Kaash kat jaayen lamahey yeh, gaatey huye?:Ghazals

abdbundeli

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Kyoun simat jaayen, lamhey yeh gaatey huye?
Rab! Na ghat jaayen, lamhey yeh gaatey huye!

Wasl kaa dour hai! Hijra kaafoor hai!
Kaash kat jaayen lamhey yeh, gaatey huye!

Aatishoun ko bhigoyengey baadal naye;
Phir na chhat jaayen, lamhey yeh gaatey huye!

Yaad aayen, na jaayen kabhi zeyhn sey;
Kaash rat jaayen, lamhey yeh gaatey huye!

Ba’ad dahroun key aaye hain pahloo mein ham;
Kyoun palat jaayen, lamahey yeh gaatey huye?

Yeh masarrat kaa hai dour, jaaree rahey;
Kaash dat jaayen, lamhey yeh gaatey huye!

Yeh dahar hai hamaaraa sukoon-e-jigar;
Kyoun uchat jaayen, lamhey yeh gaatey huye?

Kaash mit jaaye seenoun kaa yeh faaslaa;
Ham sey sat jaayen, lamhey yeh gaatey huye!

Muskuraayaa hai man do gharhee key liye;
Kyoun nipat jaayen, lamhey yeh gaatey huye?

Mustahaq hain baraabar, ‘abd’, zouq mein;
Ham mein bat jaayen lamhey yeh, gaatey huye!

- abd bundeli


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Sayyid Randeri

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Re: Kaash kat jaayen lamhey yeh, gaatey huye?

«Reply #1 on: June 20, 2009, 08:01:20 PM »

Subhanallah kya kehne abd ji waah...
Bohot hi umda kalam pesh kiya aap ne, bohot khoob.


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madhuwesh

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Re: Kaash kat jaayen lamhey yeh, gaatey huye?

«Reply #2 on: June 20, 2009, 11:34:32 PM »

Wah wah Abd ji,wonderful creation,very very nice,keep it up. Clapping Smiley


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abdbundeli

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Re: Kaash kat jaayen lamhey yeh, gaatey huye?

«Reply #3 on: June 21, 2009, 01:52:50 AM »

Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on June 20, 2009, 08:01:20 PM

Subhanallah kya kehne abd ji waah...
Bohot hi umda kalam pesh kiya aap ne, bohot khoob.

Shukriyah janaab Sayyid Randeri sa'b!
- abd bundeli


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abdbundeli

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Re: Kaash kat jaayen lamhey yeh, gaatey huye?

«Reply #4 on: June 21, 2009, 01:53:45 AM »

Quote from: madhuwesh on June 20, 2009, 11:34:32 PM

Wah wah Abd ji,wonderful creation,very very nice,keep it up. Clapping Smiley

Thanks a lot, Madhu!
- abd bundeli


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Roja

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Re: Kaash kat jaayen lamhey yeh, gaatey huye?

«Reply #5 on: June 21, 2009, 03:13:12 AM »

Quote from: abdbundeli on June 20, 2009, 05:35:10 PM

Kyoun simat jaayen, lamhey yeh gaatey huye?
Rab! Na ghat jaayen, lamhey yeh gaatey huye!

Wasl kaa dour hai! Hijra kaafoor hai!
Kaash kat jaayen lamhey yeh, gaatey huye!

Aatishoun ko bhigoyengey baadal naye;
Phir na chhat jaayen, lamhey yeh gaatey huye!

Yaad aayen, na jaayen kabhi zeyhn sey;
Kaash rat jaayen, lamhey yeh gaatey huye!

Ba’ad dahroun key aaye hain pahloo mein ham;
Kyoun palat jaayen, lamhey yeh gaatey huye?

Yeh masarrat kaa hai dour, jaaree rahey;
Kaash dat jaayen, lamhey yeh gaatey huye!

Yeh dahar hai hamaaraa sukoon-e-jigar;
Kyoun uchat jaayen, lamhey yeh gaatey huye?

Kaash mit jaaye seenoun kaa yeh faaslaa;
Ham sey sat jaayen, lamhey yeh gaatey huye!

Muskuraayaa hai man do gharhee key liye;
Kyoun nipat jaayen, lamhey yeh gaatey huye?

Mustahaq hain baraabar, ‘abd’, zouq mein;
Ham mein bat jaayen lamhey yeh, gaatey huye!

- abd bundeli

Wah wah...Bahut bahut umda likha hai Uncle ji..


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Deepati

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Re: Kaash kat jaayen lamhey yeh, gaatey huye?

«Reply #6 on: June 21, 2009, 04:23:36 AM »

Wah Wah Bahut Khoob, Abd Ji, hamesha ki tarah! Applause


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abdbundeli

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Re: Kaash kat jaayen lamhey yeh, gaatey huye?

«Reply #7 on: June 21, 2009, 04:59:58 AM »

Quote from: Roja on June 21, 2009, 03:13:12 AM

Wah wah...Bahut bahut umda likha hai Uncle ji..

Thanks, Roja!
- ab bundeli


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abdbundeli

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Re: Kaash kat jaayen lamhey yeh, gaatey huye?

«Reply #8 on: June 21, 2009, 05:01:27 AM »

Quote from: Deepati on June 21, 2009, 04:23:36 AM

Wah Wah Bahut Khoob, Abd Ji, hamesha ki tarah! Applause

Thanks Deepati!
- abd bundeli


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deepika_divya

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Re: Kaash kat jaayen lamhey yeh, gaatey huye?

«Reply #9 on: June 21, 2009, 05:31:14 AM »

Behad Khoob Likha hai.. each and every lines having special effect in it. bahoot khoob ABD ji


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abdbundeli

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Re: Kaash kat jaayen lamhey yeh, gaatey huye?

«Reply #10 on: June 21, 2009, 05:51:12 AM »

Quote from: Sophi on June 21, 2009, 05:31:14 AM

Behad Khoob Likha hai.. each and every lines having special effect in it. bahoot khoob ABD ji

Thanks Sophi! I'm glad to note that you liked the poem that much!
- abd bundeli


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SARVESH RASTOGI

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Re: Kaash kat jaayen lamhey yeh, gaatey huye?

«Reply #11 on: June 21, 2009, 06:14:00 AM »

Bahut khoob Bundeli Saheb
Aapke paas itna khubsurat likhne ke liye kitane alfaz hain
lekin hamare paas tarif karne tak ke liye bhi alfaz kam pad rahe hain. Really too good.
SARVESH RASTOGI


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abdbundeli

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Re: Kaash kat jaayen lamhey yeh, gaatey huye?

«Reply #12 on: June 21, 2009, 06:46:28 AM »

Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on June 21, 2009, 06:14:00 AM

Bahut khoob Bundeli Saheb
Aapke paas itna khubsurat likhne ke liye kitane alfaz hain
lekin hamare paas tarif karne tak ke liye bhi alfaz kam pad rahe hain. Really too good.
SARVESH RASTOGI

Shukriyah, Rastogi ji! 70 kaa hoon! Poori zindagi padhhtey-padhhaatey, likhtey-padhhtey guzree hai! Aap noujawaan hain; meyree umra tak pahunchtey-pahunchtey, mujhsey 'meeloun' aagey nikal jaayengey! My best wishes are with you!
- abd bundeli


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