jhooth kahte ho.................MKV

by mkv on December 19, 2012, 09:51:09 AM
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«Reply #15 on: December 20, 2012, 02:55:12 AM »
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«Reply #16 on: December 20, 2012, 03:44:41 AM »
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Quote from: mkv on December 19, 2012, 09:51:09 AM
Ab mujhe kaise tum bhulaaoge
mahfiileN kaise tum sajaaoge

jhooth kahte ho gir gaya tinka
kab talak aaNsu ye chupaaoge

ab tumhari hi aas hai mujhko
kyaa mujhe tum bhi chhorr  jaaoge

dard e dil ab sahaa naheeN jaata
pyaar se kab gale lagaooge

hai bharosa ‘mukesh ‘ kee khaatir
lautkar eik din to aaoge

wah wah wah wah wah wah wah aur sirf wah, mukesh bhai yaqeen maniye bohut pyaari ghazal hai. har shair lajwab raha . mukammal ghazal kahi hai aapne.
khas kar ye shair to kamaal hai meri taraf se apne hath chooom lijiye.


jhooth kahte ho gir gaya tinka,

kab talak aaNsu ye chupaaoge.



aur is shair ki masumiyat ke liye hazaroN daaad qubool kareN aur aap ke Style DAAAD bhi qubool kareN.........


dard e dil ab sahaa naheeN jaata,

pyaar se kab gale lagaooge.

wah kya baat hai itni saadgi, is shair ke dusre misre jo ek dard ek aur wo intezaar  wah wah wah ,,

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«Reply #17 on: December 20, 2012, 05:07:19 AM »
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dil ko choo gayi aapki yeh ghazal, bahut khoob
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«Reply #18 on: December 20, 2012, 08:40:33 AM »
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«Reply #19 on: December 20, 2012, 12:07:26 PM »
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Quote from: roy on December 19, 2012, 10:07:00 AM
waah waah mukesh bhai kya koob likhai ... Applause Applause Applause

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hume umeed hai eik din tum vapas aaoge zaroor
dard e dil ko traah (araam) pohonchaoge zaroor

galee lipatke humare tum khushi k ansuu bahaoge zaroor

humare puchne par k roo kun rahe ho ?? ..
humare puchne par k roo kun rahe ho ??

"fir TINKA GIR GAYA THA AANKH MAI "

 ye jhoot bol kar, hume hasaaaaoge zroor .... 

tum aaoge zaroor .. ..
tum aaoge zaroor . ..
Wah wah wah roy jee
aapne bhi khoob likha hai..
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«Reply #20 on: December 20, 2012, 01:44:25 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on December 19, 2012, 09:51:09 AM
Ab mujhe kaise tum bhulaaoge
mahfiileN kaise tum sajaaoge

jhooth kahte ho gir gaya tinka
kab talak aaNsu ye chupaaoge

ab tumhari hi aas hai mujhko
kyaa mujhe tum bhi chhorr  jaaoge

dard e dil ab sahaa naheeN jaata
pyaar se kab gale lagaooge

hai bharosa ‘mukesh ‘ kee khaatir
lautkar eik din to aaoge


gr8,sir
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«Reply #21 on: December 21, 2012, 08:39:52 AM »
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Quote from: muskan_bye on December 19, 2012, 10:45:34 AM
MASHALLAH BOHOT KHOOB LIKHA HAI MUKESH JI  Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley icon_salut icon_salut

YAAD THA MUJHE WOH MANZAR
JAB TUM JHOOT KAHETE THE
PHIR BHI DIL YAKEEN KARTA THA
LAGTA THA TUM SACH BOLTE THE
NA MALUM KYA THA ISKE PICHE TUMHARA PYAAR YA DHOKAA
PHIR BHI DIL YAKEEN KARTA THA
TUMHARI HAR BAAT PAR PYAAR AATA THA
KAHAN GAYE WOH DIN KAHA GAYE MERE PYAAR KE PALCHIN...

*****************************MUSKAN***********************************
tah-e-dil se shukriya adaa karna chahunga aapka..
aapka ye andaaz bahut pyara laga..aapne itna vaqt bhi diya..
aise replies ki mai bahut kadra karta huN.
khush rahiye
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«Reply #22 on: December 22, 2012, 03:00:39 AM »
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Quote from: Satish Shukla on December 19, 2012, 11:15:24 AM
Waaaaah Mukesh Ji...bahut khoob...
dili mubarakbaad kubool farmaayen...

Raqeeb
Bahut shukriya Sir
Aapki is waah me chipi hausla afzai se bahut khushi huee..
keep guiding me.
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«Reply #23 on: December 22, 2012, 06:13:54 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on December 19, 2012, 11:15:34 AM
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kya baat hai mukesh jee bahut hi khoob likha hai tumne dheron daad qubool kare khaas kar ke yeh sher toh bahut hi khoob raha

Jhoot kahte ho gir gaya tinka
kab talak aansoon yeh chipaaoge

bahut bahut bahut hi khoob
shukriya aqsh jee
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«Reply #24 on: December 23, 2012, 03:12:21 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on December 19, 2012, 11:33:51 AM
Bahut khoob  , kya  khubsurat ghazal hai aaur kitni khuburat baat kahdeee is sher mein.
  Dheron daad aur mubarakbaad is sher ke sath :

Gar ye zor e qalam raha , ek din
Shamma - e -Bazm  ban ke chhaoge
Aadaab Sir
sab aapka asheerwaad hai.
aur ek aur asheerwaad (is khoobsurat sher se)
bahut shukriya
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«Reply #25 on: December 23, 2012, 03:22:50 AM »
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Quote from: mkv on December 19, 2012, 09:51:09 AM
Ab mujhe kaise tum bhulaaoge
mahfiileN kaise tum sajaaoge

jhooth kahte ho gir gaya tinka
kab talak aaNsu ye chupaaoge

ab tumhari hi aas hai mujhko
kyaa mujhe tum bhi chhorr  jaaoge

dard e dil ab sahaa naheeN jaata
pyaar se kab gale lagaooge

hai bharosa ‘mukesh ‘ kee khaatir
lautkar eik din to aaoge

nice one
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«Reply #26 on: December 23, 2012, 08:19:37 AM »
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Quote from: suman59 on December 19, 2012, 11:35:54 AM
wonderful ghazal mkv jee. excellant and nice wordings Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Shabash  Thumbs UP
bahut bahut shukriya
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«Reply #27 on: December 23, 2012, 01:16:36 PM »
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Quote from: Masoom Shahzada on December 19, 2012, 11:41:36 AM
Waah bhaai Jaan kyaa mast likhaa hai.
bahut shukriya
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«Reply #28 on: December 23, 2012, 01:42:43 PM »
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bahut hi khoob aapke zazbaat dil me utar gaye
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«Reply #29 on: December 24, 2012, 07:58:10 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on December 19, 2012, 11:51:46 AM
main hasan bhaai ke khyaal pooree trah sahmat hoon dheron daad
thanks Sir
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