Jis simt roushni thi...Ujaale chale gaye

by Syed Mohd Mahzar on April 19, 2014, 03:45:42 PM
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Andaaz jitney the wo niraale chale gaye
Jab chaand ja chuka hai to hale chale gaye

Hamne bhi teergi ko gale se laga liya
Jis simt raushni thi ujaale chale gaye

Koi to ye bataye ki aakhir main kauh hoon
Is shaher ke sab janne wale chale gaye

Duniya ki jang aajtak jeeta nahi koi
Kitni sipah kitne risaale chale gaye

Dara na ruk sake na siksndar yahan ruke
Hum kiya rukenge ayse jiyale chale gaye

Kitne hi sinraseeda ragarte hain eyriya’n
Aur the jo abhi goud ke pale chale gaye

Moti na iski goud se niklenge ab kabhi
Dariya ki khaak channe wale chale gaye
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                 ....Syed Mohd Mahzar
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«Reply #1 on: April 19, 2014, 04:43:08 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: April 19, 2014, 04:49:51 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: April 19, 2014, 05:35:34 PM »
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Quote from: Syed Mohd Mahzar on April 19, 2014, 03:45:42 PM
Andaaz jitney the wo niraale chale gaye
Jab chaand ja chuka hai to hale chale gaye

Hamne bhi teergi ko gale se laga liya
Jis simt raushni thi ujaale chale gaye

Koi to ye bataye ki aakhir main kauh hoon
Is shaher ke sab janne wale chale gaye

Duniya ki jang aajtak jeeta nahi koi
Kitni sipah kitne risaale chale gaye

Dara na ruk sake na siksndar yahan ruke
Hum kiya rukenge ayse jiyale chale gaye

Kitne hi sinraseeda ragarte hain eyriya’n
Aur the jo abhi goud ke pale chale gaye

Moti na iski goud se niklenge ab kabhi
Dariya ki khaak channe wale chale gaye
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                 ....Syed Mohd Mahzar



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Mazhar saaab sirf waaaaaaaaaaaah hi waaaaaaaaaaah nikal rahi hai... ek rau ke saaaath hazaron dili daaaaaad qubool kare..
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Mazhar saaab sirf waaaaaaaaaaaah hi waaaaaaaaaaah nikal rahi hai... ek rau ke saaaath hazaron dili daaaaaad qubool kare..

AQSH SAHIBA,
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waah waah waah bahut khoob is par to ek RAU hojaaye

Dr.S.K.Saini Saheb,
                  aapki daad hi kaafi thi, baharhaal rau ka bahut baht shukriyaaaaaaaaa
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«Reply #9 on: April 22, 2014, 07:10:15 PM »
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Mahutram Syed Mohammad Mahzar sahib Salam Alaikum ..



Ishare aur kinaye hamesha se ghazal ka turra-e-imtyaz rahe hain …Aur ye fun har kissi ko naseeb nahi ….Aur bila shuba Aapko is fun me aboor hasil hai jiski sitaaish na karma zulm hoga ….Aapko paheli baar parh raha hun aur apko mazeed parhne ko dil karta hai ..umid ke aap apne mi’yari kalamon se hum se mubtadi hazraat ko istefadah karne ka mauqa farhm karte rahenge …Ghazal ki tareef  karna suraj ko diya dikhane jaisi baat hai …Apki ghazal parhte parhte apki fikr e zaufishan ki saat wadiye laalo zaar me yun mahwe safar hua ke pata nahi chala …..Ghazal ka ik ik sher apki qadeer-ul-kalami ki zamanat hai …Sahebe Kamal ko dad aur khaleeq-e-kamal ka shukr baja laata hun ke usne hamari qaum ko aise aise zahin o fatin hazraat diye hain jo sadaf ki aankh se mooti nikal laane ka hunar jaante hain ..zindabad..RAU Aqeedatan Hazir hai


Bus 4th sher ke misra e oola per nazar ruk gaaee..kya hi acha ho ke aap isko ik baar dekh len ye mumkin hai ke kitabaat ki ghalati ho…



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