Kaho, aaj kyon hai nazar sahmee-sahmee?

by abdbundeli on March 14, 2009, 05:39:05 PM
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Kaho, aaj kyon hai nazar sahmee-sahmee?
Jawaan justajoo ki dagar sahmee-sahmee?

Gulaabee guloun sey ladaa hai gulistaan;
Sabhee khushbooyen hain magar sahmee-sahmee?

Bataayen, huzoor, aa rahey hain kahaan sey?
Thhahariye, ki, hai rahguzar sahmee-sahmee?

Tumhain deykh, chupchaap hain kyon parindey?
Chahakney kee kyon hai umar sahmee-sahmee?

Kidhar, aandhiyoun mein, bhataktey rahey ho?
Mukhaatib hai kis key, sahar sahmee-sahmee?

Kinaarah hai soonaa, kahaan hai safeenaa:
Chalee aa rahee har lahar sahmee-sahmee?

Kahaan hai nihaan aaj khush aamdeedee?
Gazal ki hai, kyon, har bahar sahmee-sahmee?

Yeh saaraa jahaan aaj gamgeen kyon hai;
Ki, hai zindagee darbadar sahmee-sahmee?

Huaa kyaa, ki, baad-e-sabaa jaa rahee hai,
Abhi sey palat, apney ghar sahmee-sahmee?

Uyoonii ishaarah thaa har kaargar; ab,
‘Abd’, lahz hai bey asar sahmee-sahmee?

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«Reply #1 on: March 15, 2009, 09:30:43 AM »
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Wah Abd ji... aapka yeh gazal padkar sehmee sehmee rehgayi  Usual Smile
Very nice gazal.... Applause
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«Reply #2 on: March 15, 2009, 11:05:14 AM »
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waah!! adb ji bahut khoob..bahut acchi gazal pesh kiya hai aapne.. Applause
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«Reply #3 on: March 15, 2009, 11:05:59 AM »
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Bohot pyaari Ghazal hai, Abd Ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Jidhar Dekhiye, Har Nazar Sahmee Sahmee,
Shab Sahmee Sahmee, Sehar Sahmee Sahmee

Har Chehre Pe Sannaton Ki Hai Kahani,
Khamoshi Main Lipti Dehar Sahmee Sahmee
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«Reply #4 on: March 15, 2009, 02:29:58 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on March 15, 2009, 09:30:43 AM
Wah Abd ji... aapka yeh gazal padkar sehmee sehmee rehgayi  Usual Smile
Very nice gazal.... Applause

Roja ji, thanks! Sheirniyaan kab sey sahamney lageen hain?
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«Reply #5 on: March 15, 2009, 02:46:43 PM »
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Quote from: fairy2633 on March 15, 2009, 11:05:14 AM
waah!! adb ji bahut khoob..bahut acchi gazal pesh kiya hai aapne.. Applause
Thanks a lot, fairy2633 ji!
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«Reply #6 on: March 15, 2009, 02:58:37 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on March 15, 2009, 11:05:59 AM
Bohot pyaari Ghazal hai, Abd Ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Jidhar Dekhiye, Har Nazar Sahmee Sahmee,
Shab Sahmee Sahmee, Sehar Sahmee Sahmee

Har Chehre Pe Sannaton Ki Hai Kahani,
Khamoshi Main Lipti Dehar Sahmee Sahmee

Thanks a lot, Celmira ji!

Kaheen par siyaasat kharhee sahmee-sahmee!
Kaheen par riyaasat kharhee sahmee-sahmee!
Kaheen mulk aazaad sahmeyn kharhey hain;
Kaheen par wizaarat kharhee sahmee-sahmee!!

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«Reply #7 on: March 15, 2009, 10:33:02 PM »
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Babu Ji,


Sahmee Hui Aaj Insaaniyat Hai
Uthaaye Khadi Sar Haiwaaniyat Hai


Aapke jawab, aur apne sher pe mujhe film 'Tajmahal" ka ye song yaad aa gaya jo Sahir Ludhiyanvi Sahab ka likha hua hai...Ma'afi ke saath yahan post kar rahi hoon !!


