Jo Thakan Door Huee Khudaa Haafiz....masoom

by Masoom Shahzada on October 25, 2012, 01:12:06 PM
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Jo Thakan Door Huee Khudaa Haafiz Bol Diya Usne

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Kaagaz pe likh ke naam kaat diya usne.
Tha esii kaabil maiN, insaaf kiya usne.
.
MaiN to khaalii tha kaise lab tak jata.
Jo bharaa tha wahii paimaanaa piya usne.
.
Dil badla, nazar badli to din nikla.
Raat ka khawaab maan, dil tor diya usne.
.
Shohrat ki chakaachond me saath udda.
Par(Pankh) jo tote to haath chodd diya usne.
.
Jag dikhaaee ke liye naam labo par rakhkha.
Jo hawa badli, andaaz badal liya usne.
.
Mere saaye me "Masoom" wo aa ke baith gaee.
Jo thakan door huee, Khudaa Haafiz bol diya usne.
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«Reply #1 on: October 25, 2012, 01:28:52 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: October 25, 2012, 01:32:47 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: October 25, 2012, 03:40:23 PM »
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Quote from: Masoom Shahzada on October 25, 2012, 01:12:06 PM

Jo Thakan Door Huee Khudaa Haafiz Bol Diya Usne

------------------------------------

Kaagaz pe likh ke naam kaat diya usne.
Tha esii kaabil maiN, insaaf kiya usne.
.
MaiN to khaalii tha kaise lab tak jata.
Jo bharaa tha wahii paimaanaa piya usne.




.
Dil badla, nazar badli to din nikla.
Raat ka khawaab maan, dil tor diya usne.
.
Shohrat ki chakaachond me saath udda.
Par jo tote to haath chodd diya usne.
.
Jag dikhaaee ke liye naam labo par rakhkha.
Jo hawa badli, andaaz badal liya usne.
.
Mere saaye me "Masoom" wo aa ke baith gaee.
Jo thakan door huee, Khudaa Haafiz bol diya usne.



Zindgi kaye raang hai gazley tumhari,
mai inhey sab ko sunNaa chahti hu. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
sheel didi
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«Reply #4 on: October 25, 2012, 04:56:02 PM »
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Quote from: Masoom Shahzada on October 25, 2012, 01:12:06 PM

Jo Thakan Door Huee Khudaa Haafiz Bol Diya Usne

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Kaagaz pe likh ke naam kaat diya usne.
Tha esii kaabil maiN, insaaf kiya usne.
.
MaiN to khaalii tha kaise lab tak jata.
Jo bharaa tha wahii paimaanaa piya usne.
.
Dil badla, nazar badli to din nikla.
Raat ka khawaab maan, dil tor diya usne.
.
Shohrat ki chakaachond me saath udda.
Par jo tote to haath chodd diya usne.
.
Jag dikhaaee ke liye naam labo par rakhkha.
Jo hawa badli, andaaz badal liya usne.
.
Mere saaye me "Masoom" wo aa ke baith gaee.
Jo thakan door huee, Khudaa Haafiz bol diya usne.





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«Reply #5 on: October 25, 2012, 05:05:29 PM »
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Quote from: Masoom Shahzada on October 25, 2012, 01:12:06 PM

Jo Thakan Door Huee Khudaa Haafiz Bol Diya Usne

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Kaagaz pe likh ke naam kaat diya usne.
Tha esii kaabil maiN, insaaf kiya usne.
.
MaiN to khaalii tha kaise lab tak jata.
Jo bharaa tha wahii paimaanaa piya usne.
.
Dil badla, nazar badli to din nikla.
Raat ka khawaab maan, dil tor diya usne.
.
Shohrat ki chakaachond me saath udda.
Par jo tote to haath chodd diya usne.
.
Jag dikhaaee ke liye naam labo par rakhkha.
Jo hawa badli, andaaz badal liya usne.
.
Mere saaye me "Masoom" wo aa ke baith gaee.
Jo thakan door huee, Khudaa Haafiz bol diya usne.



