jee rahe haiN.....Tum bin....................saru

by SURESH SANGWAN on September 07, 2016, 06:11:03 PM
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जी रहें हैं तुम बिन इसे सज़ा ही समझो
ज़ख़्म अभी तक भरा नहीं हरा ही समझो

चैन-ओ-सुकून जाता रहे दर से दिल के
ऐसी मोहब्बत को तो बला ही समझो

छिपा रहा है कोई किरदार तेरा
देर नहीं बस अब परदा उठा ही समझो

चाहा तुमको लाख मगर न पाया हमने
और क्या कहें क़िस्मत का लिखा ही समझो

दीवार उठाई है दरमियाँ उसने जो
महल मिरे ख्वाबों का गिरा ही समझो

तू ही दुनियाँ मेरी आरज़ू बस तेरी
तू साथ नहीं तो मुझको लुटा ही समझो

बैठे थे दबाए इक उम्र से हम हाये
कारवाँ दर्द का बस 'सरु' चला  ही समझो


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«Reply #1 on: September 07, 2016, 06:30:26 PM »
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चैन-ओ-सुकून जाता रहे दर से दिल के
ऐसी मोहब्बत को तो बला ही समझो


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«Reply #2 on: September 07, 2016, 07:54:31 PM »
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bahot khub sureshji
pyar to aisa hi hota hai.
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«Reply #3 on: September 07, 2016, 10:48:10 PM »
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दीवार उठाई है दरमियाँ उसने जो
महल मिरे ख्वाबों का गिरा ही समझो

तू ही दुनियाँ मेरी आरज़ू बस तेरी
तू साथ नहीं तो मुझको लुटा ही समझो

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«Reply #4 on: September 08, 2016, 04:06:48 AM »
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waah bohut khbu likha hai saru ji waah
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«Reply #5 on: September 08, 2016, 05:21:24 AM »
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Wahhhh..Sir..Bahot..Khoob.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: September 08, 2016, 11:13:46 AM »
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दीवार उठाई है दरमियाँ उसने जो
महल मिरे ख्वाबों का गिरा ही समझो

तू ही दुनियाँ मेरी आरज़ू बस तेरी
तू साथ नहीं तो मुझको लुटा ही समझो

बैठे थे दबाए इक उम्र से हम हाये
कारवाँ दर्द का बस 'सरु' चला  ही समझो icon_flower
Bahut bahut khoobsurat qaaam Suresh Jee, sabi lines bahut achhi hain, last ke 3 sher mujhe bahut pasand aaye, dheron daad.
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«Reply #7 on: September 09, 2016, 10:30:46 PM »
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bahot bahot khoob!
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«Reply #8 on: September 14, 2016, 07:16:37 PM »
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thaaaaaaaanks
चैन-ओ-सुकून जाता रहे दर से दिल के
ऐसी मोहब्बत को तो बला ही समझो


बहूत खुब सुरेश जी


शाद ओ आबाद रहीये


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