Jeet hai unkee, haartaa huun mein!

by abdbundeli on August 28, 2009, 05:38:39 PM
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Roz hee to pukaartaa huun mein!
Bas yunhi din guzaartaa huun mein!!

Aasmaanoun kii har siyaahee ko;
Roshanee sey buhaartaa huun mein!

Jang hai dour-e-azal sey jaaree;
Jeet hai unkee, haartaa huun mein!

Har silah us kaa nahin, meyraa hai;
Khud ko bey-khud ho maartaa huun mein!

Wajan-e-yeemaan-o-wafaa key saarey
Pairahan, khud utaartaa huun mein!

Raat aatee hai; raat jaatee hai;
Silwateyn hii sudhaartaa huun mein!

Khwaab aagosh mein paatey tum ko;
Zulf dahroun sanwaartaa huun mein!

Woh, 'abd', mujh ko pyaar kartey hain;
Aur, unko dulaartaa huun mein!

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«Reply #1 on: August 28, 2009, 06:03:37 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on August 28, 2009, 05:38:39 PM

Roz hee to pukaartaa huun mein!
Bas yunhi din guzaartaa huun mein!!

Raat aatee hai; raat jaatee hai;
Silwateyn hii sudhaartaa huun mein!

Woh, 'abd', mujh ko pyaar kartey hain;
Aur, unko dulaartaa huun mein!

                      - abd bundeli

Waah.. Waah.. Waah.. abd ji zabardast!

Go ke tamam ghazal hi umda hai, magar quote kiye gaye ash'ar ne to qayamat dhaa di... behad sadgi or zabardast rawani ke saath kahi gai ye ghazal ne dil chhoo liya.. dil ki gehrai se daad hazir hai, qubool farmayen..
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«Reply #2 on: August 28, 2009, 07:04:39 PM »
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Abd ji badi muddat ke baad aaj aap ke ash'ar se mutassir ho kar kuchh likhne ki taufeeq huai, agar kisi qabil samjho to nawaz dijiyega, shukriya...

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-:Sayyid Randeri:-
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«Reply #3 on: August 28, 2009, 09:53:05 PM »
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bahut hi achha likha hai abd ji aapne

inspiring and lovable
Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: August 28, 2009, 09:54:15 PM »
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great work sayyid ji aise hi likhte rahiye

aapne bhi alfazon ka sashakt istamaal kiya
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«Reply #5 on: August 28, 2009, 10:51:19 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Bahoot bahoot Khoob Abd ji and Sayyid ji!!
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«Reply #6 on: August 29, 2009, 08:15:45 AM »
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Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on August 28, 2009, 06:03:37 PM
Waah.. Waah.. Waah.. abd ji zabardast!

Go ke tamam ghazal hi umda hai, magar quote kiye gaye ash'ar ne to qayamat dhaa di... behad sadgi or zabardast rawani ke saath kahi gai ye ghazal ne dil chhoo liya.. dil ki gehrai se daad hazir hai, qubool farmayen..
Thanks a lot, Sayyid Randeri ji! Nazar-e-inaayat hai aapkee!
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«Reply #7 on: August 29, 2009, 08:23:00 AM »
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great work sayyid ji aise hi likhte rahiye

aapne bhi alfazon ka sashakt istamaal kiya
Applause Applause Applause Applause

Ahqar behad mashkoor hai TGR ji.  Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: August 29, 2009, 08:24:39 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on August 28, 2009, 10:51:19 PM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Bahoot bahoot Khoob Abd ji and Sayyid ji!!

shukriya pooja ji..
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«Reply #9 on: August 29, 2009, 08:27:57 AM »
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Bahut khoob, Sayyid Randeri ji!
Aapney meyree gazal ko itnaa pyaar-o-dulaar diyaa, ki, wah aapkey is qadar zeyhn-o-jigar mein samaa gayee, ki, eik aur khoobsoorat gazal kaa  meelaad-e-tasawwur roo-b-roo hai! Khushaamdeed! Wah bhai waah!
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«Reply #10 on: August 29, 2009, 08:32:36 AM »
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Quote from: thegrimreaper on August 28, 2009, 09:53:05 PM
bahut hi achha likha hai abd ji aapne

inspiring and lovable
Applause Applause Applause Applause

Thanks a lot, thegrimreaper ji!
                  - abd bundeli
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«Reply #11 on: August 29, 2009, 08:34:41 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on August 28, 2009, 10:51:19 PM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Bahoot bahoot Khoob Abd ji and Sayyid ji!!
Thanks a lot, Pooja ji!
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«Reply #12 on: August 29, 2009, 07:27:34 PM »
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Bahut khoob, Sayyid Randeri ji!
Aapney meyree gazal ko itnaa pyaar-o-dulaar diyaa, ki, wah aapkey is qadar zeyhn-o-jigar mein samaa gayee, ki, eik aur khoobsoorat gazal kaa  meelaad-e-tasawwur roo-b-roo hai! Khushaamdeed! Wah bhai waah!
          - abd bundeli

Shukriya abd bundeli ji.. ye aap ki zarrah nawazi hai jo aap ne is nakarah ki kavish ko saraha, meherbaani janaab.
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«Reply #13 on: August 29, 2009, 11:31:37 PM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob Abd ji and Sayyid ji,beautiful gazal. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #14 on: August 30, 2009, 07:05:33 AM »
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Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on August 29, 2009, 07:27:34 PM
Shukriya abd bundeli ji.. ye aap ki zarrah nawazi hai jo aap ne is nakarah ki kavish ko saraha, meherbaani janaab.
You're welcome, Sayyid Randeri ji! Aap a'am nahin, khaas hain!
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