Jhuka ke dekh tu sajde me Sar Saliqe se ( Qadeertoopchi )

by qadeer_junaid on September 01, 2011, 06:43:46 PM
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Aadab ,,,

Ahle bazm ko eid ki purkholos mubarak baad ,, Meri tazah ghazal ap sub hazraat ki nazr ..umid hai pasand aayegi ..


Diye jo maine parindon ko parr saliqe se
dikha rahe hain mujhi ko hunar saliqe se

Pighal hi jayenge pal bhar me moom ki manind
Mai pathron ko jo cho lon agar saliqe se

Ye ilteja hai zamane se baaghbaan ki abb
Samar pe maariye pathar magar saliqe se

Musibaton ke ye badal bhi chatt hi jayenge
Jhuka ke dekh tu sajde me sarr saliqe se

Qadeer tu khawb khayalon ke aasmaano se
Haqeeqaton ki zamin pe utar saliqe se

Qadeertoopchi
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«Reply #1 on: September 01, 2011, 07:11:49 PM »
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Qadeer Bhaijaan As salaam walekum!

Eid ki bahut bahut mubarakbaad Bhaijaan Usual Smile

Badi masarrat hoti hai jab aapki kalaam ko padhte haiN.. Usual Smile
Aur bhi jayada masarrat hoti hai jab aapko sunte haiN Usual Smile

Bhaijaan behad khubsurat gazal se bazm ko nawaaza hai aapne Usual Smile
bahut bahut khub sher kaheN hai saliqe se... Usual Smile

Masha Allaah bahut umdaa gazal rahi aur sahi sher bhi khub
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Bhaijaan bazm ki ronak badhti hai aapse.. apna kuch jyada
waqt diya kijiye.. yehi ilteja hai aapse Usual Smile

Khush O aabaad rahiye Usual Smile
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Quote from: qadeer_junaid on September 01, 2011, 06:43:46 PM
Aadab ,,,

Ahle bazm ko eid ki purkholos mubarak baad ,, Meri tazah ghazal ap sub hazraat ki nazr ..umid hai pasand aayegi ..


Diye jo maine parindon ko parr saliqe se
dikha rahe hain mujhi ko hunar saliqe se

Pighal hi jayenge pal bhar me moom ki manind
Mai pathron ko jo cho lon agar saliqe se

Ye ilteja hai zamane se baaghbaan ki abb
Samar pe maariye pathar magar saliqe se

Musibaton ke ye badal bhi chatt hi jayenge
Jhuka ke dekh tu sajde me sarr saliqe se

Qadeer tu khawb khayalon ke aasmaano se
Haqeeqaton ki zamin pe utar saliqe se

Qadeertoopchi
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«Reply #2 on: September 01, 2011, 08:55:30 PM »
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Bahaut bahaut bahaut aur bahaut khoob Qadeer Sahab..
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Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #3 on: September 02, 2011, 07:36:12 AM »
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Janab Abdul Qadeer Sahab,

Waah waah kya khoob ghazal kahi hai
maza aa gaya.

Har sher bahut bahut khoobsoorat hai.

Dili daad kubool farmaayen.

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«Reply #4 on: September 03, 2011, 07:34:10 AM »
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Quote from: qadeer_junaid on September 01, 2011, 06:43:46 PM
Aadab ,,,

Ahle bazm ko eid ki purkholos mubarak baad ,, Meri tazah ghazal ap sub hazraat ki nazr ..umid hai pasand aayegi ..


Diye jo maine parindon ko parr saliqe se
dikha rahe hain mujhi ko hunar saliqe se

Pighal hi jayenge pal bhar me moom ki manind
Mai pathron ko jo cho lon agar saliqe se

Ye ilteja hai zamane se baaghbaan ki abb
Samar pe maariye pathar magar saliqe se

Musibaton ke ye badal bhi chatt hi jayenge
Jhuka ke dekh tu sajde me sarr saliqe se

