kabhi kisi baat pe naraaz nahi hota hoga

by livingbytheday on May 01, 2012, 07:30:57 AM
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kabhi kisi baat pe naraaz nahi hota hoga
woh bhi kya saksh hain kis baat pe rota hoga
Raat ke andhere, taaron se guftgu karke
Din ke ujale aankh khol ke sota hoga

Mere aankhon se hurbaar chura kar moti
na jaane koun se mala mein pirota hoga

hamesha rakhta hain phoolon ki hasi hoto par
Gum na jaane wo kis dariya mein dubota hoga

Uske dushman bhi diya karte hain duuayen usko
bade tareeqey se wo rishton ko sanjota hoga

Rakhta hain zakhmo ko salaamat, tohfe ki tarah
yun bhi lagta hain ki, usey dard nahi hota hoga

Iss puri kaaynaat ko us_sey hain mohabatt “Deepak”
Wo dilon mein pyar ko chup chaap se bota hoga

Deepak Srivastava "Deepak"
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«Reply #1 on: May 01, 2012, 07:37:20 AM »
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 Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: May 01, 2012, 07:40:33 AM »
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Bhai aapne jo....
Humesha rakhta wali line likhi h....
Na use Hamesha kar le sayad aapse mis typing ho gayi hogi....
So ab theek kar le.....
...
Bahut achchi lagi aapki ye gazal
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«Reply #3 on: May 01, 2012, 07:41:27 AM »
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Bhai aapne jo....
Humesha rakhta wali line likhi h....
Na use Hamesha kar le sayad aapse mis typing ho gayi hogi....
So ab theek kar le.....
...
Bahut achchi lagi aapki ye gazal
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«Reply #4 on: May 01, 2012, 10:14:05 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob....ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
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«Reply #5 on: May 01, 2012, 02:14:35 PM »
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MashaAllah, kya khoob likha hai aapne Deepak jee. Bahut achha laga. Meri taraf se ek rau.
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«Reply #6 on: May 01, 2012, 02:59:50 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on May 01, 2012, 07:37:20 AM
Applause Applause

thank you
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«Reply #7 on: May 01, 2012, 03:02:25 PM »
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Quote from: masoom shahjada on May 01, 2012, 07:40:33 AM
Bhai aapne jo....
Humesha rakhta wali line likhi h....
Na use Hamesha kar le sayad aapse mis typing ho gayi hogi....
So ab theek kar le.....
...
Bahut achchi lagi aapki ye gazal


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«Reply #8 on: May 01, 2012, 03:03:14 PM »
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Quote from: dolly on May 01, 2012, 10:14:05 AM
bahut bahut khoob....ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause

shukriyaa
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«Reply #9 on: May 01, 2012, 03:04:27 PM »
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Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on May 01, 2012, 02:14:35 PM
MashaAllah, kya khoob likha hai aapne Deepak jee. Bahut achha laga. Meri taraf se ek rau.

bahut bahut shukriyaa, aapne appreciate kiya aur rau diya, thank you
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«Reply #10 on: May 01, 2012, 04:10:19 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  waah deepak ji waah .. kamaal ki peshkash hai... bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne....!!!
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«Reply #11 on: May 02, 2012, 11:48:43 AM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on May 01, 2012, 04:10:19 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  waah deepak ji waah .. kamaal ki peshkash hai... bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne....!!!

thank you so much
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