Jeet hai unkee, haartaa huun mein!

by abdbundeli on August 28, 2009, 05:38:39 PM

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abdbundeli

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«Reply #15 on: August 30, 2009, 07:07:18 AM »

Quote from: madhuwesh on August 29, 2009, 11:31:37 PM

Wah wah bahut khoob Abd ji and Sayyid ji,beautiful gazal. icon_thumleft

Thanks a lot Madhu!
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Re: Jeet hai unkee, haartaa huun mein!

«Reply #16 on: August 30, 2009, 07:19:51 AM »

wah wah bahut khoob hai appki poetry Clapping Smiley


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«Reply #17 on: August 30, 2009, 08:41:39 AM »

Quote from: Arrfaa on August 30, 2009, 07:19:51 AM

wah wah bahut khoob hai appki poetry Clapping Smiley

Thanks Arrfaa! You're welcome on yoindia!
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Sayyid Randeri

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Re: Jeet hai unkee, haartaa huun mein!

«Reply #18 on: August 30, 2009, 03:00:04 PM »

Quote from: madhuwesh on August 29, 2009, 11:31:37 PM

Wah wah bahut khoob Abd ji and Sayyid ji,beautiful gazal. icon_thumleft

Madhuwesh ji bohot nawazish he aap ki, shukriya ji aap ne hamenshan himmat afzaai ki hai.


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Sayyid Randeri

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Re: Jeet hai unkee, haartaa huun mein!

«Reply #19 on: August 30, 2009, 03:06:33 PM »

Quote from: abdbundeli on August 30, 2009, 07:05:33 AM

You're welcome, Sayyid Randeri ji! Aap a'am nahin, khaas hain!
- abd bundeli

Badi meherbaani abd ji aap ki nawazish hai..


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Re: Jeet hai unkee, haartaa huun mein!

«Reply #20 on: August 30, 2009, 03:09:49 PM »

bahut bahut Khoob Abd Saheb ji..Bahut Hi masoomiyat se Bhari Ghazal pesh Ki hai Aapne..Bahut Ache..

bahut Bahut Khooob Randeri Bhai..Kya Khoob Likha Hai Aapne Bhi,har Ek Ashaar Lajawaab!!!


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Re: Jeet hai unkee, haartaa huun mein!

«Reply #21 on: August 30, 2009, 03:26:10 PM »

Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on August 30, 2009, 03:06:33 PM

Badi meherbaani abd ji aap ki nawazish hai..

Bahut hi badhhiyaa seir hai yah aapkaa Sayyid Randeri ji! Gulaab key phool key saath uskee kateelee pattiyaan bhi pyaaree lagteen hain! Khushaamdeed!
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Re: Jeet hai unkee, haartaa huun mein!

«Reply #22 on: August 30, 2009, 03:29:07 PM »

Quote from: khwaish on August 30, 2009, 03:09:49 PM

bahut bahut Khoob Abd Saheb ji..Bahut Hi masoomiyat se Bhari Ghazal pesh Ki hai Aapne..Bahut Ache..

bahut Bahut Khooob Randeri Bhai..Kya Khoob Likha Hai Aapne Bhi,har Ek Ashaar Lajawaab!!!

Thanks khwaish ji! Aapkaa 'sneh' jo na karaa ley wo thorhaa hai!
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Sayyid Randeri

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Re: Jeet hai unkee, haartaa huun mein!

«Reply #23 on: September 01, 2009, 06:43:13 AM »

Quote from: khwaish on August 30, 2009, 03:09:49 PM

bahut bahut Khoob Abd Saheb ji..Bahut Hi masoomiyat se Bhari Ghazal pesh Ki hai Aapne..Bahut Ache..

bahut Bahut Khooob Randeri Bhai..Kya Khoob Likha Hai Aapne Bhi,har Ek Ashaar Lajawaab!!!

Shukriya khwaish bhai.. nwazish hai aap ki.


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Sayyid Randeri

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Re: Jeet hai unkee, haartaa huun mein!

«Reply #24 on: September 01, 2009, 07:03:17 AM »

Quote from: abdbundeli on August 30, 2009, 03:26:10 PM

Bahut hi badhhiyaa seir hai yah aapkaa Sayyid Randeri ji! Gulaab key phool key saath uskee kateelee pattiyaan bhi pyaaree lagteen hain! Khushaamdeed!
- abd bundeli

Is qadar izzat afzaai ka tah-e-dil se shukarguzaar hun abd ji.. aap ka saath hai jo apna asar dikha raha hai.. shukriya.


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Re: Jeet hai unkee, haartaa huun mein!

«Reply #25 on: September 01, 2009, 08:04:00 AM »

Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on September 01, 2009, 07:03:17 AM

Is qadar izzat afzaai ka tah-e-dil se shukarguzaar hun abd ji.. aap ka saath hai jo apna asar dikha raha hai.. shukriya.

Khush rahiye! Aabaad rahiye!

Asar hai saaqiyah key noor-e-nazar kaa qaayam:
Kaam aayegee umra bhar koyi sharaab naheen!
Un key cheyhrey key aab-o-taab sey hai shab roshan;
Go ki, hai un ney utaaraa abhee naqaab naheen!!

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SARVESH RASTOGI

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Re: Jeet hai unkee, haartaa huun mein!

«Reply #26 on: September 01, 2009, 09:05:12 AM »

Bahut bahut khoob Abd Ji
Bahut khoob


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Sayyid Randeri

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Re: Jeet hai unkee, haartaa huun mein!

«Reply #27 on: September 01, 2009, 09:29:19 AM »

Quote from: abdbundeli on September 01, 2009, 08:04:00 AM

Subhanallah! kya jalwe hain.. bohot khoob abd ji.

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-: sayyid randeri :-


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abdbundeli

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Re: Jeet hai unkee, haartaa huun mein!

«Reply #28 on: September 01, 2009, 09:31:30 AM »

Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on September 01, 2009, 09:05:12 AM

Bahut bahut khoob Abd Ji
Bahut khoob

Thanks Rastogi ji!
- abd bundeli


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abdbundeli

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Re: Jeet hai unkee, haartaa huun mein!

«Reply #29 on: September 01, 2009, 01:03:44 PM »

Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on September 01, 2009, 09:29:19 AM

Subhanallah! kya jalwe hain.. bohot khoob abd ji.

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-: sayyid randeri :-

Bahut khoob sayyid randeri ji! Waaqiyii bahut hee khoob! Kyaa baat hai!! Waah!

Nazar mein aaye: roo-b-roo thaa kahkashaan unkaa!
Husn har zarrey mein paithhaa yahaan-wahaan unkaa!
Eik muttahdah anaasir mein kyaa samaaye woh:
Jigar mein woh hain; aur, naam zubaan par un kaa!!

- abd bundeli