Qadeer tu khawb khayalon ke aasmaano se
Haqeeqaton ki zamin pe utar saliqe se

Qadeertoopchi



aadaab
ye kitnee baDee khushi ka moqaam hai ki aap ke fikree parwaaz roz bz roz maayel ba aasmaan hai abhi chand din pahley hi aap se mulaaqaat huyi jo ki aap ke kalaam ke zaryaa hi thee us waqt aor aaj me zameen aor aasmaan ka farq nazar aane lagaa gai
sachhai aor eimaandaaree se ki gayee mehnat bheeg bheeg ke rang laa rahee hai kalaam me nikhaar khiyaalaat me nudrat iblaagh me jiddat e taba har jaanib se ye uDaan shaandaar nazar aa rahee hai
main to bas yahee kahun gaa allaah nazr e bad se bachaay
masood hassaas 
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«Reply #5 on: September 03, 2011, 09:49:25 AM »
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Quote from: qadeer_junaid on September 01, 2011, 06:43:46 PM
Aadab ,,,

Ahle bazm ko eid ki purkholos mubarak baad ,, Meri tazah ghazal ap sub hazraat ki nazr ..umid hai pasand aayegi ..


Diye jo maine parindon ko parr saliqe se
dikha rahe hain mujhi ko hunar saliqe se

Pighal hi jayenge pal bhar me moom ki manind
Mai pathron ko jo cho lon agar saliqe se

Ye ilteja hai zamane se baaghbaan ki abb
Samar pe maariye pathar magar saliqe se

Musibaton ke ye badal bhi chatt hi jayenge
Jhuka ke dekh tu sajde me sarr saliqe se

Qadeer tu khawb khayalon ke aasmaano se
Haqeeqaton ki zamin pe utar saliqe se

Qadeertoopchi


                  bahut cheekha humnein kisi ne na suni.
                  kahta hai usii baat ko tu magar saliqe se


kyaa khoob qadeer sahab


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qadeer tu khawab-o-khyaalon ke aasmaan se.... maqta bhi khoob raha
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«Reply #6 on: September 03, 2011, 11:10:56 AM »
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Qadeer saheb,Khoobsurat ghazal ke liye mubarakbaad.Maqte ke misrai awwal ko shaayed nazar e saani ki zaroorat hai.Ho sakta hai meri kam ilmi ho.dekh lijiye ga.HASAN
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«Reply #7 on: September 03, 2011, 12:22:42 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on September 01, 2011, 07:11:49 PM
Qadeer Bhaijaan As salaam walekum!

Eid ki bahut bahut mubarakbaad Bhaijaan Usual Smile

Badi masarrat hoti hai jab aapki kalaam ko padhte haiN.. Usual Smile
Aur bhi jayada masarrat hoti hai jab aapko sunte haiN Usual Smile

Bhaijaan behad khubsurat gazal se bazm ko nawaaza hai aapne Usual Smile
bahut bahut khub sher kaheN hai saliqe se... Usual Smile

Masha Allaah bahut umdaa gazal rahi aur sahi sher bhi khub
rahe Usual Smile
Humari dili daad O mubarakbaad kabul kijiye Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye.. Aate rahiye... Usual Smile
Bhaijaan bazm ki ronak badhti hai aapse.. apna kuch jyada
waqt diya kijiye.. yehi ilteja hai aapse Usual Smile

Khush O aabaad rahiye Usual Smile
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile         




Parwaz sahab aadab ,,

Ghazal pe apka tabsera faqr ka baaic bana ,,,Apne ghazal ki bharpoor pazeerai ki hai ,,,,,Is badle me sirf dua hi de sakta hun ,,Allah apko khush rakhe ..

Apka bhai

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«Reply #8 on: September 03, 2011, 12:23:47 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on September 01, 2011, 07:32:25 PM
bahut bahut khub qadeer bhai... Shad o aabad rahiye shihab

Shihab bhai aadab ,,

Apko ghazal pasand aai ,,Jaankar khushi howi ,,Bhai kahan ho aaj kal nazar nahi aate ,,Allah apko khush rakhe..


Dua go
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«Reply #9 on: September 03, 2011, 12:25:22 PM »
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Janab Abdul Qadeer Sahab,

Waah waah kya khoob ghazal kahi hai
maza aa gaya.

Har sher bahut bahut khoobsoorat hai.

