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«Reply #15 on: March 29, 2011, 12:12:00 PM » |
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«Reply #16 on: March 29, 2011, 01:17:22 PM » |
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Udaasi Ko Tum Ne MiTaayaa Toh
Aake Mere Kamre Ko Sajaayaa Toh ...
Uske Apnepan Se Dar Lagtaa Hai
KahiN Woh Ho Gaya Paraayaa Toh ...
MuddatoN Se KhaDhe Iss PeDh Ne
Dhoop Se LogoN Ko Bachaayaa Toh ...
Jo RooTh Kar Ghar Se Gayaa Thaa
Kal Kaa Bhuulaa Aaj Laut Aayaa Toh ...
UsNe Muflisii MeN Kaat Ke Pe'T
Rehne Ko Ek Makaan Banaayaa Toh ...
Hawaa Se Aur Sha'rT Naa Lagaa " Naresh"
Bujhe Chiiraagh Ko Jala Nahi Paayaa Toh ... bahut kamaal ki ghazal lagi hume ..... Naresh Ji !! |
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Anshumali
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«Reply #17 on: March 30, 2011, 02:56:50 AM » |
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nice narashji.  Tamanna Ji ! aapke saath aur pasandegi kaa bahut bahut shukriya .. ! |
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«Reply #18 on: March 30, 2011, 02:18:29 PM » |
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Bahut khooooooooooob ...... Naresh JI !
Behad Shukriya ...... Samaantaa Ji ! |
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«Reply #19 on: April 01, 2011, 05:08:52 PM » |
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«Reply #21 on: April 02, 2011, 04:15:29 AM » |
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bahut badhiya naresh ji..
dher sari daad~
Behad Shukriya .... Abhi Ji !!! |
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«Reply #23 on: April 02, 2011, 10:03:23 PM » |
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bahut bahut sundar nareshji........ dusra aur aakhri sher bahut hi sundar lage...... wese sabhi achhe hain.... daad Behad shukriya .. Manjum Ji ! aapke saath .. pasandegi aur hauslaa afzaai kaa ... khush rahen ... ! duaaoN ke saath ... ! |
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«Reply #24 on: April 03, 2011, 04:07:49 AM » |
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Bahut khoob naresh ji...
Bahut bahut shukriya ...... Broken Ji !!!!!! |
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«Reply #25 on: April 03, 2011, 11:25:07 AM » |
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Udaasi Ko Tum Ne MiTaayaa Toh
Aake Mere Kamre Ko Sajaayaa Toh ...
Uske Apnepan Se Dar Lagtaa Hai
KahiN Woh Ho Gaya Paraayaa Toh ...
MuddatoN Se KhaDhe Iss PeDh Ne
Dhoop Se LogoN Ko Bachaayaa Toh ...
Jo RooTh Kar Ghar Se Gayaa Thaa
Kal Kaa Bhuulaa Aaj Laut Aayaa Toh ...
UsNe Muflisii MeN Kaat Ke Pe'T
Rehne Ko Ek Makaan Banaayaa Toh ...
Hawaa Se Aur Sha'rT Naa Lagaa " Naresh"
Bujhe Chiiraagh Ko Jala Nahi Paayaa Toh ... bahut achchaa likha hai .... naresh ji |
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«Reply #26 on: April 03, 2011, 12:55:37 PM » |
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Udaasi Ko Tum Ne MiTaayaa Toh
Aake Mere Kamre Ko Sajaayaa Toh ...
Uske Apnepan Se Dar Lagtaa Hai
KahiN Woh Ho Gaya Paraayaa Toh ...
MuddatoN Se KhaDhe Iss PeDh Ne
Dhoop Se LogoN Ko Bachaayaa Toh ...
Jo RooTh Kar Ghar Se Gayaa Thaa
Kal Kaa Bhuulaa Aaj Laut Aayaa Toh ...
UsNe Muflisii MeN Kaat Ke Pe'T
Rehne Ko Ek Makaan Banaayaa Toh ...
Hawaa Se Aur Sha'rT Naa Lagaa " Naresh"
Bujhe Chiiraagh Ko Jala Nahi Paayaa Toh ... bahut khoob anshu ji |
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«Reply #27 on: April 04, 2011, 03:32:51 PM » |
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bahut umda kalaam anshu ji
Behad Shukriya .... adil bechain ji !!! |
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«Reply #28 on: April 04, 2011, 05:20:38 PM » |
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wahhhhhhhhhhhhhh
just mindblowing words naresh ji ..........dil me utar gaya ek ek lafj is poetry ka ....it is mindblowing ......har baar ki tarah is baar bhi behtareen peshkash he apki........superb......
naresh ji ek jagah samaj nahi pa raha hu pls ise clear kare.....
uske apnepan se dar lataa hai ya dar lagta he ?........
i think it is typing mistake "g" is not typed ....if not then clear me meaning of this particular line .....
Bahut Bahtu Shukriya .. Matrix Ji !! aapki pasandegi aur dilee daad kaa ... saath hi hauslaa afzaai kaa bhi ... aise hi aate rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... ! duaaon ke saath ... ! |
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«Reply #29 on: April 05, 2011, 06:26:44 PM » |
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on eTI community..
