jee ke main kiya karooN ab tumhaarey binaa

by masoodhassaas on August 16, 2011, 01:37:37 AM
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aadaab dosto
aap ki mahfil me pahlee baar haazir ho rahaa hun ummeed ki doa den gey
nazm la unwaan hai
dard e judaayi

meri nazroN meN yaksaaN bahaar o khezaaN
“ maiN yahaN too wahaaN zindagee hai kahaN “

Zindagee kee ye kaisee ghadee hai sanam
Zindagee ne kiye mujh ko laakhoN sitam
Kiyaa se kiyaa ho gaye too arab maiN ajam
Kah ke itnaa hi maiN toDtee hun qalam

dooriyoN ne hameN kar diyaa raayegaaN
“ maiN yahaN too wahaaN zindagee hai kahaN “

saaNs aatee to hai par machaltee nahi
kaaT luN din agar raat dhaltee nahi
kaisee tasweer hai jo badaltee nahi
main ki khud ke saNbhaale saNbhaltee nahi

gham ki is dhoop me too meraa saayebaaN
“ maiN yahaN too wahaaN zindagee hai kahaN “

Yaad aate hain kujh ko wo din raat ab
Hoti rahti thi khushyoN ki barsaat jab
Dard itna abadhaa kaaNp jaatey haiN lab
Bas doaa hai mere kaash sun le ye rab

Teri baaNheN hoN aor dharkaneN hoN jawaaN
“ maiN yahaN too wahaaN zindagee hai kahaN “

Tum gaye har khushee mujh se katraa gayee
Rooh tharraa gayee aaNkh pathraa gayee
Aayina main ne dekhaa to ghabraa gayee
Pholl soorat main thee kiyaa se kiyaa ho gayee

Jee ke main kiyaa karuN ab tumhaare  binaaN
“ maiN yahaN too wahaaN zindagee hai kahaN “
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«Reply #1 on: August 16, 2011, 06:56:30 AM »
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baht ache ehsaas hain kalaam ke--
dard bhari aapki ghazal ko hazaaron daad.

ye line--//zindgi ne kiye mujh ko lakhon sitam//
yaha--!! zindgai ne diye mujhko lakho sitam ya fir--
!! zidgi ne kiye mujh par lakho sitam !! hoga mere khayal se--

any way its a very gud poetry by u Usual Smile
WELCOME TO YOINDIA Usual Smile

HANSTE rahiye
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«Reply #2 on: August 16, 2011, 03:47:40 PM »
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Masood Sahaab Aadaab!

    Aapka YOIndia ki mehfil meiN isteqbaal hai Usual Smile
Aap jaisi mashoor O maruf hasti ko yahaaN dekhkar
badi khushi huyi... Usual Smile

    Janab aapki kalaam kitne saare raNg bikher sakti
hai hum jaante hai.. Usual Smile Masha Allah aapki yeH nazm
bhi behad khoob rahi... Usual Smile Is dilfareb nazm par
dil se daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

    Janab aapse khususi guzarish raheNgi ke yahaaN aate
rahiye... Aur apne kalaamoN se aur khushnuma khayaaloN
se nawaazte rahiye... Hum aur aik baat aapse khususi
kaheNge ke aap yahaaN ke aur members ki houNsla afzai
kareN aur apne ilm ki roshni se aur rahnumai se nawaazte
raheN Usual Smile

Aate rahiye...... Khush O aabaad rahiye... Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: August 16, 2011, 03:51:31 PM »
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Masood Sahaab Aadaab!

    Aapka YOIndia ki mehfil meiN isteqbaal hai Usual Smile
Aap jaisi mashoor O maruf hasti ko yahaaN dekhkar
badi khushi huyi... Usual Smile

    Janab aapki kalaam kitne saare raNg bikher sakti
hai hum jaante hai.. Usual Smile Masha Allah aapki yeH nazm
bhi behad khoob rahi... Usual Smile Is dilfareb nazm par
dil se daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

    Janab aapse khususi guzarish raheNgi ke yahaaN aate
rahiye... Aur apne kalaamoN se aur khushnuma khayaaloN
se nawaazte rahiye... Hum aur aik baat aapse khususi
kaheNge ke aap yahaaN ke aur members ki houNsla afzai
kareN aur apne ilm ki roshni se aur rahnumai se nawaazte
raheN Usual Smile

Aap se aik guzarish hai ke is masle par zarra apne ilm
ki roshni kareN...

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Aate rahiye...... Khush O aabaad rahiye... Usual Smile
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile
         

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«Reply #4 on: August 16, 2011, 05:50:17 PM »
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Masood ji... bahut Khoob...

