Jo dil sey nikaltee hai, dard mein, wo gazal hai!

by abdbundeli on December 19, 2008, 02:21:40 PM
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Jo dil sey nikaltee hai, dard mein, wo gazal hai!
Shamma’a-see pighaltee hai, dard mein, wo gazal hai!

Yeh moosiqi hai dharhkanoun ki, guftgoo naheen;
Bin aag hi jaltee hai, dard mein, wo gazal hai!

Ham kyaa tumhain bataayen; sunaayen bhi kyaa tumhain?
Gaatee huyi chaltee hai, dard mein, wo gazal hai!

Ro leytey, par, uyoon mein baaqee kahaan hain ashk?
Buhraan mein paltee hai, dard mein, wo gazal hai!

Man maantaa naheen hai manaaney sey baarhaa;
Tifloun-see machaltee hai, dard mein, wo gazal hai!

Ik barq arsh-e-zehn mein, har lamhey koundh kar,
Hookoun mein badaltee hai, dard mein, wo gazal hai!

Aashiq ki jaan, aatish-e-baatin sey pighal kar,
Aahoun mein ubaltee hai, dard mein, wo gazal hai!

Jab chain kaheen bhi naheen miltaa hai hijra mein;
Ahsaas-see dhhaltee hai, dard mein, wo gazal hai!

Har lafz mein nihaan ho jigar-o-dil ki jahaan baat,
Gas khaa key sambhaltee hai, dard mein, wo gazal hai!

Aatee naheen hai neend: ’abd’, jaagtey huye,
Khwaaboun mein tahaltee hai, dard mein, wo gazal hai!

                                       - abd bundeli
Janaab Prateek Mardia ji ki farmaaish par shabdaarth neechey likh rahaa hoon!
moosiqi = sangeet; guftgoo = antrang baatcheet; uyoon = aankheyn; Buhraan = kashmakash, beemaaree mein aaney waalaa achaanak badlaav;
baarhaa = baar-baar; Tifloun = bachchoun; barq arsh-e-zehn = Dimaag key aasmaan mein tarhit(bijlee); Hookoun = gahree teesoun; aatish-e-baatin = andar ki aag; hijra = wirah, wiyog; Ahsaas-see = samveidan, intense feeling; nihaan = chhupaa huaa.
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #1 on: December 19, 2008, 11:07:03 PM »
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Nice one Abd Ji
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«Reply #2 on: December 20, 2008, 04:16:37 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on December 19, 2008, 11:07:03 PM
Nice one Abd Ji
Thanks Rajesh Harish ji!
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Prateek Mardia
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«Reply #3 on: December 20, 2008, 04:44:51 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause

behtareen ghazal,umda panktiya.
Guzaarish---Ji,Abd ji...Main sirf 'waah waah kar ke nikal jau yahan se to baimaani hogi. Mujhey jitna samjh mein aaya utna behtareen laga. urdu ki kamazor pakad hone ke karaan kayi baar mehroom reh jaata hu,umda shaayri se. Kuch arth to kher, andaaz ko dekh kar bhaanp liye jaatey hein,pur kayi reh bhee jaate hein. Yeh ghazal mujhey vaakai vaapas padhne ki tammana hein, yadi samay aapko anumati de,to Kavita Jahan samapt hoti hein waha,urdu ke shabdon ke arth rakh dijiyega.shukriya.
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«Reply #4 on: December 20, 2008, 05:46:05 AM »
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urdu shabdon ke arthon ke likhney ke liye koti koti dhanyawaad.
Yeh ghazal padh kar maano aaj ki subah hi ghazal ho gayi!
nisandeh-amazing quality work,khoobsurat panna,lajawaab alfaaz. Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: December 20, 2008, 06:02:44 AM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on December 20, 2008, 05:46:05 AM
urdu shabdon ke arthon ke likhney ke liye koti koti dhanyawaad.
Yeh ghazal padh kar maano aaj ki subah hi ghazal ho gayi!
nisandeh-amazing quality work,khoobsurat panna,lajawaab alfaaz. Applause Applause Applause Applause
Thanks you liked it! I'm happy!
                    - abd bundeli
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«Reply #6 on: December 20, 2008, 06:14:28 AM »
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wah wah wah janab kya bath hai abd ji !! shaheri pe acha control hai apka !!

