पर  परिंदा   अपनी  उड़ान पर  है ||
 

दम  है तो  शेर  पर आ नीचे से वार कर तू |

बस  जान  तो  सलामत  तेरी मचान पर है ||
 

आदी  हुए  हैं अब   तो  सब मरने मारने के |

सामान  मौत  का  अब हर इक दुकान पर है ||
 

भरता  नहीं  है  तेरा  क्या  पेट अपने घर में |

जो   अब  निगाह  तेरी  सारे जहान पर  है ||
 

ए  बर्क़  तू  इनायत  गिरने  से पहले करना |

लाखों   का  क़र्ज़ा  बाक़ी  मेरे मकान पर है ||


इल्ज़ाम  मुझ  पे  आयद  है तेरी आशिक़ी का |

आदिल  का  फ़ैसला  अब  तेरे बयान पर है ||
 

महफ़िल में लोग अब क्यूँ कम से लगे हैं आने |

‘सैनी ’ सुखनवरी   की अब तू ढलान पर है ||
 

डा० सुरेन्द्र सैनी   

 


Lovely Gazal Saini Sir bahut hi joshili aur larazti hui gazal ke liye dheroN Mubarkbaad qabool kariye sir AUr meri taraf se 1 Rau bhi kabool kariye.
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wah wah wah saini ji ... wah kya khoob ... wah wah ....
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