SARVESH RASTOGI
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KAISE BATLAEN MAT PUCHHO KITNI GHABRAHAT HOTI HAI JAB SHAM DHALE DARWAJE PER KOI BHI AAHAT HOTI HAI
JAANE WOH DIN KAB BEET GAYE SHAMMA MAHFIL KI RAUNAQ THI AB TO BHISHAN SANNATE MAIN SHAMMA KI LAU BHI ROTI HAI
AAZAD PARINDE JAB UD KAR PANKHON KI SHAN DIKHATE HAIN ANHONI KI ASHANKA SE MAN MAIN AKULAHAT HOTI HAI
VAHASHIPAN KA YEH AALAM HAI YUVAKON KI MAST JAWANI BHI DAHSHAT KE SARD ANDHERON MAIN APNI GARMAHAT KHOTI HAI
AATANKVAD KA YE DANAV MANAVATA KO KHA JAYEGA YEH SOCH SOCH KAR KUDRAT BHI SHABNAM KE AANSU ROTI HAI
SARVESH RASTOGI PHONE: 9810391523
कैसे बतलाएं मत पूछो कितनी घबराहट होती है जब शाम ढले दरवाज़े पर कोई भी आहट होती है
जाने वो दिन कब बीत गए शम्मा महफिल की रौनक थी अब तो भीषण सन्नाटे में शम्मा की लौ भी रोती है
आजाद परिंदे जब उड़कर पंखों की शान दिखाते हैं अनहोनी की आशंका से मन में अकुलाहट होती है
वहशीपन का ये आलम है युवकों की मस्त जवानी भी दहशत के सर्द अंधेरों में अपनी गरमाहट खोती है
आतंकवाद का ये दानव मानवता को खा जायेगा ये सोच सोच कर कुदरत भी शबनम के आंसू रोती है
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #1 on: March 18, 2009, 09:12:45 AM » |
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Welocme to Yoindia Sarvesh.
Very nice written . Keep writing..........
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #2 on: March 18, 2009, 10:54:06 AM » |
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Kya baat Sarvesh Bohat Bohat khoob jitni tareef ki jaye kam hain bohat hi mazboot aur sachchci cheeze pesh ki hain aapne........
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TOUSIFSHAIKHH
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«Reply #3 on: March 18, 2009, 11:00:58 AM » |
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Nice
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Roja
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«Reply #4 on: March 18, 2009, 11:21:46 AM » |
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KAISE BATLAEN MAT PUCHHO KITNI GHABRAHAT HOTI HAI JAB SHAM DHALE DARWAJE PER KOI BHI AAHAT HOTI HAI JAANE WOH DIN KAB BEET GAYE SHAMMA MAHFIL KI RAUNAQ THI AB TO BHISHAN SANNATE MAIN SHAMMA KI LAU BHI ROTI HAI AAZAD PARINDE JAB UD KAR PANKHON KI SHAN DIKHATE HAIN ANHONI KI ASHANKA SE MAN MAIN AKULAHAT HOTI HAI VAHASHIPAN KA YEH AALAM HAI YUVAKON KI MAST JAWANI BHI DAHSHAT KE SARD ANDHERON MAIN APNI GARMAHAT KHOTI HAI AATANKVAD KA YE DANAV MANAVATA KO KHA JAYEGA YEH SOCH SOCH KAR KUDRAT BHI SHABNAM KE AANSU ROTI HAI
BY SARVESH RASTOGI
Wah... bahut khoob...Rastogi sb... Welcome to Yoindia
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #5 on: March 19, 2009, 05:07:15 AM » |
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welcome to yoindia sarvesh bohut acha likha hai aapne keep writing like this
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #6 on: March 23, 2009, 01:57:37 AM » |
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Welcome to Yoindia Sarvesh Ji Bahut khoob likha hai aapne bas issi tarah likhte rahiye
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SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #7 on: March 24, 2009, 05:11:18 PM » |
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Welocme to Yoindia Sarvesh.
Very nice written . Keep writing..........
THANKS A LOT SARVESH RASTOGI
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SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #8 on: March 24, 2009, 05:12:27 PM » |
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Kya baat Sarvesh Bohat Bohat khoob jitni tareef ki jaye kam hain bohat hi mazboot aur sachchci cheeze pesh ki hain aapne........
BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA SARVESH RASTOGI
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SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #9 on: March 24, 2009, 05:15:40 PM » |
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Nice
Nice
SHUKRIYA SARVESH RASTOGI
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #10 on: March 24, 2009, 05:16:48 PM » |
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Wah Sarvesh, bahut acchaa lag raha hai aap ki sari poems padney koh, bahut khoob likhtey ho aap, wah.. yuhi likhtey rahiyeh
jasbir singh
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SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #11 on: March 24, 2009, 05:21:35 PM » |
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Wah... bahut khoob...Rastogi sb... Welcome to Yoindia
BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA SARVESH RASTOGI
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SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #12 on: March 24, 2009, 05:22:39 PM » |
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welcome to yoindia sarvesh bohut acha likha hai aapne keep writing like this THANKS FOR ENCOURAGEMENT SARVESH RASTOGI
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SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #13 on: March 24, 2009, 05:23:47 PM » |
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Welcome to Yoindia Sarvesh Ji Bahut khoob likha hai aapne bas issi tarah likhte rahiye
THANKS FOR YOUR WORDS OF ENCOURAGEMENT SARVESH RASTOGI
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SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #14 on: April 30, 2009, 04:02:20 PM » |
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Shukriya Jasbir Ji SARVESH RASTOGI
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