Jee rahaa hoon: haqeeqat mein beyjaan hoon! -Panna 2:Ghazals

abdbundeli

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«Reply #15 on: June 30, 2009, 02:12:35 PM »

Quote from: Nira on June 30, 2009, 01:52:34 PM

abd ji
aapko aaj pahli baar padha bahut acha laga
aap yunhi likhte rahiye hume aapki ghazalon ka intazaar rahega
nira

Thanks a lot, Nira ji! Gaye haftey kayee gazaleyn 'post' keen theen! You may plz. visit my profile at:
http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/profile.html;u=23622;sa=showPosts;start=15
and then a few latter pages as well.
- abd bundeli


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Re: Zee rahaa hoon: haqeeqat mein beyzaan hoon!

«Reply #16 on: June 30, 2009, 08:05:48 PM »

Delighted Mr. Abdbundeli, a little correction

Zee = jee and beyzaan = beyjaan
In Urdu Z Ze and J Jeem are two different letters and with different pronunciation. You have written word Beyjaan correctly in the middle.
Thanks MH


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abdbundeli

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Re: Jee rahaa hoon: haqeeqat mein beyjaan hoon!

«Reply #17 on: July 01, 2009, 07:02:46 AM »

Quote from: MHussain on June 30, 2009, 08:05:48 PM

Thanks Mr MHussain!
You're perfectly correct! Most of my data entry work is done by my DEO, who knows almost no Urdu! I, generally, do the copy-paste work! I'd noticed the mistakes; but forgot to correct the title. I don't say that I know a lot of Urdu or that my Urdu is good. I also make a lot many mistakes in writing Urdu words; my mother tongue being Hindi. As Urdu uses a combination of Arabian and Farsi alphabets, all Arabian words are to be written as they are written in the Arabian language, and Farsi words as written in Farsi; it becomes pretty difficult for a person like me, who though knows a huge number of Urdu words, to write them correctly. I'm sorry, but I can't help: yet I've improved to some extent, and I'm endeavoring to improve it further! I took just 4 month's informal Urdu education; otherwise, the medium of my education were Hindi / English or Sanskrit languages at different stages of my studies. You may visit the last page of my YoIndia profile, to know a little more about me!
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MHussain

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Re: Jee rahaa hoon: haqeeqat mein beyjaan hoon!

«Reply #18 on: July 02, 2009, 02:41:03 PM »

Dear sir,
pleased to have your response, I have seen many members who can't write Urdu with perfection which is not a problem, but they don't even try to cope with the correct pronunciation of Urdu word, and this is not as easy as I feel.
But, as you know most of the words if written incorrect reflects a different meaning, as Jee = living and Zee = keeper of some quality as Zee-shan, if one write zeeshan as jeeshan, it's total loss of meaning.

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MH


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abdbundeli

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Re: Jee rahaa hoon: haqeeqat mein beyjaan hoon!

«Reply #19 on: July 03, 2009, 06:02:57 AM »

Quote from: MHussain on July 02, 2009, 02:41:03 PM

You're absolutely right! Thanks!
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Re: Jee rahaa hoon: haqeeqat mein beyjaan hoon!

«Reply #20 on: July 03, 2009, 06:21:29 AM »

Quote from: abdbundeli on August 01, 2008, 02:07:25 PM

Meizbaanee hai zaahid kee? Hairaan hoon!
Kyaa karoon saaqiyah? mein pareishaan hoon!!

Us kaa yeemaan hai! Woh, us kaa paaband hai!
Jab ki, mein eik adnaa hoon: insaan hoon!!

Eik hee meyree mahboobaa hai: jaan ley!
Rind hoon: may kaa aashiq hoon: yeemaan hoon!!

Meiney toubaa naheen kee hai: sun, shak na kar;
Us key weeraan ghar mein hoon: weeraan hoon!!

Teyrey pahloo mein beyfikra thaa; shaad thaa!
Ab yahaan hoon, to, zerey nigahbaan hoon!!

Tujh sey nazareyn milaaney ko beychain hoon!
Yeh qafas hai hadeedee: fansee jaan hoon!!

Mujh ko shak hai, ki, zindaa hoon, yaa mar chukaa?
Zibh honaa hai! Lagtaa hai: haiwaan hoon!!

Jaa waheen: har bashar, jahaan aazaad hai!
Us kee nazaroun mein, mein eik hullaan hoon!!

Har taraf, sirf jallaad-o-saiyaad hain:
Jee rahaa hoon: haqeeqat mein beyjaan hoon!

Yeh zarooree naheen, ki, woh hai aadmee!
Tukhm-e-aadam hoon mein! Apnee pahichaan hoon!!

Un kaa kahnaa hai: jannat key dar pai hoon mein!
Lamhey bhar mein, maqaam-e-paristaan hoon!!

Din mein kuchh? Raat mein kuchh alag hain? 'Abd',
Mazhabaani mukeedat sey, anjaan hoon!!
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   - abd bundeli

Wah Wah Abd Ji, Bahut Khoob, Hamesha ki tarah! Applause