kaanch ke mahal

by vicharika on October 23, 2010, 06:34:48 PM
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kaanch ke mahal ter ret pe thahre hain
khoon nahin dikhta par zakhm ye gahre hain

timtimahat ko jaa kar pas se zara dekho
roshni ke deron par gahre andhere hain

udne do usko chhone do aasman
zindgi ka haasil kya sirf saat ferf hain

na ye mera aanchal hai naye teri baahen hain
kaun si shay mujhko chaar soo ghere hai
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«Reply #1 on: October 23, 2010, 06:37:47 PM »
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maashaallaahhhhhhhhh.........kya khub likha haiaapne..har sher dil ko teer sa chubha......
pehli bar padha hai aapko aur sahi me aapke thoughts bht achche lage...wanna see more from ur side...

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«Reply #2 on: October 23, 2010, 06:44:58 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Vicharika Ji

Bahut achi Peshkash
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«Reply #3 on: October 23, 2010, 06:49:41 PM »
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shukria - ye kewal lvz nahi hai
mer dil he darwaze pe hui dastak ki khuhi hai
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«Reply #4 on: October 23, 2010, 07:03:13 PM »
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bahut achha hai jo dastak tujhe dekar kisi ne neend se jagaaya,
khuda ka shukra hai ki phir koi dard hume is mehfil me najar aaya... !

Intezar... !

Very good Vicharika ji Keep it up... !
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«Reply #5 on: October 23, 2010, 07:09:43 PM »
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dard ki dastak se ek lambi si sadak par
bas kuchh mod ke pare meri manzil hai shaayad!
shukriya ....
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«Reply #6 on: October 23, 2010, 07:14:27 PM »
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manzil to ek roz khud hi tere kareeb aayegi dost
dua hai ki kabhi na thako tum is safar ki takmeel tak !

Intezar !

Quote from: vicharika on October 23, 2010, 07:09:43 PM
dard ki dastak se ek lambi si sadak par
bas kuchh mod ke pare meri manzil hai shaayad!
shukriya ....
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phir laut kar mehfil mei jo aayee hai noori
kalam  likhne ko bahut betaab hai meri
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bahot sunder....really beautiful lnes
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«Reply #9 on: June 01, 2016, 02:35:37 PM »
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Quote from: vicharika on June 01, 2016, 02:26:03 PM
phir laut kar mehfil mei jo aayee hai noori
kalam  likhne ko bahut betaab hai meri

Welcome back - and apni betaab qhalam ko busy kijiye ke hamen acha acha padhne ko milta rahe Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: June 02, 2016, 11:36:46 AM »
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Quote from: vicharika on October 23, 2010, 06:34:48 PM
kaanch ke mahal ter ret pe thahre hain
khoon nahin dikhta par zakhm ye gahre hain

timtimahat ko jaa kar pas se zara dekho
roshni ke deron par gahre andhere hain

udne do usko chhone do aasman
zindgi ka haasil kya sirf saat ferf hain

na ye mera aanchal hai naye teri baahen hain
kaun si shay mujhko chaar soo ghere hai



bahot khoob Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: June 05, 2016, 11:16:03 AM »
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bahot shukriya koshish karti rahoongi
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