Jitne Log Hai Yahan Utni Hi Hai Yahan Awaaze "Khwaish"

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Umar Bhar Zehan mein Ek Khayal Sa aata rahega
Kuch Rishto Ko Tu Har Haal mein Nibhata rahega

Apne dard par Rona To Har Koi Ro Leta Hai!!
 Apne Dard Par Bhi Tu Muskurata Rahega..

Waqt Ki Tez Aandhiyon Mein Bhi Jiske Hausle Buland The!!
uss Shaks Ke kisse Aane Wala Daur bhi Dohraata Rahega

Insaan To Mar Jaata hai Par Yaadein zinda Rehti hai!!
Teri Neki,Teri Achai Hi Teri yaad Sabko Dilaata Rahega..

Jitne Log hai Yahan, Utni Hi Hai Yahan Awaaze!!
Kaun Hai Woh Jo Apni Pehchaan Sabse Chupaata Rahega

"Khwaish" Ki Haqeeqat Uske Lafzon Mein Qaid Hai!!!
 Har Lafz Apne Hisse Ki Dastaan Sunaata Rahega



                  ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: March 22, 2011, 04:43:52 PM »
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Bohat Badhiya Janab Khwaish Sahab.
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«Reply #2 on: March 22, 2011, 04:57:12 PM »
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khwaish ji--aapki ghazalo ki har dusri line ek sachhai hoti hai bas yai wo baat hai jisse mai aapka fan hu.
sach kahu to kuch selected shayers hain jinki kalaamo par comnt dene ki himmat nir nahi kar paata… aap unme se ek ho.
bas kabi kabi gustakhi karta hu:)Usual Smile
daad ke liye no shabd bas hats off.
kuch mujh bewkoof chand ko bi tips ijiye janaab likhne ke
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«Reply #3 on: March 22, 2011, 09:27:52 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on March 22, 2011, 03:44:54 PM
Umar Bhar Zehan mein Ek Khayal Sa aata rahega
Kuch Rishto Ko Tu Har Haal mein Nibhata rahega

Apne dard par Rona To Har Koi Ro Leta Hai!!
 Apne Dard Par Bhi Tu Muskurata Rahega..

Waqt Ki Tez Aandhiyon Mein Bhi Jiske Hausle Buland The!!
uss Shaks Ke kisse Aane Wala Daur bhi Dohraata Rahega

Insaan To Mar Jaata hai Par Yaadein zinda Rehti hai!!
Teri Neki,Teri Achai Hi Teri yaad Sabko Dilaata Rahega..

Jitne Log hai Yahan, Utni Hi Hai Yahan Awaaze!!
Kaun Hai Woh Jo Apni Pehchaan Sabse Chupaata Rahega

"Khwaish" Ki Haqeeqat Uske Lafzon Mein Qaid Hai!!!
 Har Lafz Apne Hisse Ki Dastaan Sunaata Rahega



                  ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~~

Good One ... Khwaish Ji !

Very Impressive Creation .... dil se daad ... !!!
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«Reply #4 on: March 23, 2011, 03:59:05 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on March 22, 2011, 03:44:54 PM
Umar Bhar Zehan mein Ek Khayal Sa aata rahega
Kuch Rishto Ko Tu Har Haal mein Nibhata rahega

Apne dard par Rona To Har Koi Ro Leta Hai!!
 Apne Dard Par Bhi Tu Muskurata Rahega..

Waqt Ki Tez Aandhiyon Mein Bhi Jiske Hausle Buland The!!
uss Shaks Ke kisse Aane Wala Daur bhi Dohraata Rahega

Insaan To Mar Jaata hai Par Yaadein zinda Rehti hai!!
Teri Neki,Teri Achai Hi Teri yaad Sabko Dilaata Rahega..

Jitne Log hai Yahan, Utni Hi Hai Yahan Awaaze!!
Kaun Hai Woh Jo Apni Pehchaan Sabse Chupaata Rahega

"Khwaish" Ki Haqeeqat Uske Lafzon Mein Qaid Hai!!!
 Har Lafz Apne Hisse Ki Dastaan Sunaata Rahega



                  ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~~

Bahut khoob Khwaish jee! zindagee ke jis falsafe ko aap ne jaanaa hai kuchh kuchh mai bhee us se roo b roo hooN....aap kaa ye kalaam behad pasand aayaa.......dil se daad!
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«Reply #5 on: March 23, 2011, 04:04:49 AM »
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Jitne Log hai Yahan, Utni Hi Hai Yahan Awaaze!!
Kaun Hai Woh Jo Apni Pehchaan Sabse Chupaata Rahega