 Applause Applause Applause Applause

Janab ye thoda lamba tha....... tongue3
par dil se likhi gayi thi to bahut jyada achha tha... Usual Smile Usual Smile

plz dont mind...

dhero daad,,... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: August 16, 2011, 09:53:18 PM »
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Quote from: sarfira on August 16, 2011, 06:56:30 AM
baht ache ehsaas hain kalaam ke--
dard bhari aapki ghazal ko hazaaron daad.

ye line--//zindgi ne kiye mujh ko lakhon sitam//
yaha--!! zindgai ne diye mujhko lakho sitam ya fir--
!! zidgi ne kiye mujh par lakho sitam !! hoga mere khayal se--

any way its a very gud poetry by u Usual Smile
WELCOME TO YOINDIA Usual Smile

HANSTE rahiye
tata Usual Smile


aap ke khair maqdamee kalimaat ka be had shukriyah khosoosan aap ne jis andaaz me nao waarid ki himmat afzaayi ki kalaam ko saraahaa yahaan tak ki typing ghalatee se aagaah kiyaa in tamaam omoor pe main aap ka shukr guzaar hun
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«Reply #6 on: August 16, 2011, 09:56:02 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on August 16, 2011, 03:47:40 PM
Masood Sahaab Aadaab!

    Aapka YOIndia ki mehfil meiN isteqbaal hai Usual Smile
Aap jaisi mashoor O maruf hasti ko yahaaN dekhkar
badi khushi huyi... Usual Smile

    Janab aapki kalaam kitne saare raNg bikher sakti
hai hum jaante hai.. Usual Smile Masha Allah aapki yeH nazm
bhi behad khoob rahi... Usual Smile Is dilfareb nazm par
dil se daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

    Janab aapse khususi guzarish raheNgi ke yahaaN aate
rahiye... Aur apne kalaamoN se aur khushnuma khayaaloN
se nawaazte rahiye... Hum aur aik baat aapse khususi
kaheNge ke aap yahaaN ke aur members ki houNsla afzai
kareN aur apne ilm ki roshni se aur rahnumai se nawaazte
raheN Usual Smile

Aate rahiye...... Khush O aabaad rahiye... Usual Smile
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile
         

aadaab
aap ki garakjooshi aor hkoloos ka tazkerah na kiya ajaaye to zulm ho gaa aap ne mujh naacheez ko aaftaab o maahtaab banaayaa halaan ki main is ke laayeq to nahi thaa magar aap ke husn e zann ne aise jumley takhleeq karwaaye us ka main tahe dil se mashkoor hun ummeed hai ki ye saath yun hi bana arahe gaa oar aap ki inaayaten yun hi barastee rahen gee
bahot shukriyah aap kaa
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«Reply #7 on: August 16, 2011, 10:00:42 PM »
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Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on August 16, 2011, 05:50:17 PM

Masood ji... bahut Khoob...

 Applause Applause Applause Applause

Janab ye thoda lamba tha....... tongue3
par dil se likhi gayi thi to bahut jyada achha tha... Usual Smile Usual Smile

plz dont mind...

dhero daad,,... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



aadaab
janaab taoheed saahab
aap ka kahnaa belaa shubhaa jaayiz hai aor main bazaat e khud kalaam me tool e laa yaanee ko khataa ke zu,mrey me tasuwur kartaa hun ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, magar merey ajnabee dost ye nazm kisee ne kisee ke liye kahlawaaya athaa is haisiyat se ki us me aasaan lafzon ka istemaal ho kiun ki un khaatoon ke shaohar taazah taazah dubai gaye hain dard zaahir hai be panaah thaa to main un ki tarjumaanee ke faraayiz anjaam diye the is ke sewaa kuchh nahi
haan ye baat mahall e ghaor hai ki main ne amadan isey yahaan kiun post kiyaa to janaab baat itnee see hai jin saahab ne mujhey aap ki bazm ka raasta dikhlaayaa hai unhon ne farmaayaa thaa ki bazm me kasrat un hazraat ki hai jo saqeel urdu se naa balad hain
bahar kaif main har chehaar jaanib se aap ki mohabbat ko salaam karta ahun aor shukriyah bhi adaa kartaa hun
 
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«Reply #8 on: August 18, 2011, 09:28:58 AM »
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masood saheb,bahut khooburat nazm inaayat ki.mubarakbaad aur daad qubool kijiye.Hasan
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«Reply #9 on: August 24, 2011, 10:14:29 PM »
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masood saheb,bahut khooburat nazm inaayat ki.mubarakbaad aur daad qubool kijiye.Hasan
aadaab
buzurg main shukr guzaar hun aap ki inaayat ka
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«Reply #10 on: August 26, 2011, 11:40:10 AM »
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Quote from: masoodhassaas on August 16, 2011, 01:37:37 AM
aadaab dosto
aap ki mahfil me pahlee baar haazir ho rahaa hun ummeed ki doa den gey
nazm la unwaan hai
dard e judaayi

meri nazroN meN yaksaaN bahaar o khezaaN
“ maiN yahaN too wahaaN zindagee hai kahaN “

Zindagee kee ye kaisee ghadee hai sanam
Zindagee ne kiye mujh ko laakhoN sitam
Kiyaa se kiyaa ho gaye too arab maiN ajam
Kah ke itnaa hi maiN toDtee hun qalam

dooriyoN ne hameN kar diyaa raayegaaN
“ maiN yahaN too wahaaN zindagee hai kahaN “

saaNs aatee to hai par machaltee nahi
kaaT luN din agar raat dhaltee nahi
kaisee tasweer hai jo badaltee nahi
main ki khud ke saNbhaale saNbhaltee nahi

gham ki is dhoop me too meraa saayebaaN
“ maiN yahaN too wahaaN zindagee hai kahaN “

