Jhoom Kar Gate Hain Ham / झूम कर गाते हैं हम.... Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

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ले के ख़ुशबू सू -ए-सहरा रोज़ो-शब जाते हैं हम
और महक से ज़र्रा ज़र्रा खूब महकाते हैं हम

हम क़सम खाकर कहा करते हैं तुमसे प्यार है
है गुमाँ उनको सदा झूठी क़सम खाते हैं हम

अक्ल पर पत्थर हमारी पड़ गए हैं इसलिए
ख़ुद समझते ही नहीं औरों को समझाते हैं हम

जब भी ज़िद करते हैं रोते हैं खिलौनों के लिए
कल के वादे पे सदा बच्चों को बहलाते हैं हम

रंजो-ग़म अपने किसी पर भी अयाँ करते नहीं
साज़े-दिल पर अपने नग़मा झूम कर गाते हैं हम

लुत्फ़ आता है सितम तक़दीर के सहकर बहुत
मेहरबाँ तक़दीर होती है तो घबराते हैं हम

वो हमारे हैं न हम उनके हैं ऐ लोगो 'रक़ीब'
वो हमें भाते हैं और उनको बहुत भाते हैं हम

le ke khushboo soo-e-sahara rozo-shab jaate hain ham
aur mahak se zarra zarra khoob mahkaate hain ham

ham qasam khakar kaha karte hain tumse pyar hai
hai gumaan unko sada jhoothee qasam khate hain ham

akl par paththar hamari pad gaye hain isliye
khud samajhte hee naheen auron ko samjhate hain ham

Jab bhi zid karte hain rote hain khilaunon ke liye
kal ke wade pe sada bachchon ko bahlate hain ham

Ranjo-gam apne kisee par ham ayaan karte naheen
Saze-dil par apne naghama jhoom kar gaate hain ham

lutf aata hai sitam taqdeer ke sahkar bahut
mehrbaan taqdeer hoti hai to ghabraate hain ham  

wo hamarey hain na ham unke hain ai logo ‘Raqeeb’
wo hamen bhate hain aur unko bahut bhate hain ham
 
--- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
Juhu, Mumbai - 400049.
Cell - 09892165892
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«Reply #1 on: April 27, 2014, 02:37:05 PM »
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bahut khoobbahut khoob satish ji ek Rau ke saath daad
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Bohat Bohat Khub Satish Ji!!! Bohat aacha likha hai aap ne!!!


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«Reply #5 on: April 27, 2014, 05:56:45 PM »
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Namaste Satish jee

Bahut umdah ...behatreen ghazal

रंजो-ग़म अपने किसी पर भी अयाँ करते नहीं
साज़े-दिल पर अपने नग़मा झूम कर गाते हैं हम....Bahut bahut khoob

लुत्फ़ आता है सितम तक़दीर के सहकर बहुत
मेहरबाँ तक़दीर होती है तो घबराते हैं हम.... kya baat hai
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«Reply #6 on: April 27, 2014, 05:59:44 PM »
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waah waah waah bahut hee laajawaab peshkash dheron daad aur mubarakbad
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«Reply #7 on: April 27, 2014, 08:08:12 PM »
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ले के ख़ुशबू सू -ए-सहरा रोज़ो-शब जाते हैं हम
और महक से ज़र्रा ज़र्रा खूब महकाते हैं हम

हम क़सम खाकर कहा करते हैं तुमसे प्यार है
है गुमाँ उनको सदा झूठी क़सम खाते हैं हम

अक्ल पर पत्थर हमारी पड़ गए हैं इसलिए
ख़ुद समझते ही नहीं औरों को समझाते हैं हम

जब भी ज़िद करते हैं रोते हैं खिलौनों के लिए
कल के वादे पे सदा बच्चों को बहलाते हैं हम

रंजो-ग़म अपने किसी पर भी अयाँ करते नहीं
साज़े-दिल पर अपने नग़मा झूम कर गाते हैं हम

लुत्फ़ आता है सितम तक़दीर के सहकर बहुत
मेहरबाँ तक़दीर होती है तो घबराते हैं हम

वो हमारे हैं न हम उनके हैं ऐ लोगो 'रक़ीब'
वो हमें भाते हैं और उनको बहुत भाते हैं हम

le ke khushboo soo-e-sahara rozo-shab jaate hain ham
aur mahak se zarra zarra khoob mahkaate hain ham

ham qasam khakar kaha karte hain tumse pyar hai
hai gumaan unko sada jhoothee qasam khate hain ham

akl par paththar hamari pad gaye hain isliye
khud samajhte hee naheen auron ko samjhate hain ham

Jab bhi zid karte hain rote hain khilaunon ke liye
kal ke wade pe sada bachchon ko bahlate hain ham

Ranjo-gam apne kisee par ham ayaan karte naheen
Saze-dil par apne naghama jhoom kar gaate hain ham

lutf aata hai sitam taqdeer ke sahkar bahut
mehrbaan taqdeer hoti hai to ghabraate hain ham   

wo hamarey hain na ham unke hain ai logo ‘Raqeeb’
wo hamen bhate hain aur unko bahut bhate hain ham
 
--- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
Juhu, Mumbai - 400049.
Cell - 09892165892



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«Reply #8 on: April 27, 2014, 10:11:56 PM »
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वाह....वाह....सतीश जी.....बहुत दिनों बाद आये और क्या खूब आये.....

आते रहा कीजिये....समां बना रहता है.....

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«Reply #9 on: April 28, 2014, 12:01:57 PM »
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wah wah wah bohut umda peshkash waaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh

Nazre inayat aur hausala afzai ka bahut shukriya...Jeet Jainam Ji......Raqeeb Lucknowi
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Ghazal pasand karney aur jawab dene ka bahut shukriya....Suresh Ji.....Raqeeb Lucknowi
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Bahut Khoob.

Bahut bahut shukriya....Advo.RavinderaRavi Ji.....Raqeeb
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Ghazal pasand karne aur jawab dene ka bahut shukriya...Shireen Hakani Ji.....Raqeeb Lucknowi

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Namaste Satish jee

Bahut umdah ...behatreen ghazal

रंजो-ग़म अपने किसी पर भी अयाँ करते नहीं
साज़े-दिल पर अपने नग़मा झूम कर गाते हैं हम....Bahut bahut khoob

लुत्फ़ आता है सितम तक़दीर के सहकर बहुत
मेहरबाँ तक़दीर होती है तो घबराते हैं हम.... kya baat hai


Bahut bahut shukriya.....Chiraagh Ji....Raqeeb Lucknowi
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