"Khwaish" Ki Haqeeqat Uske Lafzon Mein Qaid Hai!!!
 Har Lafz Apne Hisse Ki Dastaan Sunaata Rahega



Wah Khwaish Ji Wah... Heart Touching Creation... Likhte Rahiye..
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«Reply #6 on: March 23, 2011, 06:20:42 AM »
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bahut khub khwaishji...... badiya....
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«Reply #8 on: March 23, 2011, 07:59:45 AM »
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very very nice khawaish ji Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: March 23, 2011, 09:02:39 AM »
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Mast kalaam hai aapka...jeevan ki sachayi se roo-b-roo karaata hai...Khwaish ji..
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Awaaj ko kar buland Pehchaan banana janti hu
Dard ko apne chhupaa k muskuraanaa jaanti hu

Rishto ko bhee nibhaanaa be-khoobi jaanti hu
Har saksh kee apni raay hoti ye bhee jaanti hu

Kaam jo achhe kar jaaungi wahi kahaani yaad rahegi
Jaan le "koyal" jag mai teri wahi ek nishaani rahegi

Quote from: khwaish on March 22, 2011, 03:44:54 PM
Umar Bhar Zehan mein Ek Khayal Sa aata rahega
Kuch Rishto Ko Tu Har Haal mein Nibhata rahega

Apne dard par Rona To Har Koi Ro Leta Hai!!
 Apne Dard Par Bhi Tu Muskurata Rahega..

Waqt Ki Tez Aandhiyon Mein Bhi Jiske Hausle Buland The!!
uss Shaks Ke kisse Aane Wala Daur bhi Dohraata Rahega

Insaan To Mar Jaata hai Par Yaadein zinda Rehti hai!!
Teri Neki,Teri Achai Hi Teri yaad Sabko Dilaata Rahega..

Jitne Log hai Yahan, Utni Hi Hai Yahan Awaaze!!
Kaun Hai Woh Jo Apni Pehchaan Sabse Chupaata Rahega

"Khwaish" Ki Haqeeqat Uske Lafzon Mein Qaid Hai!!!
 Har Lafz Apne Hisse Ki Dastaan Sunaata Rahega



                  ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~~
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«Reply #10 on: March 23, 2011, 10:27:26 AM »
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Teesra shaer sabse zada acha laga mere dost..
Baki toh apki har kalam hi khubsoorat hoti hai..
Khwaish kay toh kayi fan hai mager Rahim apka bahaut hi
zada bada fan hai..Ek shaksiyat hai Khwaish mere liye yahan..
jabse Yo pe aya hoon, hamesha se apki kalamon se seekha hai..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Khush rahiye sada..!
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«Reply #11 on: March 23, 2011, 12:19:37 PM »
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Quote from: Yaash on March 22, 2011, 04:43:52 PM
Bohat Badhiya Janab Khwaish Sahab.

Aapka Bahut Bahut Shukriya Yaashji.. icon_flower
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«Reply #12 on: March 23, 2011, 12:26:18 PM »
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wah khwaish ji first 2 lines r very touching. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
aksar aisa hi hota hai.
par 4 th one is not so true nowadays.
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«Reply #13 on: March 23, 2011, 12:27:17 PM »
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Quote from: nirala on March 22, 2011, 04:57:12 PM
khwaish ji--aapki ghazalo ki har dusri line ek sachhai hoti hai bas yai wo baat hai jisse mai aapka fan hu.
sach kahu to kuch selected shayers hain jinki kalaamo par comnt dene ki himmat nir nahi kar paata… aap unme se ek ho.
bas kabi kabi gustakhi karta hu:)Usual Smile
daad ke liye no shabd bas hats off.
kuch mujh bewkoof chand ko bi tips ijiye janaab likhne ke


Nirala Ji, Aap Yeh kehkar Mujhe Sharminda kar rahe Ho..Mere Bhai, Jo Dil Mehsoos Karta Hai Wahi Likhta Hoon,Aap jaise Dost pasand karte Hai To Hi Himmat Ho paati Hai Lafzon Ke Zariye Apna Haal-e-dil bayan Kar leta Hoon..Aapka Bahut Bahut Bahut Shukriya Dost!! Yuhi Saath Dete Rahiyega
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Good One ... Khwaish Ji !

Very Impressive Creation .... dil se daad ... !!!


Aapka bahut bahut shukriya Nareshji.. icon_flower
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