nice
acche accho ka pyaar thukra diya usne
khud se hi jyada pyaar kiya mujse usne

kya hai dil jisne hi pucha usse
toota aaina dikha diya use usne

bus ek reet pyaar ki nihane ko
khushiyo ko apni quaan kiya usne

badnaami se bus hame bachane ko
khud ko khud hi mita diya usne
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«Reply #6 on: October 25, 2012, 05:34:06 PM »
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very good
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likhte rahiye...
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«Reply #7 on: October 25, 2012, 06:20:22 PM »
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Jag dikhaaee ke liye naam labo par rakhkha.
Jo hawa badli, andaaz badal liya usne.

Bahut Khoob
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«Reply #8 on: October 26, 2012, 02:43:22 AM »
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bahut khub masoom ji bahut badhiya Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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Quote from: sksaini4 on October 25, 2012, 01:28:52 PM
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«Reply #10 on: October 26, 2012, 08:41:12 AM »
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Masoom Pyaare Aadaab!


Kia baat hai janab waqai aaj shaayri ki hai aapne.. behad umdaa
khayaalaat aur ashaaroN meiN pukhta gehrai hai janab...

Bahut khoob bahut umdaa... Is umdaa aur qabil e sataish kalaam
par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahye... aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile


Quote from: Masoom Shahzada on October 25, 2012, 01:12:06 PM

Jo Thakan Door Huee Khudaa Haafiz Bol Diya Usne

------------------------------------

Kaagaz pe likh ke naam kaat diya usne.
Tha esii kaabil maiN, insaaf kiya usne.
.
Bahut khoob janab achcha matla hai daad...

MaiN to khaalii tha kaise lab tak jata.
Jo bharaa tha wahii paimaanaa piya usne.
.
Is sher ke kia kahne janab... waaH waaH aur bus waaH hi
nikal rahi hai... daad daad daad.

Dil badla, nazar badli to din nikla.
Raat ka khawaab maan, dil tor diya usne.
.
Kia kahne Pyaare bahut khoob...

Shohrat ki chakaachond me saath udda.
Par(Pankh) jo tote to haath chodd diya usne.
.
Bahut khoob dear daad daad ....

Jag dikhaaee ke liye naam labo par rakhkha.
Jo hawa badli, andaaz badal liya usne.
.
WaaH waaH Masoom sahaab kia kaheN yaar gazab bahut umdaa...

Mere saaye me "Masoom" wo aa ke baith gaee.
Jo thakan door huee, Khudaa Haafiz bol diya usne.

Bahut khoob, aur waqai sachai ka fasaana hai... daad
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«Reply #11 on: October 26, 2012, 12:57:47 PM »
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Quote from: Masoom Shahzada on October 25, 2012, 01:12:06 PM

Jo Thakan Door Huee Khudaa Haafiz Bol Diya Usne

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Kaagaz pe likh ke naam kaat diya usne.
Tha esii kaabil maiN, insaaf kiya usne.
.
MaiN to khaalii tha kaise lab tak jata.
Jo bharaa tha wahii paimaanaa piya usne.
.
Dil badla, nazar badli to din nikla.
Raat ka khawaab maan, dil tor diya usne.
.
Shohrat ki chakaachond me saath udda.
Par(Pankh) jo tote to haath chodd diya usne.
.
Jag dikhaaee ke liye naam labo par rakhkha.
Jo hawa badli, andaaz badal liya usne.
.
Mere saaye me "Masoom" wo aa ke baith gaee.
Jo thakan door huee, Khudaa Haafiz bol diya usne.




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Bahut bahut khoob
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«Reply #12 on: October 26, 2012, 03:21:58 PM »
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«Reply #13 on: October 26, 2012, 08:30:33 PM »
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Quote from: nandbahu on October 25, 2012, 01:32:47 PM
very nice
Bahut sukriya bhaai
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