Khudaa-e-bartar terii zamii.n par zamii.n kii Khaatir ye ja.ng kyo.N hai
har ek fatah-o-zafar ke daaman pe Khuun-e-insaa.N kaa ra.ng kyo.N hai

zamii.n bhii terii hai hum bhii tere, ye milkiyat kaa sawaal kyaa hai
ye qatl-o-Khuu.N kaa rivaaj kyo.N hai, ye rasm-e-ja.ng-o-jadaal kyaa hai

**jinhe.n talab hai jahaan bhar kii unhii.n ka dil itnaa ta.ng kyo.N hai**

Gariib maa.N_o.n shariif bahno.n ko amn-o-izzat kii zi.ndagii de
**jinhe.n ataa kii hai tuune taaqat unhe.n hidaayat kii roshnii de**

saro.n me.n kibr-o-Guruur kyo.N hai, dilo.n ke shiishe pe za.ng kyo.N hai

qazaa ke raste pe jaanewaalo.n ko bach ke aane kii raah denaa
dilo.n ke gulshan uja.D na jaa_e.n muhabbato.n ko panaah denaa

jahaa.N me.n jashn-e-wafaa ke badle ye jashn-e-tiir-o-tufa.ng kyo.N hai
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«Reply #8 on: March 16, 2009, 02:44:11 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on March 15, 2009, 02:58:37 PM
Thanks a lot, Celmira ji!

Kaheen par siyaasat kharhee sahmee-sahmee!
Kaheen par riyaasat kharhee sahmee-sahmee!
Kaheen mulk aazaad sahmeyn kharhey hain;
Kaheen par wizaarat kharhee sahmee-sahmee!!

                             - abd bundeli

Wah .... kya baat hai.. Uncle ji, yeh 4 line mein bahut kuch keh diya sehmee sahmee......  Applause Thumbs UP
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«Reply #9 on: March 16, 2009, 05:11:12 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on March 15, 2009, 10:33:02 PM
Babu Ji,


Sahmee Hui Aaj Insaaniyat Hai
Uthaaye Khadi Sar Pai Haiwaaniyat Hai


Aapke jawab, aur apne sher pe mujhe film 'Tajmahal" ka ye song yaad aa gaya jo Sahir Ludhiyanvi Sahab ka likha hua hai...Ma'afi ke saath yahan post kar rahi hoon !!


Khudaa-e-bartar terii zamii.n par zamii.n kii Khaatir ye ja.ng kyo.N hai
har ek fatah-o-zafar ke daaman pe Khuun-e-insaa.N kaa ra.ng kyo.N hai

zamii.n bhii terii hai hum bhii tere, ye milkiyat kaa sawaal kyaa hai
ye qatl-o-Khuu.N kaa rivaaj kyo.N hai, ye rasm-e-ja.ng-o-jadaal kyaa hai

**jinhe.n talab hai jahaan bhar kii unhii.n ka dil itnaa ta.ng kyo.N hai**

Gariib maa.N_o.n shariif bahno.n ko amn-o-izzat kii zi.ndagii de
**jinhe.n ataa kii hai tuune taaqat unhe.n hidaayat kii roshnii de**

saro.n me.n kibr-o-Guruur kyo.N hai, dilo.n ke shiishe pe za.ng kyo.N hai

qazaa ke raste pe jaanewaalo.n ko bach ke aane kii raah denaa
dilo.n ke gulshan uja.D na jaa_e.n muhabbato.n ko panaah denaa

jahaa.N me.n jashn-e-wafaa ke badle ye jashn-e-tiir-o-tufa.ng kyo.N hai
Bahut hi achchee nazm share ki hai aapney, Celmira ji! Sahir Ludhiyanvi Sahab to bahut hi uunchey shaayar huye hain! Aap ki yeh do laainey bhi bahut kuchh bayaan kar raheen hain! Bahut achchhey!
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«Reply #10 on: March 16, 2009, 05:13:08 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on March 16, 2009, 02:44:11 AM
Wah .... kya baat hai.. Uncle ji, yeh 4 line mein bahut kuch keh diya sehmee sahmee......  Applause Thumbs UP
Thanks a lot, Roja ji!
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