Dili daad kubool farmaayen.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
 

Raqeeb sahab aadab ,,

Apse ahle ilm ko meri ghazal pasand aai ,,mere liye faqr ka maqam hai ,,Dad ke liye shukriyah ,, Allah apko khush rakhe ..

Dua go

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«Reply #10 on: September 03, 2011, 12:29:55 PM »
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Quote from: masoodhassaas on September 03, 2011, 07:34:10 AM


aadaab
ye kitnee baDee khushi ka moqaam hai ki aap ke fikree parwaaz roz bz roz maayel ba aasmaan hai abhi chand din pahley hi aap se mulaaqaat huyi jo ki aap ke kalaam ke zaryaa hi thee us waqt aor aaj me zameen aor aasmaan ka farq nazar aane lagaa gai
sachhai aor eimaandaaree se ki gayee mehnat bheeg bheeg ke rang laa rahee hai kalaam me nikhaar khiyaalaat me nudrat iblaagh me jiddat e taba har jaanib se ye uDaan shaandaar nazar aa rahee hai
main to bas yahee kahun gaa allaah nazr e bad se bachaay
masood hassaas 

Masood bhai aadab ,,

Sub apki rahenumai ke sabab hai bhai ,,,Apse humne bahut sikha hai ,,aur Inshallah ta dam sikhte rahenge ,,Apko is bazm dekh ke acha laga ,,Ahebab se darkaust hai ke masood bhai ke maujodgi ka bharpoor faida uthaye.N,,Apki maujodgi yaqeenan bazm ki khushnaseebi hai bhai ,,, Apki ilmi shaqsiyat kissi taruf ki mahutaj nahi ,,,Umid hai ke ap apne kalamo se istefadah hasil karne ka mauqa dete rahenge ,,,Apki dad mere liye niyamat hai bhai ,,Apki dad ghazal ki kamiyabi pe dalalat karti hai ,,Allah apko umr-nuh ata kare..

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«Reply #11 on: September 03, 2011, 12:30:24 PM »
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Wah Qadeer Bhai Wah... !! Usual Smile Usual Smile

kya khoob kaha hai aapne,,,...

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«Reply #12 on: September 03, 2011, 12:36:01 PM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on September 03, 2011, 11:10:56 AM
Qadeer saheb,Khoobsurat ghazal ke liye mubarakbaad.Maqte ke misrai awwal ko shaayed nazar e saani ki zaroorat hai.Ho sakta hai meri kam ilmi ho.dekh lijiye ga.HASAN

Hassan Sahab Assalamwalekum ,,

Mujhe behad khushi howi ke apne meri ghazal ka tanqeedi jayeza liya ,,,Apse ahle ilm hazrat se bazm ki raunaq khayam hai ,,,Apne maqte me misra-e-oola ke mutaliq jo arz kiya hai mai usse zaroor dekh longa ,,Taham apse eak adban guzrish hai ke ap kiss jaanib ishara farma rahe hain ..Bhr ki janib ? ye Misre ki Bunnat ki Janib ? ya 1 wahid 2 jama ki jaanib ? agar app rahenumai farma den to maherbani hogi ,,Apko ghazal pasnad aai ye jaankar behad khushi howi ,, Dad ke liye mashkoor o mumnoo hon ,, Allah apko umr-e-nuh ata kare..

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«Reply #13 on: September 03, 2011, 04:41:25 PM »
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Qadeer saheb,Mera ishara bahr ki jaanib thha jis mein mujhe laga ki lafz TU nahin hona chaahiye.Main ummeed karta hoon aap ne bura nahiin maana hoga aur agar sahi hai to meri tasheeh bhi kar dijiye kyuunki mujhe bhi bahut zyaada ilm nahiin hai.Issi liye sirf shak zaahir kiya hai.HASAN
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«Reply #14 on: September 03, 2011, 07:25:07 PM »
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Mahutram Hassan Sahab  ,,,Apne tawajo dilwai uska shukriyah Wo typo eror hai ,,, Ap yahan Modify ka option hai nahi ,,,,Modrator sahibaan se guzarish hai ke Lafze tu hazaf kar den maherbaani hogi ..Eak baar phir apka shukriyah ..Allah apko khush rakhe ...

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