kabhi tum muskurate ho, kabhi nazarein churaate ho:Ghazals

livingbytheday

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ek manchali koshish pesh kar raha hu, umeed hain aap logo ko pasand aayega.

"jub nazar se nazar vaar karta hain
saara din, saari raat, beqaraar karta hain
yun andheron mein teer chalane ka fayda kya hain
nishaana wo hain "deepak" jo dil ko paar karta hain"

kabhi tum muskurate ho, kabhi nazarein churaate ho
batao na mujhe tum kyu, aisey aajmaatey ho
magar bezaar hokar ke, jo apni raah main jaun
nigahon mein nigahein rakh ke tum wapas bulaatey ho

nahi jo pyar toh phir cheez kya hain aur yeh bolo
jo mujhko dard hota hain toh tum ansoo bahate ho
jo tumne gungunaati ishq ko aankhon mein na dekha
mujhe phir raah mein dekhkar, ghabra kyu jaatey ho

mere aankhon mein ansoo dekh kar palkein tere bheegey
mujhe ai nazuk-e-andaaz phir kyu rulaate ho
juda hokar ke mujhse do ghadi bhi jee na paogey
mujhe phir chodkar jaane ki tum kyu baat laatey ho

chupaakar julf mein chanchal sa mukhda, chaand ka tukda
tarsaatey ho rulaatey ho mujhe kitna sataatey ho
magar bezaar hokar ke, jo apni raah main jaun
nigahon mein nigahein rakh ke tum wapas bulaatey ho


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mkv

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Re: kabhi tum muskurate ho, kabhi nazarein churaate ho

«Reply #1 on: July 09, 2012, 04:52:51 PM »

Bahut khoob Deepak jee
sach me dil machal gaya..is manchali peshkash par.
aapke shabda..pyaar se labrej ..bahut umda
bahut bahut mubaarakbaad is shaandaar peshkash par.
Applause


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roy

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Re: kabhi tum muskurate ho, kabhi nazarein churaate ho

«Reply #2 on: July 09, 2012, 07:46:23 PM »

waah waah waah waah waah waah

beehaat khoobsoorat sir
behad khoobsorat
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anand aa geya DEEPAK g apki ye kavita padke dil khush ho geya

dherron daad !!


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Iftakhar Ahmad

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Re: kabhi tum muskurate ho, kabhi nazarein churaate ho

«Reply #3 on: July 09, 2012, 10:58:47 PM »

Waaaaaaaaaaaaah!!!!Behad khoob Deepak jee, kamaal ki rachna, bahut maza aaya padhke, kaafi achha laga.


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Re: kabhi tum muskurate ho, kabhi nazarein churaate ho

«Reply #4 on: July 10, 2012, 03:20:43 AM »

beautiful


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livingbytheday

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Re: kabhi tum muskurate ho, kabhi nazarein churaate ho

«Reply #5 on: July 11, 2012, 02:31:43 PM »

Quote from: mkv on July 09, 2012, 04:52:51 PM

Bahut khoob Deepak jee
sach me dil machal gaya..is manchali peshkash par.
aapke shabda..pyaar se labrej ..bahut umda
bahut bahut mubaarakbaad is shaandaar peshkash par.
Applause

sir thank you so much, for kind words


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livingbytheday

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Re: kabhi tum muskurate ho, kabhi nazarein churaate ho

«Reply #6 on: July 11, 2012, 02:32:41 PM »

Quote from: roy on July 09, 2012, 07:46:23 PM

waah waah waah waah waah waah

beehaat khoobsoorat sir
behad khoobsorat
Clapping Smiley

anand aa geya DEEPAK g apki ye kavita padke dil khush ho geya

dherron daad !!

roy ji thank you, kind words of encouragement takes me a long distance


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Asghr

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Re: kabhi tum muskurate ho, kabhi nazarein churaate ho

«Reply #7 on: July 13, 2012, 06:32:20 PM »

kya khubsurat likha hai aap ne i like it sir....Asghr


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livingbytheday

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Re: kabhi tum muskurate ho, kabhi nazarein churaate ho

«Reply #8 on: July 13, 2012, 07:32:56 PM »

Quote from: Asghr on July 13, 2012, 06:32:20 PM

kya khubsurat likha hai aap ne i like it sir....Asghr

thank you asghr ji


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