kahti hoon... kahti hoon

by vicharika on March 20, 2018, 01:39:14 PM
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soch kar tunko gazal kahti hoon
dil ke lahoo se dil kahti hoon

ye hawayein ye chandni raat
aa ja ab to mil kahti hoon

apne khwabon ki tabeer to kar
milegi zaroor manzil kahti hoon

tere bina bikhri padi hai zindgi
mil jao to ho kaamil kahti hoon

sameto khud ko aur waar karo
rahoge kab tak bismil kahti hoon

chha kar tere vajood pe ek roz
kar loongi tumko haasil kahti hoon

paa bhi loon aur kasak ho firaaq ki
kaise milenge do saahil kahti hoon

jo yaar tere eib batate hain noori
vahi janaze mein honge shamil kahti hoon




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«Reply #1 on: March 20, 2018, 02:12:41 PM »
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बहुत ही सुंदर एहसास ढेरो दाद कबूल करे  Applause Applause Applause Applause

कहने को तो बहुत कह दिया,अब मेरी सुनो
हम तो तुम्हारे पास है,जरा कान लगाकर सुनो
दिल की धडकने क्या कह रही उसको भी सुनो
ये धडकने बंद हो जायेगी अगर तुम नहीं सुनो


आपको यह जबाब कैसे लगा,हम तो जरा सुने

लिखने से पूर्व जरा स्पेलिंग भी चेक कर लिया करो

जैसे तुमको की जगह तुनको (TUNKO) लिख दिया

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«Reply #2 on: March 20, 2018, 03:35:00 PM »
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aapke jawaab lajawaab
aapki samjhaish ka shukriya
bahut nawajish
main khud us din ke intezaar mein hoo jab ek mukkammal gazal kah paaungi
bahut shukriya
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«Reply #3 on: March 21, 2018, 01:03:29 AM »
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soch kar tunko gazal kahti hoon
dil ke lahoo se dil kahti hoon

ye hawayein ye chandni raat
aa ja ab to mil kahti hoon

apne khwabon ki tabeer to kar
milegi zaroor manzil kahti hoon

tere bina bikhri padi hai zindgi
mil jao to ho kaamil kahti hoon

sameto khud ko aur waar karo
rahoge kab tak bismil kahti hoon

chha kar tere vajood pe ek roz
kar loongi tumko haasil kahti hoon

paa bhi loon aur kasak ho firaaq ki
kaise milenge do saahil kahti hoon

jo yaar tere eib batate hain noori
vahi janaze mein honge shamil kahti hoon





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«Reply #4 on: March 30, 2018, 12:47:02 PM »
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itne samay baad rau mila dhanyawaad bahut dhanyawaad inayat
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«Reply #5 on: April 03, 2018, 02:41:53 AM »
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Very nice very impressive  a rau for u
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