Jhooti kahaani Hi De Jaao "Khwaish"

by khwaish on May 23, 2011, 11:54:05 AM
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Ab Aur Kuch Nahi To Inn Ankhon Mein Paani Hi De Jaao
Yaad Tujhe Kar Sakoon Aisi Koi Nishaani Hi De Jaao

Jaanta Hoon Bahut Door Hai Ab Apni-Apni MaNzilen !!
 jaate-Jaate Kuch Yaadein Ruhaani Hi De Jaao

Inn Aankhon Ki majbooriyon Ne Waise sab Kuch Keh Diya Humein!!!
Ab Door Ho jaunga Main Par Kuch Lafzon Ki Bayaani Hi De Jaao

Mujhse Bichadkar Jee Naa Sakoge Tum, Yehi sach Hai!!!!
Par Tum Jeena Seekh Loge aisi koi jhooti Kahaani Hi De Jaao

  "Khwaish" Hum Phir Mile To Bas itni Gunjaish zaroor Rakhna!!
Muskuraakar Milo,Gile-Shikwo Se Door Muskurati Hui Ek Zindegani Hi De Jaao


                         ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: May 23, 2011, 01:00:37 PM »
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Ab Aur Kuch Nahi To Inn Ankhon Mein Paani Hi De Jaao
Yaad Tujhe Kar Sakoon Aisi Koi Nishaani Hi De Jaao

Jaanta Hoon Bahut Door Hai Ab Apni-Apni MaNzilen !!
 jaate-Jaate Kuch Yaadein Ruhaani Hi De Jaao

Inn Aankhon Ki majbooriyon Ne Waise sab Kuch Keh Diya Humein!!!
Ab Door Ho jaunga Main Par Kuch Lafzon Ki Bayaani Hi De Jaao

Mujhse Bichadkar Jee Naa Sakoge Tum, Yehi sach Hai!!!!
Par Tum Jeena Seekh Loge aisi koi jhooti Kahaani Hi De Jaao

  "Khwaish" Hum Phir Mile To Bas itni Gunjaish zaroor Rakhna!!
Muskuraakar Milo,Gile-Shikwo Se Door Muskurati Hui Ek Zindegani Hi De Jaao


                         ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


bahut khoob. maine bhi isi tarz pe ek ghazal liki hai...de ja
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«Reply #2 on: May 23, 2011, 03:33:54 PM »
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Dil se daad iss kalam ko dost..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #3 on: May 23, 2011, 06:43:02 PM »
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Bahut khoob. Likhte rahiye
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«Reply #4 on: May 24, 2011, 03:54:43 AM »
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wah wah.... kya baat hai khwaishji... kya kamal likha hai....

aapki har rachna dil main utar jati hai...

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«Reply #5 on: May 24, 2011, 02:05:04 PM »
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bht khoob khwaish ji...
last one is superb...
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«Reply #6 on: May 24, 2011, 02:23:53 PM »
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Quote from: Sheba on May 23, 2011, 01:00:37 PM


bahut khoob. maine bhi isi tarz pe ek ghazal liki hai...de ja

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Shebaji..

Main Takreeban Aapki Yoindia mein Post Har Ghazal Pad Chuka Hoon..Jis Ghazal Ka Aapne Zikar Kiya Woh Bhi,aap likhte hi itna khoobsurat hai ke aapka kalaam miss karna bahut badi galti mehsoos hoti hai..Shukriya icon_flower
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«Reply #7 on: May 24, 2011, 02:31:29 PM »
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soch bahut achhi hai .........
ehesaas apne se lage........
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«Reply #8 on: May 25, 2011, 11:08:47 AM »
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Quote from: Shihab on May 23, 2011, 01:13:23 PM
Bahut Khub Bhai Khwaish...

Shad o Aabad Rahiye...

~Shihab~
Bahut Bahut shukriya majid bhai
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«Reply #9 on: May 25, 2011, 12:01:05 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on May 24, 2011, 02:23:53 PM
Bahut Bahut Shukriya Shebaji..

Main Takreeban Aapki Yoindia mein Post Har Ghazal Pad Chuka Hoon..Jis Ghazal Ka Aapne Zikar Kiya Woh Bhi,aap likhte hi itna khoobsurat hai ke aapka kalaam miss karna bahut badi galti mehsoos hoti hai..Shukriya icon_flower


izzat afzaai ka bahut bahut shukria khawaish ji.aap jaise bade loag muj jaisi ada samajh ko izzat dete hai ye aap ka baddappan dikhata hai. thank you

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«Reply #10 on: May 25, 2011, 12:07:54 PM »
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izzat afzaai ka bahut bahut shukria khawaish ji.aap jaise bade loag muj jaisi ada samajh ko izzat dete hai ye aap ka baddappan dikhata hai. thank you

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Sheba Ji..Aap plz Aisa Naa Kahe, Main Pehle Bhi yeh Baat Keh Chuka Hoon Aur Abhi Kehta Hoon Aap Mere Sabse Pasandida Shayara mein Ek Ho..Aap Bas Likhte Rahe,Aapki LeKhni Padhna Hi Main Apni Khus-Kismati Samajhta Hoon..Izzat Afzai Ka Bahut Bahut Shukriya icon_flower
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«Reply #11 on: May 25, 2011, 12:16:25 PM »
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bahut khoobsurti se ahsaas ko lafzon mein baand liya hai khwaishsaab...

bahut khoob
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«Reply #12 on: May 25, 2011, 01:13:05 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on May 23, 2011, 03:33:54 PM
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Dil se daad iss kalam ko dost..
Khush rahiye..!

Bahut bahut Shukriya Bhai Rahim
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«Reply #13 on: May 26, 2011, 07:54:33 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on May 23, 2011, 11:54:05 AM
Ab Aur Kuch Nahi To Inn Ankhon Mein Paani Hi De Jaao
Yaad Tujhe Kar Sakoon Aisi Koi Nishaani Hi De Jaao

Jaanta Hoon Bahut Door Hai Ab Apni-Apni MaNzilen !!
 jaate-Jaate Kuch Yaadein Ruhaani Hi De Jaao

Inn Aankhon Ki majbooriyon Ne Waise sab Kuch Keh Diya Humein!!!
Ab Door Ho jaunga Main Par Kuch Lafzon Ki Bayaani Hi De Jaao

Mujhse Bichadkar Jee Naa Sakoge Tum, Yehi sach Hai!!!!
Par Tum Jeena Seekh Loge aisi koi jhooti Kahaani Hi De Jaao

  "Khwaish" Hum Phir Mile To Bas itni Gunjaish zaroor Rakhna!!
Muskuraakar Milo,Gile-Shikwo Se Door Muskurati Hui Ek Zindegani Hi De Jaao


                         ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #14 on: September 04, 2011, 11:07:36 AM »
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kya baat hai.. bahut khoob kaha hai Khwaishji
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