KAHAAN TAK..............(K

khamosh_aawaaz

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   SAAHIL NAA HOTAA TO SAMANDAR KAHAAN TAK HOTAA,
   MANZIL NAA AATI TO SAFAR KAHAAN TAK HOTAA,

   GUZAR JAATAA HAI BURAA DAUR ZINDAGI SEY EK ROZ,
   YEH WAQT NAA HOTAA TO DAUR KAHAAN TAK HOTAA,

   TAAB NAA LAA SAKAA ZULM KI INTAHAA WOH FAUT HOGAYAA,
   JO MAUT NAA HOTI TO ZULM-E-ZOR KAHAAN TAK HOTAA,

   MAUT MITAA DETI HAI JAHAAN SEY EK DIN WAJOOD SABKAA,
   ZINDAGI QAYAAMAT TAK HOTI TO ASAR KAHAAN TAK HOTAA,

   LUT GAYI SAARI KHUSHIYAN EK AARZOO MAIN KHAMOSH,
   YE KHAWAHISH NAA HOTI TO SUROOR KAHAAN TAK HOTAA....!! icon_scratch


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madhuwesh

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Re: KAHAAN TAK..............(K_A)

«Reply #1 on: September 11, 2009, 11:37:49 PM »

Wah bahut khoob Khamosh ji very beautiful gazal.mindblowing creation.


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aaina

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Re: KAHAAN TAK..............(K_A)

«Reply #2 on: September 12, 2009, 04:08:17 AM »

Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on September 11, 2009, 07:17:38 PM

SAAHIL NAA HOTAA GAR TO SAMANDAR KAHAAN TAK HOTAA,
BAHAAR NAA AATI GAR TO GULISTAAN KAHAAN TAK HOTAA,

GUZAR JAATAA HAI BURAA DAUR ZINDAGI SEY DHEEREY DHEEREY,
YEH WAQT NAA HATAA GAR TO DAUR YEH KAHAAN TAK HOTAA,

ZULM KI INTAHAA TAAB NAHIN LAYAA WOH FAUT(MARNAA)HOGAYAA,
JO INTAHAA KI HADD NAA HOTI GAR TO ZULM KAHAAN TAK HOTAA,

MAUT MITAA DETI HAI EK DIN WAJOOD SABKAA ISS DUNIYAA MAIN,
ZINDAGI QAYAAMAT TAK HOTI GAR TO WAJOOD KAHAAN TAK HAOTAA,

LUTAA DIYAA HAI SAARI KHUSHIYAN AARZOO KEY CHAKKAR MAIN,
YEH TAMMANAA NAHIN HOTI KHAMOSH TO JAHAAN KAHAAN TAK HOTAA....!!

bhut khoob K_A bhut acha likha hai, keep wrinting


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saaz_haldwanvi

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Re: KAHAAN TAK..............(K_A)

«Reply #3 on: September 12, 2009, 05:32:07 AM »

badiya K A very good,gahrayii acchi hai gazal mein, ghazal mein kaafiya kamjor hai,ise thik karlenge to ghazal bahut behtar ban paregi,


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khamosh_aawaaz

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Re: KAHAAN TAK..............(K_A)

«Reply #4 on: September 12, 2009, 06:45:39 AM »

Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on September 11, 2009, 07:17:38 PM

SAAHIL NAA HOTAA GAR TO SAMANDAR KAHAAN TAK HOTAA,
BAHAAR NAA AATI GAR TO GULISTAAN KAHAAN TAK HOTAA,

GUZAR JAATAA HAI BURAA DAUR ZINDAGI SEY DHEEREY DHEEREY,
YEH WAQT NAA HOTAA GAR TO DAUR YEH KAHAAN TAK HOTAA,

ZULM KI INTAHAA TAAB NAHIN LAYAA WOH FAUT(MARNAA)HOGAYAA,
JO INTAHAA KI HADD NAA HOTI GAR TO ZULM KAHAAN TAK HOTAA,

MAUT MITAA DETI HAI EK DIN WAJOOD SABKAA ISS DUNIYAA MAIN,
ZINDAGI QAYAAMAT TAK HOTI GAR TO WAJOOD KAHAAN TAK HOTAA,

LUTAA DIYAA HAI SAARI KHUSHIYAN AARZOO KEY CHAKKAR MAIN,
YEH TAMMANAA NAHIN HOTI KHAMOSH TO JAHAAN KAHAAN TAK HOTAA....!!