Jo saath chalay thay vb jee (by vb)

by vb on August 06, 2011, 06:23:11 AM
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Rishton naaton ka chaahat ka, anjaam tumhen dikhlaain gay
Jo saath chalay thay vb jee, sub raah badaltay jaain gay

Uljhaa tu rahay ho raston main, ik baat hamaari yaad rahay
Manzil bhe hamen gar dhunday gi, tu haath kabhi na aain gay

Wo sonay chaandi ki duniya, hum miti, kankar, paathir hain
Wo joug say jo dar jaatay hon, sanjog bhala kay pain gay?

Kuchh chaah hay chaahay jaanay ki, kuchh tars ka ansar shamil hay
Apnay he dil ki duniya say, kab tak wo dhokaa khaain gay

Wo jaan chukay hen dukh day kar, k hum ko mohabbat hay un say
Un ko bhe mohabbat hay hum say, kaisay ye hamen samjhaain gay?

Allah! Nahi ab rehnay day, hum un ki mohabbat daikh chukay
Wo jaan jisay keh saktay thay, un he k hissay aain gay

Apni manzil hay rastay main, tum apni manzil paa lenaa
Kuchh door hamaaray saath chalo, khud raah tumhen batlaain gay

Gar paap hain chaahat k sapnay, kya ye duniya? kya wo duniya?
Ye duniya hum ko thukraa day, wo duniya hum thukraain gay




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«Reply #1 on: August 06, 2011, 08:28:26 AM »
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bemihaal ghazal hai vb jee
hum dil se yahi farmayenge
lagta hai jaise ab hum to
din raat yahi gungunayenge

aap baat pate ki kahte ho
hans hans ke sadayen sahte ho
hum jaise ye na kar paayenge
aap si tabiyat kahan se layenge

hum yahi duayen dete hain
khus rahiye sada aap vb jee

bahut lajawaab ghazal kahi aapne vb ji--
mindblowing
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F.H.SIDDIQUI
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«Reply #2 on: August 06, 2011, 10:41:33 AM »
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wah wah vb ji,bahut achhi ghazal hai.khaas taur se 4th sher bahut achha laga.
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«Reply #3 on: August 06, 2011, 07:55:09 PM »
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VB jee Aadaab !

Waah janab aur aik khubsurat nagmaa aapki kalam se
aaya hume bahut khushi huyi padhkar... Usual Smile

Ahsaas O khayaal aur adaaygi behad khoob rahi janab
hazaaroN daad hazir hai Usual Smile


And Janab S firaa jee aap bhi laa jawaab ho yaar..
Just mindblowing... and very impressive Usual Smile

Keep posting keep smiling..
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile         

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«Reply #4 on: August 09, 2011, 11:02:40 AM »
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Jee shukriya aap sub ka...
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