ghazal kya hai eak alfaaz ka namona !!
ye hunnar hai samandar-a-jazbath ko eak kuze me band karna!!

qadeer toopchi

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«Reply #7 on: December 20, 2008, 06:18:53 AM »
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Quote from: abdulqadeer on December 20, 2008, 06:14:28 AM
wah wah wah janab kya bath hai abd ji !! shaheri pe acha control hai apka !!
ghazal kya hai eak alfaaz ka namona !!
ye hunnar hai samandar-a-jazbath ko eak kuze me band karna!!
qadeer toopchi
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Shukriyah aapko gazal pasand aayee! Aur, janaab, zarrah nawaazii key liye bhi shukraguzaar hoon!
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«Reply #8 on: December 20, 2008, 06:28:11 AM »
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Noor haasil hua chehre pur,unko mohhabbat se,
aainey mein itartee he ,ishq mein,wo ghazal hai!

khaamosh lub,aur nigaaho se baat saari raat
subah sanam se jub bichadtee he,ishq mein, wo ghazal hai!

ub muskuraahate audhti hey, majboot dil samjhe hey sub
tanhaiyon mein bilakhtee he jub, ishq mein,wo ghazal hai!

katra katra mehfooz thaa,ghut gaya dil ki chaardiwaar mein
motiyon ki tarah bikhartee he,ishq mein,wo ghazal hai!

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«Reply #9 on: December 20, 2008, 07:04:41 AM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on December 20, 2008, 06:28:11 AM
Noor haasil hua chehre pur,unko mohhabbat se,
aainey mein itartee he ,ishq mein,wo ghazal hai!

khaamosh lub,aur nigaaho se baat saari raat
subah sanam se jub bichadtee he,ishq mein, wo ghazal hai!

ub muskuraahat audhti thee, majboot dil samjhe they sub
tanhaiyon mein bilakhtee he, ishq mein,wo ghazal hai!

katra katra mehfooz thaa,ghut gaya dil ki chaardiwaar mein
motiyon ki tarah bikhartee he,ishq mein,wo ghazal hai!



Nice one Prateek Ji
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«Reply #10 on: December 20, 2008, 07:54:54 AM »
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Prateek Mardia ji!
Sahee hai: aashiq ki gazal to us kee mahboobaa hi hai, jo us key muttahdah anaasir (samyukt mool tatwa, united basic elements that constitute the human-body) key har eik zarrey ko nirantar chhootee aur aandolit kartee hai! Sundar antarbhaawoun kaa sankalan prastut kiyaa hai aapney!
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«Reply #11 on: December 20, 2008, 08:43:46 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on December 20, 2008, 07:04:41 AM
Nice one Prateek Ji

aapka aabhaar,rajesh bhai.
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«Reply #12 on: December 20, 2008, 08:47:26 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on December 20, 2008, 07:54:54 AM
Prateek Mardia ji!
Sahee hai: aashiq ki gazal to us kee mahboobaa hi hai, jo us key muttahdah anaasir (samyukt mool tatwa, united basic elements that constitute the human-body) key har eik zarrey ko nirantar chhootee aur aandolit kartee hai! Sundar antarbhaawoun kaa sankalan prastut kiyaa hai aapney!
                                  - abd bundeli


ek gustaakhi ki thee maine aapki itni sundar ghazal ko padh kar bus raha nahi gaya,aur aatur ho gaya thaa kuch tukbandi karne ke liye. Aap ne is prayaas ka jo swaagat kiya ,uskey liye aabhaar.
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«Reply #13 on: December 20, 2008, 09:51:38 AM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on December 20, 2008, 08:47:26 AM
ek gustaakhi ki thee maine aapki itni sundar ghazal ko padh kar bus raha nahi gaya,aur aatur ho gaya thaa kuch tukbandi karne ke liye. Aap ne is prayaas ka jo swaagat kiya ,uskey liye aabhaar.
You're welcome! Likhye, aur khoob likhiye!
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«Reply #14 on: December 21, 2008, 04:33:42 AM »
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wah wah wah kaya baat hai bahoot khoob Abd ji and Prateek ji
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