Yaad aate hain kujh ko wo din raat ab
Hoti rahti thi khushyoN ki barsaat jab
Dard itna abadhaa kaaNp jaatey haiN lab
Bas doaa hai mere kaash sun le ye rab

Teri baaNheN hoN aor dharkaneN hoN jawaaN
“ maiN yahaN too wahaaN zindagee hai kahaN “

Tum gaye har khushee mujh se katraa gayee
Rooh tharraa gayee aaNkh pathraa gayee
Aayina main ne dekhaa to ghabraa gayee
Pholl soorat main thee kiyaa se kiyaa ho gayee

Jee ke main kiyaa karuN ab tumhaare  binaaN
“ maiN yahaN too wahaaN zindagee hai kahaN “




welcome to yoindia Janab Masood Hassas Saheb. Is forum mein aapko dekhkar az-hud khushi hui. Kamaal ki nazm kah daali aapne, ye is tarah ki nazm hai jo Hindi Film k laiq hai. Aisi naayaab nazm k liye hazaroN daad aur mubarakbad qubul kijiye aur is BAZM ko raunaq-afroz karte rahiye.

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«Reply #11 on: August 26, 2011, 11:47:56 AM »
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Quote from: masoodhassaas on August 16, 2011, 01:37:37 AM
aadaab dosto
aap ki mahfil me pahlee baar haazir ho rahaa hun ummeed ki doa den gey
nazm la unwaan hai
dard e judaayi

meri nazroN meN yaksaaN bahaar o khezaaN
“ maiN yahaN too wahaaN zindagee hai kahaN “

Zindagee kee ye kaisee ghadee hai sanam
Zindagee ne kiye mujh ko laakhoN sitam
Kiyaa se kiyaa ho gaye too arab maiN ajam
Kah ke itnaa hi maiN toDtee hun qalam

dooriyoN ne hameN kar diyaa raayegaaN
“ maiN yahaN too wahaaN zindagee hai kahaN “

saaNs aatee to hai par machaltee nahi
kaaT luN din agar raat dhaltee nahi
kaisee tasweer hai jo badaltee nahi
main ki khud ke saNbhaale saNbhaltee nahi

gham ki is dhoop me too meraa saayebaaN
“ maiN yahaN too wahaaN zindagee hai kahaN “

Yaad aate hain kujh ko wo din raat ab
Hoti rahti thi khushyoN ki barsaat jab
Dard itna abadhaa kaaNp jaatey haiN lab
Bas doaa hai mere kaash sun le ye rab

Teri baaNheN hoN aor dharkaneN hoN jawaaN
“ maiN yahaN too wahaaN zindagee hai kahaN “

Tum gaye har khushee mujh se katraa gayee
Rooh tharraa gayee aaNkh pathraa gayee
Aayina main ne dekhaa to ghabraa gayee
Pholl soorat main thee kiyaa se kiyaa ho gayee

Jee ke main kiyaa karuN ab tumhaare  binaaN
“ maiN yahaN too wahaaN zindagee hai kahaN “






Waah waah Waah!!!!

Bahut Bahut Khoob janaab!!!

Jazbaaton se Labrez Bahut Khoobsurat Nazm Pesh Ki Hai Aapne..

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«Reply #12 on: August 27, 2011, 02:19:30 AM »
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welcome to yoindia Janab Masood Hassas Saheb. Is forum mein aapko dekhkar az-hud khushi hui. Kamaal ki nazm kah daali aapne, ye is tarah ki nazm hai jo Hindi Film k laiq hai. Aisi naayaab nazm k liye hazaroN daad aur mubarakbad qubul kijiye aur is BAZM ko raunaq-afroz karte rahiye.

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janaab waaquif bhai aap ki mohabbat ka maqrooz hun aor aap ke ekhlaas ka tah e dil se qadr daan bhi aap jaisey ahbaab har kisee ko naseeb hon is ki doaa hai bahot bahot shukriya khair maqdamee kalimaat kaa
jahaan tak nazmka sawaal hai to main aap ko bataa dun ki kisee khaatoon ke shaohar  haal hi me qatr gaye hain aor un ko tanhaayee ka ehsaas ho rahaa thaa bil ittefaaq yahee gaanaa sun liyaa ,,,,, too wahaan ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,aor kahney lageen ajeeb dard hai is me ai kaash aap hi likh detey ,,, aor hozoor naacheez ne un ke hisaab se sastey alfaaz me  un ke liye kuchh god gaad diyaa ,,yahee wajah hai ki us me ARAB oar AJAM ka tazkerah aayaa hai
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«Reply #13 on: August 27, 2011, 02:21:29 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on August 26, 2011, 11:47:56 AM

Waah waah Waah!!!!

Bahut Bahut Khoob janaab!!!

Jazbaaton se Labrez Bahut Khoobsurat Nazm Pesh Ki Hai Aapne..

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aadaab
badey bhai aap ka aanaa mobaarak ho badaa achha alagaa aap ko yahaan dekh ke behad shukriyah
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