Kal shab aik ajeeb kwaab dekha tha!

by mazHur on January 27, 2011, 06:09:57 PM
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Kal shab aik ajeeb kwaab dekha  tha!
Khasta jaan marhoom shabaab dekha tha!

Chor kar chala gaya yaadein jo waqt ke saath
Wohi ujra chaman wohi masla gulaab dekha tha

Chaar gunahoan ki saza daayammi dozakh
Ay farishto kabhi tum ne hisaab dekha tha?

 mein jo peeta hoon toe  faqat  khuda kay leeay
hoash mein kum kum  us-say   janaab dekha tha.

kabhi Piyar ki shabnam ne dil ke leeay bosay?
Bataa, gulshan mein khiltay gulaab dekha tha?

(free verse))
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«Reply #1 on: January 27, 2011, 07:14:59 PM »
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kamaal ka nagma hai ji.
aapka style lajawaab hai.
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«Reply #2 on: January 27, 2011, 07:24:18 PM »
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Quote from: mazHur on January 27, 2011, 06:09:57 PM
Kal shab aik ajeeb kwaab dekha  tha!
Khasta jaan marhoom shabaab dekha tha!

Chor kar chala gaya yaadein jo waqt ke saath
Wohi ujra chaman wohi masla gulaab dekha tha

Chaar gunahoan ki saza daayammi dozakh
Ay farishto kabhi tum ne hisaab dekha tha?

 mein jo peeta hoon toe  faqat  khuda kay leeay
hoash mein kum kum  us-say   janaab dekha tha.

kabhi Piyar ki shabnam ne dil ke leeay bosay?
Bataa, gulshan mein khiltay gulaab dekha tha?

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kya khoob mazhur sahab daad qabul karen
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«Reply #3 on: January 27, 2011, 09:04:51 PM »
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Bahut Khub
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«Reply #4 on: January 28, 2011, 05:03:26 AM »
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Nice one....
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«Reply #5 on: January 28, 2011, 06:31:08 PM »
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Very good hai ji....... Applause Applause Applause

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Quote from: mazHur on January 27, 2011, 06:09:57 PM
Kal shab aik ajeeb kwaab dekha  tha!
Khasta jaan marhoom shabaab dekha tha!

Chor kar chala gaya yaadein jo waqt ke saath
Wohi ujra chaman wohi masla gulaab dekha tha

Chaar gunahoan ki saza daayammi dozakh
Ay farishto kabhi tum ne hisaab dekha tha?

 mein jo peeta hoon toe  faqat  khuda kay leeay
hoash mein kum kum  us-say   janaab dekha tha.

kabhi Piyar ki shabnam ne dil ke leeay bosay?
Bataa, gulshan mein khiltay gulaab dekha tha?

(free verse))
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«Reply #6 on: February 01, 2011, 03:01:21 AM »
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bahoot hi khoob likha janab
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«Reply #7 on: February 20, 2011, 09:14:34 PM »
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Quote from: mazHur on January 27, 2011, 06:09:57 PM
Kal shab aik ajeeb kwaab dekha  tha!
Khasta jaan marhoom shabaab dekha tha!

Chor kar chala gaya yaadein jo waqt ke saath
Wohi ujra chaman wohi masla gulaab dekha tha

Chaar gunahoan ki saza daayammi dozakh
Ay farishto kabhi tum ne hisaab dekha tha?

 mein jo peeta hoon toe  faqat  khuda kay leeay
hoash mein kum kum  us-say   janaab dekha tha.

kabhi Piyar ki shabnam ne dil ke leeay bosay?
Bataa, gulshan mein khiltay gulaab dekha tha?

(free verse))


naaaaaaaaaaaaaice one
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«Reply #8 on: February 21, 2011, 07:26:25 AM »
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aap sab ka bahut bahut shukria:)
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