kabhi uff to kabhi aah kare...."Sahal".

by sahal on November 27, 2013, 07:06:38 PM
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«Reply #15 on: November 28, 2013, 12:55:44 AM »
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Karne chala hai dil mera ishq phir se,
Array!!! ab to zara koi ise agaah kare.

Dastoor E ishq hai iska badla nahi nizaam,
Abaad kare kisi ko to kisi ko fanaah kare.

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waah sahal bhai iss bemisaal andaaz ke kya kehne..
Bas har lafz jaise dil ki kasauti se abhi abhi guzar ke hi nikla hai..happy9
Dhero daad apko..happy9

P.S: Are ee ka nattu kaka..!!!
Sasura itta bhari bharkam shabd aur ehsaas daal diye ho ghazalwa me aur      kahat rahe ki wazan kam gaya hai..Waise itta achha likhoge to baah baah baah hi na karenge..Laughing hard Laughing hard
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«Reply #16 on: November 28, 2013, 01:09:25 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
kiya baat kiya baat
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«Reply #17 on: November 28, 2013, 01:15:25 AM »
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Quote from: sahal on November 27, 2013, 07:06:38 PM

          kabhi uff to kabhi aah kare...."Sahal".

Hum kabhi uff to kabhi aah karein,
hamein tera ye ishq tabaah kare.

Dua beasar ab dawa bhi kaam na kare,
poochhe tabeeb ilaaj ab kis taraah karein.

Karne chala hai dil mera ishq phir se,
Array!!! ab to zara koi ise agaah kare.

Dastoor E ishq hai iska badla nahi nizaam,
Abaad kare kisi ko to kisi ko fanaah kare.

Jane kya mile saza unn gunaahon ki,
Baad az tauba jo hum phir gunaah karein.

Raha nahi wazan meri shayeri mein ab,
log jane kyun “Sahal” waah waah karein.


tabeeb= doctor,

baad Az tauba= tauba ke baad.
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«Reply #18 on: November 28, 2013, 01:50:13 PM »
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Quote from: soudagar on November 27, 2013, 11:35:13 PM
wah wah wah wah wah behad khub behad umda gazal sahal bhai... lajwab dheron daad o mubarakbad


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Thankyou ! soudagar sahab
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«Reply #19 on: November 28, 2013, 01:52:30 PM »
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Quote from: nashwani on November 28, 2013, 12:55:44 AM
Karne chala hai dil mera ishq phir se,
Array!!! ab to zara koi ise agaah kare.

Dastoor E ishq hai iska badla nahi nizaam,
Abaad kare kisi ko to kisi ko fanaah kare.

Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

waah sahal bhai iss bemisaal andaaz ke kya kehne..
Bas har lafz jaise dil ki kasauti se abhi abhi guzar ke hi nikla hai..happy9
Dhero daad apko..happy9

P.S: Are ee ka nattu kaka..!!!
Sasura itta bhari bharkam shabd aur ehsaas daal diye ho ghazalwa me aur      kahat rahe ki wazan kam gaya hai..Waise itta achha likhoge to baah baah baah hi na karenge..Laughing hard Laughing hard
bohut shukriya Nashwani jee

p.s array ghzalwa jab likhat rahe to
hum hum na rahe koi shayer hamar under ghusat jawat hai
hum kaa karee ab ,,, ap aap kahat rahe to wazan hoga hi
bas waah waah kiye jao babua.
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«Reply #20 on: November 28, 2013, 01:54:50 PM »
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Quote from: jeet jainam on November 28, 2013, 01:09:25 AM
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«Reply #23 on: November 28, 2013, 02:13:08 PM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #24 on: November 28, 2013, 02:48:04 PM »
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Quote from: sahal on November 27, 2013, 07:06:38 PM

          kabhi uff to kabhi aah kare...."Sahal".

Hum kabhi uff to kabhi aah kare,
hamein tera ye ishq tabaah kare.

Waaaaaaaaaaah...

Dua beasar ab dawa bhi kaam na kare,
poochhe tabeeb ilaaj ab kis taraah kare.

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Karne chala hai dil mera ishq phir se,
Array!!! ab to zara koi ise agaah kare.

hmmmmm abhi waqt rahte sambhal jaao.....

Dastoor E ishq hai iska badla nahi nizaam,
Abaad kare kisi ko to kisi ko fanaah kare.

Kya baat hai.....

Jane kya mile saza unn gunaahon ki,
Baad az tauba jo hum phir gunaah kare.

Beshak darr lagta hai jab sochti hoon....

Raha nahi wazan meri shayeri mein ab,
log jane kyun “Sahal” waah waah kare.

 DOH DOH  aisa nahi hai lafzon mein kamaal ka wazan hai...


tabeeb= doctor,

baad Az tauba= tauba ke baad.
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Waaaaaaaaah Sahal dil jeet liya tumne.. kya kamaal ki peshkash rahi.... ek rau ke saath hazaron dili daaaaaaaaaaaaad qubool karo...
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Waaaaaaaaah Sahal dil jeet liya tumne.. kya kamaal ki peshkash rahi.... ek rau ke saath hazaron dili daaaaaaaaaaaaad qubool karo...
bohut bohut shukriya Aqsh ji
rau dene aur waqt nikal kar padhne ka shukriya
daad qubool hui .
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«Reply #26 on: November 28, 2013, 10:30:34 PM »
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Quote from: sahal on November 27, 2013, 07:06:38 PM

          kabhi uff to kabhi aah kare...."Sahal".

Hum kabhi uff to kabhi aah kare,
hamein tera ye ishq tabaah kare.

Dua beasar ab dawa bhi kaam na kare,
poochhe tabeeb ilaaj ab kis taraah kare.

Karne chala hai dil mera ishq phir se,
Array!!! ab to zara koi ise agaah kare.

Dastoor E ishq hai iska badla nahi nizaam,
Abaad kare kisi ko to kisi ko fanaah kare.

Jane kya mile saza unn gunaahon ki,
Baad az tauba jo hum phir gunaah kare.

Raha nahi wazan meri shayeri mein ab,
log jane kyun “Sahal” waah waah kare.


tabeeb= doctor,

baad Az tauba= tauba ke baad.
@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@


khoobsoorat qafiaa radeef chunna hai sahal jee aap ne ,..
sab assaar bohat khoob hain ,......bohat c daad, rau due raha aapkaa Usual Smile
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Quote from: laaiba on November 28, 2013, 10:30:34 PM
khoobsoorat qafiaa radeef chunna hai sahal jee aap ne ,..
sab assaar bohat khoob hain ,......bohat c daad, rau due raha aapkaa Usual Smile

Bohut bohut shukriya laaiba jee.

Pdhne pasand karne aur keemti waqt dene k
Rau dene ka alag se shukriya.
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Waaah !!! Kamaal ke aashaar Sahal ji !!! tanziya andaaz mein behtareen fiqr zaahir ki hai !!! dheron daad !!!!
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Waaah !!! Kamaal ke aashaar Sahal ji !!! tanziya andaaz mein behtareen fiqr zaahir ki hai !!! dheron daad !!!!
bohut bohut shukriya zarraa jee
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