Kaho kuchh, ki, kyoun paas aatey nahin ho?

by abdbundeli on August 07, 2010, 03:15:42 PM
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Kaho kuchh, ki, kyoun paas aatey nahin ho?
Sataatey ho, par, kuchh bataatey nahin ho?

Lalaktee hai jab bahr ko mouj-e-dariyah:
Mujhey, yar, tab bhee bulaatey nahin ho?

Rahuun kab talak eid kaa muntazir mein:
Musalsal ta'aanuk ko aatey nahin ho?

Raqeeboun pai phir sey meyharbaan huye ho?
Palat kyaa tabhi munh dikhaatey nahin ho?

Liye saath gulbun key gunchhey ki surkhee,
Shafaq kyoun nigaahoun mein laatey nahin ho?

Guzartaa nahin chain sey ab lamhaa bhee!
Guzarteen hain raateyn, sulaatey nahin ho?

Uqaaboun ki 'choun-choun' sey aajiz hun, fir bhee,
Gazal andleebee sunaatey nahin ho?

Bhataktaa hun khaamosh taareekiyoun mein:
Shamaa husn kee kyoun jalaatey nahin ho?

Halaf thaa, ki, 'taahashra hai saath apnaa!'
'Abd' ab ahad kyoun nibhaatey nahin ho?

                      - abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: August 08, 2010, 01:24:16 PM »
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Kaho kuchh, ki, kyoun paas aatey nahin ho?
Sataatey ho, par, kuchh bataatey nahin ho?

Lalaktee hai jab bahr ko mouj-e-dariyah:
Mujhey, yar, tab bhee bulaatey nahin ho?

Rahuun kab talak eid kaa muntazir mein:
Musalsal ta'aanuk ko aatey nahin ho?

Raqeeboun pai phir sey meyharbaan huye ho?
Palat kyaa tabhi munh dikhaatey nahin ho?

Liye saath gulbun key gunchhey ki surkhee,
Shafaq kyoun nigaahoun mein laatey nahin ho?

Guzartaa nahin chain sey ab lamhaa bhee!
Guzarteen hain raateyn, sulaatey nahin ho?

Uqaaboun ki 'choun-choun' sey aajiz hun, fir bhee,
Gazal andleebee sunaatey nahin ho?

Bhataktaa hun khaamosh taareekiyoun mein:
Shamaa husn kee kyoun jalaatey nahin ho?

Halaf thaa, ki, 'taahashra hai saath apnaa!'
'Abd' ab ahad kyoun nibhaatey nahin ho?

                      - abd bundeli


Its too good........bulandi sahab ! very nice creation...

duaaon ke saath...
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«Reply #2 on: August 09, 2010, 04:43:48 AM »
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Its too good........bulandi sahab ! very nice creation...

duaaon ke saath...

Shukriyah janaab! Mein bulandi nahin, bundeli hun! Bulandi hota to kabhee kaa bulandiyoun par pahunch chukaa hotaa! Khush rahiye!

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«Reply #3 on: August 09, 2010, 05:10:35 AM »
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bht khubbb abdbundeli saheb.bht mast likha hai...
aapki tarah urdu nahin aati hume likhni par koshish ki hai kuch kehne ki galat ho to sahi kar lijiye ga...

aana chahte hain paas hum bhi aapke
lekin kya karen sharm se kadam uthte nahin hai

dekhne ki lalak me khinche aate hain galiyaare me
par jab aapko dekhta paate hain nazar utha paate nahin hain

ye parde ka chalan hai kya karen hum bhi
hata k isko aapko chand dikha sakte nahin hain

hain sharm se gulabi ye meri aankhein
tujhse nazar milake ye hum keh sakte nahin hain

hai tujhi se mahobbat mujhe ee mere deewane
ye chahkar bhi tujhe bata sakte nahin hain...!!!
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«Reply #4 on: August 09, 2010, 05:14:20 AM »
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Kaho kuchh, ki, kyoun paas aatey nahin ho?
Sataatey ho, par, kuchh bataatey nahin ho?

Lalaktee hai jab bahr ko mouj-e-dariyah:
Mujhey, yar, tab bhee bulaatey nahin ho?

Rahuun kab talak eid kaa muntazir mein:
Musalsal ta'aanuk ko aatey nahin ho?

Raqeeboun pai phir sey meyharbaan huye ho?
Palat kyaa tabhi munh dikhaatey nahin ho?

Liye saath gulbun key gunchhey ki surkhee,
Shafaq kyoun nigaahoun mein laatey nahin ho?

Guzartaa nahin chain sey ab lamhaa bhee!
Guzarteen hain raateyn, sulaatey nahin ho?

Uqaaboun ki 'choun-choun' sey aajiz hun, fir bhee,
Gazal andleebee sunaatey nahin ho?

Bhataktaa hun khaamosh taareekiyoun mein:
Shamaa husn kee kyoun jalaatey nahin ho?

Halaf thaa, ki, 'taahashra hai saath apnaa!'
'Abd' ab ahad kyoun nibhaatey nahin ho?

                      - abd bundeli


Good one Abd Ji
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«Reply #5 on: August 09, 2010, 02:50:17 PM »
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bht khubbb abdbundeli saheb.bht mast likha hai...
aapki tarah urdu nahin aati hume likhni par koshish ki hai kuch kehne ki galat ho to sahi kar lijiye ga...

aana chahte hain paas hum bhi aapke
lekin kya karen sharm se kadam uthte nahin hai

dekhne ki lalak me khinche aate hain galiyaare me
par jab aapko dekhta paate hain nazar utha paate nahin hain

ye parde ka chalan hai kya karen hum bhi
hata k isko aapko chand dikha sakte nahin hain

hain sharm se gulabi ye meri aankhein
tujhse nazar milake ye hum keh sakte nahin hain

hai tujhi se mahobbat mujhe ee mere deewane
ye chahkar bhi tujhe bata sakte nahin hain...!!!

Likhtey rahiye: 'the development of the subject and the related thoughts' bahut achchhey hain! 'Flow' bhee zaldee hi lahroun mein 'athhkheyliyaan' karney lageygaa!

My best wishes are with you!

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«Reply #6 on: August 09, 2010, 02:54:05 PM »
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Good one Abd Ji

Dhanyawaad Rajesh ji!

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