Kahaan chhup gaye ho, nazar aatey-aatey?

by abdbundeli on June 23, 2010, 09:48:37 AM
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Rahey ho sanam arsh-sey jagmagaatey!
Kahaan chhup gaye ho, nazar aatey-aatey?

Kahaan hain uyoonoun key jorhey hazaaroun;
Ki, ham aapkey husn ko deykh paatey?

Mukhaatib huye ho nahin eik pal bhee;
Miley, go ki, khwaaboun mein jab-tab jagaatey?

Rah-e-ishq hai: aazmaayogey kitney?
Kabhee, kaash, ahaley wafaa aazmaatey?

Tumhaarey binaa mein jiyaa huun akeylaa:
Na aanaa thaa gar, to, hamain hee bulaatey!

Dahar chuk na jaaye, rahuun muntazir mein?
Rahogey, kaho, hashra tak kyaa sataatey?

Bahut deyr sey mein kharhaa hun kinaarey,
Ki, deykhoon to us paar kyoun log jaatey?

'Abd' kyoun bahaaneyn banaayegaa? Deykho,
Wahee thak gaye hain pilaatey-pilaatey!!

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«Reply #1 on: June 23, 2010, 10:10:37 AM »
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Wah wah ABD ji,hemesha ki tarah bahut khoobsurat gazal pesh kiya aapne.mindblowing creation Hats off to you! Both Thumbs Up Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: June 23, 2010, 11:26:32 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on June 23, 2010, 10:10:37 AM
Wah wah ABD ji,hemesha ki tarah bahut khoobsurat gazal pesh kiya aapne.mindblowing creation Hats off to you! Both Thumbs Up Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Madhu ji 'dhanyawaad'! Khush raheyn!

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«Reply #3 on: June 23, 2010, 01:04:06 PM »
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Wah! Marhaba!

agar hum ko mil jatay woh aatay jaatay
na kion unko palkoan pe hum phir bithaatay!
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«Reply #4 on: June 23, 2010, 05:19:18 PM »
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Ab aa jaaO zaalim guzarne ko hay raat
bahut jaagay khud ko sulaatey sulaatey!
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«Reply #5 on: June 24, 2010, 06:20:53 AM »
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Quote from: mazHur on June 23, 2010, 01:04:06 PM
Wah! Marhaba!

agar hum ko mil jatay woh aatay jaatay
na kion unko palkoan pe hum phir bithaatay!


Bahut achchhey mazHur ji! Shukriyah!

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«Reply #6 on: June 24, 2010, 06:30:21 AM »
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Quote from: mazHur on June 23, 2010, 05:19:18 PM

Ab aa jaaO zaalim guzarne ko hay raat
bahut jaagay khud ko sulaatey sulaatey!
mazHur ji!

Hamain lag rahaa: neend mein mubtalaa ho;
Wagarnah na kyoun dar pai aa khatkhataatey?

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«Reply #7 on: June 24, 2010, 08:03:06 AM »
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Kahan thee ye Qismet  ke mehfil me teri
hum aatay agar toe adoo bhi na aatay!
kaisa hay??
rgds
Maz
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«Reply #8 on: June 24, 2010, 09:08:05 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on June 23, 2010, 09:48:37 AM
Rahey ho sanam arsh-sey jagmagaatey!
Kahaan chhup gaye ho, nazar aatey-aatey?

Kahaan hain uyoonoun key jorhey hazaaroun;
Ki, ham aapkey husn ko deykh paatey?

Mukhaatib huye ho nahin eik pal bhee;
Miley, go ki, khwaaboun mein jab-tab jagaatey?

Rah-e-ishq hai: aazmaayogey kitney?
Kabhee, kaash, ahaley wafaa aazmaatey?

Tumhaarey binaa mein jiyaa huun akeylaa:
Na aanaa thaa gar, to, hamain hee bulaatey!

Dahar chuk na jaaye, rahuun muntazir mein?
Rahogey, kaho, hashra tak kyaa sataatey?

Bahut deyr sey mein kharhaa hun kinaarey,
Ki, deykhoon to us paar kyoun log jaatey?

'Abd' kyoun bahaaneyn banaayegaa? Deykho,
Wahee thak gaye hain pilaatey-pilaatey!!

                         - abd bundeli


Bahut khoob Abd Ji
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«Reply #9 on: June 25, 2010, 09:29:31 AM »
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Quote from: mazHur on June 24, 2010, 08:03:06 AM
Kahan thee ye Qismet ke mehfil me teri
hum aatay agar toe adoo bhi na aatay!
kaisa hay??
rgds
Maz

Thanks a lot! Khush rahiye!
Bahut achchhey mazHur ji!

Raqeeboun sey bachnaa, rahaa kab hai mumkin?
Mileyngey hazaaroun 'waheen' aatey-jaatey!
Shumaar apnaa, bazmoun unkee, hai ab bhee;
Agar eik hotaa, to, ham bhee bataatey!

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«Reply #10 on: June 25, 2010, 09:32:21 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on June 24, 2010, 09:08:05 AM
Bahut khoob Abd Ji

Thanks a lot Rajesh ji!

          - abd bundeli
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